SwaSan FF : Misplaced Revenge Updated Chapter 7 P 12 ( 7/2/17) - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
its getthing interesting with each chp!! swara hv 2 kids & is isha kapoor?? 😲 really want to knw the mystry
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Read all updated parts in a one go..
Superb concept..
Nice written
Very interesting nd intriguing
Update soon
Pls pm me for ur update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Swathy dear...
Interesting nicely written...plot is great...hmmm..suspense im sooo excited..read all 3 chapters together ...loved it...
Will wait for story to unfold... eager to know what sansku did to swara???

Update soon...

Talia
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54


I will be posting new chapter soon .. Sorry for such short update will try to make big ones in future.

Chapter 4

You can't rewrite the past. It had happened and you live with it the memories the pain and everything.

She had just noticed him and stopped singing "Hey why did you stop singing I was enjoying it a lot." He smiled at her and continued "So you are the didi who teaches music here. Hi I am Sanskar and you are?"

"Swara. Swara Gadodia"

"So Miss Swara , do you just teach music here or do something else also for living ."

Sanskar remembered the very first conversation he had with Swara. He remembered her polka dot shirt and the skirt with elephant prints. She had fought with the kids for the chocolates he had with him.

"Sanskar bhai , you haven't met Swara didi before. She comes here every week."
"Is it Swara you comes here every week and we never met? Such beautiful girl was right in front of me and I never saw her. Then Sanskar Maheswari is losing his style. Will you marry me Swara?"

Swara blushed and tried to move away from there. Sanskar stopped her and said "Hey I was just joking. No not about the beautiful part but the marrying part. I know Miss Gadodia is way out of league for a Maheswari . So will you come with me for a coffee." he asked her in flirting manner.

"Mr. Maheswari though I would love to have a coffee with you sadly I have to reach home before 6. Next time may be." A blushing Swara told him.

After that it became a routine he reached the orphanage every week when Swara was there. Her songs always tugged his heart, there was always a pain, as if she was wishing for someone or something as if she was not the spoilt pampered princess of Shekar Gadodia as if she didn't had everything she need given to her as if she was not born with a silver spoon in mouth. How wrong he was in judging her? It was too late when he understood the full story.

Sanskar was sitting in the balcony with Swara's Photo in his hand" Sanskar you are sitting here. Come inside. Raat bahot ho chukka hai. Yeh kya hai . Swara's DChora tu bhool ja. Jo huva so huva. We can't change the past. " Sujatha told Sansakar.

"Ma I had my chance, and sometimes in life, there are no second chances. But I think the fate is giving me a second chance, that I have not lost everything like I thought ma. I think .. I think.. My Swara is alive Ma."

Edited by SwathyS - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dear Swathy,

Chapter 4 gave a tantalising glimpse of how Swara and Sanskaar met - he is mesmerised by her singing though her songs have a tinge of melancholy in them. And a lovely humour in the very introduction - not desperate, not overbearing, just right.So Swara is born to very rich family and Sanskaar judged her wrongly and hurt her.

It more than five years and he is unable to forget her and when he finds out that she is alive he believes life has given him a second chance.

Your updates are short but sweet and leave me eager for more.

Nyna
Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I'll unres ASAP. Have a lot pending to unres.


Edited by Sree8410 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Nice Update..
Swasan first meet was lovely..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dear Swathy,
Unres first post above😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Swathy...
Nice update..little short but enjoyed it...flirting sansku i adored...im soo curious to know..what exactly sansku did to her...will wait ..update soon..

Talia
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
beautiful update dr really want to knw whts went wrong..ll b waiting for the next part

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