Swasan/Sanskar OS ::::Mujhe Teri Jarurat Hai......{please read}.. - Page 6

Originally posted by: sneharay

Awesome..

Thanks sneha😳

Originally posted by: swakriti

You are such a brilliant writer kriti.
You have so beautifully shown sanskaar's vulnerable state...i would so love to see something like that in the show.
Thank you for such a beautiful storystory 😊

Thanks for the compliment pari 😳...but there are so many brilliant writers here I have just started 😃...but thanks for this😳...come at AT na...😃...u dint come after that day...glad u liked the story and thanks for lovely comment😳

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Awesome :)

Beautifully written :)

Damn emotional :(

Thanks dear...glad u liked it😃😃

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hey Kirti 🤗

What a heartrending and truly striking OS. Sanskaar's pain literally flies off the page and hits you square between the eyes. The initial terror for her life replaced by that gratitude she is alive, and then the crashing to hell when he sees she doesn't remember him was enough to smash my poor heart 😭😭. Very powerfully expressed and you could see you wrote it from the heart. Nice work! 😊

Love,

Shru x

Shruti di🤗...thanks for the lovely comment and I am really glad u liked it😳...I am a great fan of your writing and I really love it seeing your comment on any work of mine...just make my day...😳...thanks for lovely comment and sorry for smashing your heart😭...but glad that I could express it well...😳😳...your comment means a lot😳...again thaks for it...😃

Originally posted by: sia08

superb 👍🏼

it s proven without pain no lovestory is interesting to watch

and VK can do justice to these type of role completely

we will feel snskaar's pain with him

ready to see loverboy sankaar making swara fall in love with him once again

Thanks sia...glad u liked it😳...yeah pain is so imp in every love story...I am too ready for enjoying swasan love story all over again...I hope cvs make it exciting😃

Originally posted by: Kaveetha

Beautiful... Heart touching os..

I wish esahi kuch serial me bi hojaaye..

Superb work. Well done yaar..

Thanks kaveetha...glad u liked it...😃😃...thanks for lovely comment😳

Originally posted by: soumi93

Keerti 🤗
Dear its d one na which u and i are writting in At 😛
Its awesome i must say.
i too want zaroorat on sanky in this situation...
Its too emotional...😭
I can feel his pain,helplessness,agony,suffocation
I wish cvs did gv us such type of scene...I am sure vk will nail it 😳
Well written dear...
Love u ❤️

Soumi🤗...atleast u commented on it😆...but thanks dear for commenting...glad u liked it😳😳
yeah it is like that but I have written it according to song...hope it turned out good😛😛...I too want our cvs to give such scenes to VK ...he will surely nail it😳...and we will get to drool over him😆😆

love u too😳😳...u know na...😉

Originally posted by: Goldie93

Aww..awsum..too emotional. .cud feel Sanskaar's Pain ..plz write few more parts hw sanskaar cares fr swara n hw he suffers.all the pain bt yet tries to cure swara..in short his journey hw he cures Swara n His Pain while doing all these n at end Obiviously A Happy Ending wala Part..think abt it..

Thanks goldie...glad u liked it😳😳...thanks for lovely comment...😃😃...about continuing...I cant involve in ss...too lazy so sorry for that but will try to write one happy ending part...whenever I get time😃😃

Hi Kirti dear...

Originally posted by: pakh

No need to say sorry aheli😳...I understand...exams are too stressful ...I know...and aisi badi badi forums me aisi choti choti batein hoti rahati hain...and after it I am sure u will never forget me🤣...so accha hua😆😆...I know it will be too painful see sanky in pain.😭...but I will cry and will enjoy by drooling VK...mujhe male leads ko rote dekhke maja aata hai😆😆...

Okay Kirti.😳😳 Nahi..I will never forget u and ur name now..😆😉 Oh yeah! VK ko drool toh mai bhi karti hoon..😳😉😆