Swasan/Sanskar OS ::::Mujhe Teri Jarurat Hai......{please read}..

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BarkhaSingh123

@BarkhaSingh123

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Hi pankh, thank you for the PM

This was so emotional

I just cried ..😭

The pain of sanskaar was so nicely portrayed here

And the song omg I must suited the situation perfectly..😭

Well if u want u can continue it as well ..

❤️

Harshita

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kamila.

@Seriously.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Kriti.. Darling awesome OS.. I never read any kinda story... Which written according to serial.. But this is different... I'm happy if this happen in. Serial... No SWA lak... Swasan intense romance.. Falling in love all over again...

Beautifully written sissy... Loved it... Soo painful..

With love...

Kam...

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Ginny potter

@Bluehue

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

kirti... my heart is broken...!your story is so painful and at the same time it is soo beautiful. 😭 I was about to cry but couldn't as I am with my mom. I don't know how I will see sanskar in so much pain. poor sanskar. 😭 I can go on and on about sanskar's pain...but the way you had written his pain is so amazing 👏 loved it.

Edited by Helee - 9 years ago

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

This is amazing Kirti. Every moment is so beautifully portrayed. I wish they show something like this in the episode. You are very talented. Keep writing more 😃

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: pakh
😲😲😲...Aheli u really dont know my name😲😲...I am kirti...😭😭...we discussed about your name...😆😲

Thanks for reading this and commenting...I too hate ML track but if this means a good swasan love story all over again I am up for it...But yeah sanskar will suffer alot in between all this but I love to see him crying and will cry too along with him...😭...my sadist heart u know...again thanks for commenting...😳...and not remebering me😆😆

Oh I'm really sorry dear Kirti.😳 Actually my exams r going on. So due to stress, ur name completely went out of my mind. I'm really sorry Kirti dear. Plzz forgive this bhulakkar😆 for not remembering ur name.😳 This exam stress..!! Ughh..!! Making me forget everything!!🤢😆 Yeah! Even I want to watch their love story all over again.😳 But my poor heart can't watch my Sanky crying..!!😭😆

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Kiara.25

@Kiara.25

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Hi kriti..

Loved the os...

Its simply beautiful.. his pain was visible in ur writing.

So apt song...loved it..

Would like to see a part where swara will gain her memory n sanskar tell her how badly he needed her.

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Love u kirti.u mk it awsome.
Mujhe rula dia.
&u haked my mind.
I imagind same thng,in pain sanskar himslf try 2 find swara,gonna fall himslf bt sm1 hold him.
&mujhe teri zarurat ha sng z perfect 4 ths moment.lk cherry on d top.
Love it

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Pari

@Pari_1995

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

You are such a brilliant writer kriti.
You have so beautifully shown sanskaar's vulnerable state...i would so love to see something like that in the show.
Thank you for such a beautiful storystory 😊

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sumana.shesha

@sumana.shesha

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Awesome :)

Beautifully written :)

Damn emotional :(

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Hey Kirti 🤗

What a heartrending and truly striking OS. Sanskaar's pain literally flies off the page and hits you square between the eyes. The initial terror for her life replaced by that gratitude she is alive, and then the crashing to hell when he sees she doesn't remember him was enough to smash my poor heart 😭😭. Very powerfully expressed and you could see you wrote it from the heart. Nice work! 😊

Love,

Shru x

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