Love Ya Betrayal SwaSan SS [ Part 20 Epilogue ] Updated on [Page 57 ] - Page 27

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Awesome update Goldie babes.. Can I call you like that..

With love...

Kam..


Thnks alot 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thnks 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Teddy94

Awesome part...

Cont soon
Thnx for the pm


Thnks 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
I liked the fact that you made Swara a bussines woman. Her brother was her strenght and now she has become his strenght. Nice parallel. Swasan are so amazing. they care for eachother even when they hate eachother.
At first when reading the chapter in which they reached Mumbai I thought they were married and that Sanskar had married and dichted Swara just to take revenge from Laksh for breaking ties with Ragini 😆
thanks a lot for all your PMs and sorry for not replying earlier but the work at the office barely gives me time to eat so I can't come to IF as often I want to.
Can't wait to see what happens next in the story 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: chibi_deea

I liked the fact that you made Swara a bussines woman. Her brother was her strenght and now she has become his strenght. Nice parallel. Swasan are so amazing. they care for eachother even when they hate eachother.

At first when reading the chapter in which they reached Mumbai I thought they were married and that Sanskar had married and dichted Swara just to take revenge from Laksh for breaking ties with Ragini 😆
thanks a lot for all your PMs and sorry for not replying earlier but the work at the office barely gives me time to eat so I can't come to IF as often I want to.
Can't wait to see what happens next in the story 😊


Firstly Thnks alot fr Replying even after being Bzy n Secondly thnks fr Liking my Wrk..it means alot..😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ap bahout suspens rakh te ho, itna to koi serial me bhi nahi rakhte he
Please update fast.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Read 2parts in one go...
Swasan scene superb...emotional..
Pls let sanskar know the truth..
Clear the mu..,
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Goldie,😊
Got pm of only part 12. Not of part 11 and 13. But no problem. Read all the three parts together. Loved it. SwaSan scenes r emotional, passionate, sad, happy, teasing, etc.😳 Plzz let Sanskar know the truth of his evil Laado!!!😡 Plzz clear the MU between SwaSan and SanLak soon.😭 Plzz update the next part soon. Plzz pm me the next part.😳
With love,
Aheli.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello Frnds M Bak wid My New Account Agn..Hope U r Happy to see Me Bak n Nw Firstly
Thnks fr The Wonderful Response.M Really Happy seeing My Wrk is Loved by U All..Thnks n Keep Supporting My Wrk..Nw here is da Nxt Part of #Love_Ya_Betrayal.Hope U will Like It :).Do Leave ur Valuable Comments in the Comment Box Below n Let Me knw Ur Views abt Todyz Part :).


Recap : SwaSan Nokh Jhokh n Romance..


Love Ya Betrayal


PART 14


Soon Both Broke their Eyelock was Smiling n Admiring Eachother's Awkwardness Thinking abt their Recent Spcl Moments .As They Parted Ways Both were Really Cleared abt Eachother's Feelings n was Desperate to Confess their Feelings to Eachother wid Open Heart Forgetting abt their Past n Wanted to Strt their Life wid All Fresh n A New Thots abt their Future Life..

Sanskaar : ( Smiles ) Thnks..U still remember m Allegeric to Chillies..

Swara : ( Fumbles ) Haa..hw cud i forget it. Jo log mere Dil ke Khareeb hote hai unke har cheez i remember..n ( Unknowingly ) U Believe it or nt .U r the One of them who r Near to My Heart.. ( Smiles Unknowingly )

Sanskaar : ( Smiles bt Hides ) Kya ?? Wat do U Mean ??

Swara : ( Shocked n Comes Bak in Senses ) Wwoh..Mera Matlab..U r My Frnd..even though we have some Hard Feelings agnst Eachother fr nw bt fr the Sake of Humanity n Our Once Upon a Time Frndship its My Duty to Help U..

Sanskaar : Hmm . Anywyz Leave it all.i wanna Talk something Imp wid U..Come Sit wid Me .. ( Holds Swara's Hands n Makes Her Sit on Chair ) Dekho Swara..i knw in these Past Few Months everything b/w us has Chngd..infact coz of Laado's n Laksh's Fight Our Frndship has also Effected..bt nw since after 3 Months we have Met n we have Spent some Time together I Have Understood One thing ki wat all happened b/w Laado n Laksh uske peeche its nt ur Hand..i dnt knw wat Happened in Past bt I cn Assure U that I will Help U in Uniting Laado n Laksh. ( Sees Swara's Expressions ) Yes Swara..M wid U..We both together will Fix Everything..I Promise..

As Sanskaar was Talking His Heart to Swara,Swara Felt Overwhelmed n Had Tears in Her Eyes n Hugged Sanskaar Tightly as Soon as She Heard Sanskaar's Words n Cried n Confessed Her Feelings wich Made Sanskaar Shocked at First bt Later He Smiled n Hugged Swara Bak More Tightly

Swara : ( Teary Eyes n Hugged Sanskaar Tightly ) Thnks Alot Sanskaar..Thnks alot fr Understandiny n Trusting Me..Bhale U took Soo Much Time in Understanding Me bt m Happy ki U Trusted Me n dats More Imp fr Me.n Today wen everything is Agn Bak to Normal b/w Us i cnt wait to Confess.My Feelings fr U Sanskaar.. ( Release da Hug n sees Sanskaar's Expressions ) Haa Feelings Sanskaar..I dnt hw u will react after Hearing this..bt I cnt Control anymore.since Past 3 Months i have Supressed these Feelings Inside My Heart..bt Today after Hearing U i cnt Control Anymore..Main tumhe yeh baath uss Din hi batadena chahti thi bt All of A Sudden itna sab kuch hogaya tha ki i cud nt Tell U abt My Feelings..Bt Today M gonna Confess My Feelings fr U..Main tumse Bahut Pyaar karti hu Sanskaar..Yes I LOVE U Mr SANSKAAR MAHESHWARI.
Ur Banderiya Loves Her Mr Khadus Soo Much.Will U Accept Me i.e Ur Banderiya in Ur Life nt as A Frnd bt as A Life Partner
Bolo na Sanskaar..Plzz Tell Me..Will U Accept Me ??...( Sees Sanskaar's Shocked Expressions n Becomes Sad )

Sanskaar who was Listening to Swara wid Full Interest was Totally Shocked n Surprised Hearing Swara's Confession n Seeing Sanskaar's Expressions Swara Understood n Becomes Sad n Tears Strtd Rolling frm Her Eyes bt She somehow Composed Herself n Strtd to Go to Her Room bt As She was abt to go A Pair of Hands Stopped Her to go n Hugged Her Immediately wid Teary Eyes..

Swara : ( Teary Eyes bt Composed Herself ) Its Ok Sanskaar..i understand..wat i feel fr U its My Wish bt it doesnt mean U too will feel da same fr Me..Its Completely Fine.. ( Wipes Her Tears ) Anywyz U go n Take Rest..I will go to My Room..i have some Office Wrk...Bye..

Sanskaar : ( Smiles n Holds Swara's Hands ) Apne Mr Khadus ka Jawab bina sune hi U r Going ..Dnt U wanna Hear My Answer ?? ( Smiles Naughtily )

Swara : ( Shocked n Turned Bak ) Wwat do u mean ?? I knw ur Answer will be No..So wats da Use.. ( Smiles Faintly ) so it's Better fr Me nt to Listen Ur Answer..

Sanskaar : ( Smiles Naughtily ) Who Said My Answer will be ( Comes Closer to Swara ) No..I thot to Tell YES bt b4 Listening My Answer U Strtd Assuiming..its Ok..U go to ur Room ..

Swara : ( Did nt Realize ) Haa.Toh..dekha.i knew U will tell No dats Y I was.. ( Suddenly Realised ) WAT ?? Kya kaha tumne ?? U decided to Tell Yes (.Happy n Hugged Sanskaar Excitedly ) Omg !! I cnt Believe My Ears..Mr Khadus Accepted A Banderiya..Wow..M Soo Happy ( Kisses Sanskaar's Cheeks Excitedly )

Sanskaar : ( Surprised n Touches His Cheeks ) Omg..Swara..agr if i knew ki aise Suddenly Accept karne se i wud have got A Kiss frm U den main bahut pehle hi Bina tumhare bole bina Accept karleta toh i wud have got Mny as A Bonus..Ryt Miss Banderiya ( Smiles Naughtily n Moves More Closer )

Swara: ( Blushes ) Sanskaar..Stop Plz..We Jst nw Confessed Our Feelings n U Strtd..

Sanskaar : ( Smiles Naughtily ) Haa Coz M Sanskaar Maheshwari..N I Never Delay My Wrk Once its Confirmed..Understood? ( Smiles More Naughtily n Moves Towards Swara's )

As Sanskaar was Moving Ahead towards Swara,Swara Kept on Moving Bakwards while Breathing Heavily n Once She Reached.at the End of the Hall She was Blocked n was Pinned to the Wall by Sanskaar's Two Strong Arms on Both Her Sides..All She cud do was Only Breath Heavily n Stare Sanskaar's Eyes Filled wid Shyness n Blushness..Soon seeing The Shyness in Swara's Eyes Sanskaar Strtd Leaning towards Swara n As He was Leaning Swara Pushed Sanskaar n Ran towards Her Room in Shyness wich Made Sanskaar Smile n Admire Her Shyness n Blushness..Soon He too Went to His Room while Smiling n Thinking abt His Feelings n The Future Days wid His Banderiya..

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Same Day Night

10PM..

It was Night n Both Swara n Sanskaar were in there Respective Rooms Lost in their Own World Thinking abt the Recent Few Moments while Smiling n Admiring their Recent Moments..

Swara's Room

Swara was in Her Room Jumpimg n n Dancing in Hee Room in Excitement n Happiness Thinking abt The Recent Happy Moments Spent wid Her Mr Khadus n was Lost in Her Own Deep Happy n Excitement Filled Thots n was Blabbering to Herself while Dancingn Jumping Like A Small Kid or Like A Banderiya ..

Swara : ( Happy n Jumping in Excitement ) Omg..M I Dreaming ?? My Mr Khadus is bak wid Me..I srsly cnt Believe it still..I mean Itni Jaldi Everything is Sorted Out..its Jst Unbelievable..Sanskaar ne Meri Baath manli..Srsly Awsum..M da Happiest Person in da World Right nw..Omg !! Yaahhooo..Kya Karu..I still cnt Believe..( Stops Jumping n Thinks ) Bhai ko Batau kya ?? He will be da Most Happiest Brother if I tell Him ..Haa Bhai ko Call karti hu ( Takes Her Mob n was abt to Call bt Stops in b/w ) Nhi..nt nw..I will Give Him A Surprise wen i Return to Kolkata Bak..Haa..This will be Right.. ( Giggles n Strts Jumping Agn ) Wowowow.. ( Sings n Jumps Like a Kid ) Aaj Main Uper..Aasmaan Neehe..Zaamana Peeche..Tell Me Oh Khuda..Abb Main Kya Karu..Chalu Siddhi Ya Oolti Chalu... ( Keeps On Jumping in Excitement )

As Swara was Singing n Jumping Like A Kid in Her Room,Her Room Door was Slightly Open n Everything What She was Doing was Seen Clearly n This What Exactly was Happening..A Pair of Eyes was Watching Swara Dancing n Singing Like A Kid..The Person Who was Watching Swara was None Other than Swara's Mr Khadus..Sanskaar was Passing By Swara's Room to Drink Water frm Kitchen Wen He Heard Some Voices frm Swara's Room at First He was Confused n Shocked Hearing those Voices frm Swara's Room Feeling Worried n Tensed abt Swara bt Later after Hearing the Voice Carefully He Understood The Voice was of None Other of His Banderiya which Made Him Smile n Admire Her Cute n Child Like Voice..

Sanskaar : ( Confused ) Yeh Awaaz ?? Frm Where does it Coming ?? ( Sees Swara's Room ) I guess this is Coming frm Swara's Room ..bt What is She doing at This Time wid Loud Music n Noise...( Smiles ) Pagaal Hai yeh..Let Me go n Chk..

By Hearing those Voices Sasnkaar was Automatically Dragged to Her Room wid A Admiring Smile on His Face..As He Reached Near Swara's Room He was Awstruck n Mesmerized seeing Swara His Banderiya Dancing,Singing n Jumping Like a Kid in Excitement Forgetting All Her Tensions n Worriedness..

Sanskaar : ( Surprised n Mesmerized ) Wow..Amzing..Pagaal hai yeh Ladki..She is Really A Banderiya..Bt Hai Cute yeh Banderiya.. ( Smiles Lovingly )

Seeing Swara Enjoying Her Excitement Full Heartedly Sanskaar was Automatically Dragged Inside Her Room n As He Entered Her Room Swara while Dancing was abt to Fall by Tripping Her Legs to A Bed Corner bt at A Nick of Time Sanskaar Holded Swara by Her Waist n was Lost in Her Beautiful Yet Closed Eyes wich were Closed due to Fear of Falling..While Holding Swara Sanskaar Lost His Balance n As A Result Both Swara n Sanskaar Fell on Bed wid Sanskaar on Top of Swara n Swara Holding Sanskaar's Shirt Tightly...

SwaSan : ( Unison ) Aawowow..

Hai Kya Yeh Jo Tere Mere Darmiyaan Hai
Andekhi Ansuni Koi Dastaan Hai
Hai Kya Yeh Jo Tere Mere Darmiyaan Hai
Andekhi Ansuni Koi Dastaan Hai

Lagne Lagi, Ab Zindagi Khaali
Hai Meri Lagne Lagi Har Saans Bhi Khaali

As Both Swara n Sanskaar were on Bed in An Awkward Position Both were Staring Eachother Romantically n were Lost in Eachother's Love Filled Eyes Forgetting abt their Position n Time..

Bin Tere, Bin Tere, Bin Tere
Koi Khalish Hai Hawayon Mein Bin Tere

Bin Tere, Bin Tere, Bin Tere
Koi Khalish Hai Hawayon Mein Bin Tere

While Staring Eachother Romantically Sanskaar Leaned Towards Swara's Lips Lovingly Unknowingly widout Realizing Wat He was abt to do Making Swara Clutching Sanskaar's Shirt Tightly by Closing Her Eyes in Shyness..As Sanskaar was abt to Grab Her Rosy Lips Swara Blushed n Strtd Breathing Heavily bt Composing Herself She Pushed Sanskaar n Ran Towards The Kitchen while Blushing n Smiling in Shyness Leaving Sanskaar All Alone in Her Room Admiring Her Shyness n Blushness..

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Kitchen

After Pushing Sanskaar,Swara Ran towards The Kitchen while Blushing Like A Red Tomato n was Breathing Heavily Thinking abt The Recent Close Moment b/w Her n Sanskaar..As She was Standing Near A Fridge Facing Her Bak Towards The Door,Sanskaar Comes inside The Kitchen wid A Naughty Smile on His Face n Touched Swara's Bare Bak Sensuously n Made Her Turn towards Himself n Lifted Swara's Head wich was Facing Down due to Shyness towards Him by Holding Her Chin Sensuously making Swara Breathing Even More Heavily..Seeing Her Blushing n Breathing Heavily Sanskaar Smiled n Leaned Towards Her Rosy Lips Making Swara Closing Her Eyes in Shyness..

Lagne Lagi, Ab Zindagi Khaali
Hai Meri Lagne Lagi Har Saans Bhi Khaali

Seeing Sanskaar Leaning Towards Her Swara Closed Her Eyes n Clutched Sanskaar's Shirt Tightly Expecting A Kiss frm Sanskaar bt To Her Shock Swara Felt A Warm Kiss on Her Forehead n A Cool Air/Breeze Touching Her Bak Body wich Made Her Open Her Eyes in Shock..As She Opened Her Eyes She saw Sanskaar Leaving The Kitchen Taking A Water Bottle frm A Fridge Making Swara Full Shocked n Surprised Yet An Admiring n A Loving Smile Appeared on Her Face Lost in Her Own Thots..

Bin Tere, Bin Tere, Bin Tere
Koi Khalish Hai Hawayon Mein Bin Tere

Bin Tere, Bin Tere, Bin Tere
Koi Khalish Hai Hawayon Mein Bin Tere...

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Precap : Love Ya Betrayal..Keep Thinking n Keep Waiting ...

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Finally Guyz..Done wid Another Yet Crucial Part of #Love_Ya_Betrayal.Hope u All Liked It...Hope The SwaSan Scns were Described Well..Took A Long Time fr Describing These Scns..Hope it Reached to ur Expectations.If it does nt den Plzz Maaf Kardena..Waiting fr Ur Valuable Comments n Views.Do Leave ur Valuable Comments in the Comment Box Below n Let Me knw Ur Views abt Todyz Part :)...Thnk U :).

#Goldie

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Posted: 9 years ago
Res Goldie...

Unres... Yaar..

Goldie.. Awesome one.. I loved it.. Soo finally they both confessed their feelings... Ohh. Now.I'm eagarly Waiting who is going to betray.. My assumption is Sanskaar...

Their moments where awesome... You didn't disappoint me dear.. Their miss kiss 😆 .. Make them kiss next time...

With love...

Kam...
Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 9 years ago

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