SUR NA SAJE - RAGLAK FF Part 18 updated PG 27

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APUDEEP

@Apudip

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#161

hey Priya🤗

i read all the chapters today,it is beautiful.

THANKS😃

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#162

Dear Priya,

As usual, a beautiful update and especially the songs you select. (I love most of them). I know this is a very short comment, which in no ways does any justice to your lovely writing, but I am very hard pressed for time. I promise, once this hectic week is done (I hope it does not spill over to next week😭) I will give come back for a detailed comment.

love,

Nyna

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Shinning_AD

@Shinning_AD

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#163

Superb Priya 👏 Loved it

I love the way laksh is trying to win her back but more that the father-daughter bonding is great 😛😛 Please show more of them

I wonder how she'll react when she'll know he's her dad😉

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Acumen

@Acumen

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#164

Finally..i read the 4 updates that i missed...and i loved those...this is an extremely beautiful story...loving it a lot..waiting for the next update...Great Job Priya👍🏼

Edited by Pheunli - 9 years ago

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-Claptrap-

@-Claptrap-

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#165

Priyu 🤗

Another amazing update 😃

I have no idea about what and how he's gonna do in 30 minutes 😆

The past was so cute 😳 Waiting for the moment when Ragini comes back to MM 😉

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Diramylove

@Diramylove

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#166

Priya when are u updating the next part. .please update soon😳

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Jia Roh

@dewcute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#167

Lovely update!

Very well written

Waiting eagerly for the next part!

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Shinning_AD

@Shinning_AD

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#168

Please update next part soon 😃

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ShiriHoonMain

@ExoticDisaster

Viewbie

+ 23

Posted: 9 years ago

#169

Aww Priya di, awesome as usual! So sweet update, but you didn't pm me this time also. Plz do the next time.

Waiting what lakshya would do in 30 mins.