SUR NA SAJE - RAGLAK FF Part 18 updated PG 27 - Page 16

Aww!!! Once again came late...

Thanks a lot Ray, Sudhi, Ayushi, Senorita, Ck, Poorvi, Jiya...for all your comments 🤗

awesome update di,

i am too longing for more *haha*

waiting for next

Great update!!!

loved both chapters 😊

gosh sangram is so cute and mature

waiting for more such scenes

you make the story better with each

passing chapteer

update soon

Yes Ragini why are your cheeks so red ? 😆😆

It was a FANTABULOUS update Priya 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

their past n present are described so well by u tht I am falling in love with ur ff more n more

Laksh still has those effects on her

Laksh-Sargam bond is too cute

Ragu wants to go back to him n its so sweet

I wanted Laksh to be more naughty in his past incident 😳😳

I wanted to ask Ragu same ques : WHY ARE U SO RED ???? 😆😆😆

waiting for the nxt one😃

Hi guys...Part 16 updated

PART 16

MUMBAI 2016

Ragini was trying to put Sargam to sleep. Her day was extremely tiresome, with back to back recordings...but it was not just physically, she was mentally and emotionally disturbed by what was happening in her life. Everything was going out of control. She had cocooned herself with her daughter...and now a stranger (was he really a stranger?)...was forcibly barging in. She was feeling helpless ...angry...exasperated.

Sargam was extremely excited by the interaction with her "uncle" that afternoon, but since she had promised him, she couldn't tell her mother anything. Ragini, could sense an agitation in her daughter...she would never understand the reason though.

"Mamma...when will the Prince come back to take Cinderella?" she asked innocently

Ragini was taken aback..."The Prince will never come to take Cinderella...beta...I have already told you that before...he was angry with Cinderella...and ."

"But Mamma..." Sargam started...but suddenly she remembered that this was supposed to be a guarded secret...

"What Sargam?"...Ragini asked curiously

"Nothing mamma"...she replied..."Good night...can you please sing my favourite song"

"Gudiya rani, bitiya rani

Pariyon ki nagri se ekdin

Rajkunwar ji aayenge,

Mehelon mein le jaayenge"

Slowly she went off to sleep.

...

It was past midnight, she stood outside his room. Stealthily, she pushed the door open. He was sleeping...his face still had the innocence and boyish charm as five years back. She was lying to everybody...but could she lie to herself? His presence was affecting her...he still made her go weak on her knees...5 years...she had actually waited for him! For him...the one who damaged her life and literally mutilated her soul. The one...who literally thought her to be a murderer.

She felt a lump in her throat...her eyes were brimming...but she was resilient now...

With utmost caution she closed the door...careful not to awake him...this was the last thing that she wanted to do...and walked towards her room.

Aaj agar bhar aayin hain, boonndein baras jaayengi,
Kal kya pata inke liye, aankhen taras jaayengi
Jaane kab ghum hua, kahaan khoya
Ek aansoon chhupa ke rakha tha
Tujhse naraaz nahi zindagi...Hairaan hoon main

He lay on the bed and gave a lopsided smile. From the corner of his eyes, he had seen her standing at the door. He was hoping against hope that she would come in once...but she didn't.

He was sure about one thing...she still cared for him...but what about love? Probably, it was buried deep down somewhere...covered with anger, indignation, annoyance, irritation...he would have to remove these feelings...to dig out her concealed love.

"Din dhal jaaye hai, raat na jaay..

Tu toh na aaye, teri yaad sataaye..."

...

"Bye Uncle"...Sargam waved..."I am off to school"

"Do you need anything?" Ragini asked Lakshya..."I hope you are taking all your medicines as per schedule?"

"Yes Ragini...Thank you for the concern"...he replied..."I have a request"

Ragini nodded..."What request?"

"Can you spare me just 30 minutes...from your busy schedule today?" Lakshya asked eagerly

"Why?..." Ragini started..."I am extremely..."

"PLEASE Ragini...PLEASE"...he literally pleaded

"I will try...but cannot promise" Ragini said

"Thanks a lot...really...thanks" he said relieved...at least she said she would try, instead of refusing right away.

This was going to be a make or break situation for him.

KOLKATA 2011

As she reached down...Swara asked her..."What happened Ragini...are you okay...why are your cheeks so red?"

Ragini was dumbfounded...she had no reply..."Swara it's extremely humid today...am sweating a lot...and the fumes of the Havan ....everything together...may be the cause" she herself wasn't convinced with answer

She saw Lakshya coming down...and turned around to go...when Swara stopped her..."Where are you going?"

"Loads of work left Swara...need to go to the kitchen to help Ma out" she replied

"Oh...but Ragini...I guess the reason for your red cheeks...is coming down the stairs...at least spare a moment for that poor man" Swara said with a sly smile...and left

In a jiffy...Lakshya was standing in front of her...his eyes were blazing...they were piercing her soul.

"So my dear wife...you kiss me and run away...and don't even wait for the response?" he asked with a glint in his eyes...it was evident he was not in mood to leave her that easily

"Response?"...Ragini was stupefied...what was he talking about!!

"Yes response..." Lakshya was enjoying her discomfort...

"Look here...I am seriously busy now..." she said...not knowing what to say at that moment..."I have to go"...she made an effort to leave but Lakshya blocked her way.

"Seriously busy?"...he said in a sarcastic tone..."Well...I too am hell serious about the response...I hate taking something...without returning that person appropriately...and you know that very well...so now..."...he slowly held her by her shoulders...he looked around to check...nobody was there...apparently everyone was busy with the post puja arrangements

He gently kissed her forehead...Ragini was cursing herself...why on Earth did she kiss him...now what if...

Lakshya was savouring Ragini's response. She had turned as red as a beet, by then...but he could also make out that deep down she was enjoying it...as he was about proceed... Sharmistha called out

"Ragini..can you please come here?"

This was a saviour for Ragini..."Yes Ma...sure"...she looked at Lakshya...smiled and went away hastily.

Lakshya stood there like a statue...this girl was incredible...but that night...she would be back home...in their room...in his arms...where they found solace in each other.

A mischievous smile came over his face..."Wifey dear...the more you try to escape from your husband...the more difficult things are going to be for you...and I promise you that"

MUMBAI 2016

"...the more you try to escape from your me... The more difficult things are going to be for you...and I promise you that"...the words still echoed

To be continued...

Lovely update priya 😳

Priya another sweet update I love Sargam she is such a sweet child love get realtionship with her mum and Laksh winder what will happen when she finds out Laksh is her dad

Poor Ragini she is fighting herself she cannot stop loving him or hoping they get back together

I can't wait for the next update hope you post it soon