RAGLAK FF : Pyar to hona hi tha... C4Pg6 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very interesting
Please update soon

Hey if possible please update another RagLak FF too it's been a while you didn't updated it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting concept can't wait to read the story
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sudhi03

Very interesting

Please update soon

Hey if possible please update another RagLak FF too it's been a while you didn't updated it

thanks 😃
Sudhi don't worry dear, ab me wo bhi update karungi. actually mera interest chala gaya tha RAGLAK ki storyse q ki cvs kabhi laksh ko -ve aur raginiko -ve banate the lekin ab cvs ko akal aa gayi to me bhi apni stories puri karungi ab 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbb1

Interesting concept can't wait to read the story

thanks 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 1

At MM

At Dining table

Durgaprasad :Subah ke 9 baj gaye hain. Abhi tak Laksh breakfast karne nahi aaya?

Annapurna : Ji vo kal rat late aaya tha, isiliye abhi tak utha nahi hain.

Durgaprasad : Late kyun?

Annapurna : Kal uske friendne US se uske liye kuch saman bhijwaya tha, Isiliye wo airport gaya tha to aaneme deri ho gayi.

Durgaprasad : Iss ladkeka bhavishyame kya hone wala hain kya malum?

Sanskar : Kyun aap aisa kyu bol rahe hain Dad. Jo hoga achha hi hoga Laksh ka. Wo itna achhese padhkar Engineer ban gaya hain. To usse kya problem hain humare office me kam karne ki?

Durgaprasad : Kya malum beta? Lekin wo chahta hain ki use US mehi job mile. Wo India to sirf humare kehne se aaya hain na. Ye bat to tum achhi tarah jante ho.

Swara : Papaji aap Lakshki fikar mat kijiye . Ek bar wo yaha settle hua na to fir wo US jane ki bat bhi nahi karega. Sab log uske taraf confuse hokar dekhte hain, "Kaise??"

Swara: Aap kaise bhi karke ek bar Laksh ko office join karne ke liye boliye. Aur wo uski idea sabko batati hain.

Annapurna : Mujhe Swara ki bato me dam lag raha hain. Aap Laksh ko office joint karne ke liye mana lijiye.

Durgaprasad : Thik hain. I will try my level best.

Tabhi waha pe bachhe aa jate hain.

Suhana :Ye Mumma papa & Dada dadi kya decide kar rahe hain?

Saurav : Kya malum? Chalo puchte hain.

Suhana : Are chhodo na. Badon ki bato mein hum kya bolenge aur agar mumma ko gussa aaya toh!!!!

Saurav : Ha tum sahi keh rahi ho. Chalo hum Laksh chachu ke pass chalte hain.

At Laksh's bedroom

Laksh uthkar apne bed pe aisehi aramse leta tha. Bachhe darwajeke pass aakar," Chachu kya hum ander aaye?" Laksh bachhonko dekhkar turant uth jata hain,"Are meri badmash company ke badmasho aa jao. Maine aapse kitni bar kaha hain ki aap dono ko mere kamre mein aane ke liye permission lene ki koi jarurat nahi hain. Chalo aa ja o jaldi jaldi". Laksh un dono ko apne god me bithata hain.

Saurav : Chachu aap to humse mile bhi nahi achhi tarah. Aap pichle Diwali vacation ke bad abhi aaye ho US se.

Laksh : Are me to tumse milne ke liye taras raha tha. Jab me yaha wapas Delhi aaya to mujhe bhai ne bataya ki aap dono aur bhabhi sab log babhi ke mayke gaye ho 3 din se. Aur jab aap sab aaye rat ko tab me airport gaya tha kuch saman lane ke liye.

Suhana : Ok Chachu.. Lekin aap ab humme promise karo ki aap humme chodkar kabhi nahi jaoge. Laksh bachhonke masumiyat par sweetsi smile deta hain. Suhana usse promise karne kehti hain.

Saurav : Kya hua Chachu? Promise karo na.. Tabhi Swara unko breakfast ke liye neeche bulati hain.

Laksh : Chalo baccho. Jaldi jaldi chalo. Bahot bhuk lagi hain mujhe. Aur wo sab neeche break fast ke liya jate hain.

At Gadodia Niwas

Shekhar : Are Ragu abhi tak nahi uthi? Aisa kaise ho sakta hain? Wo to sab kam time pe hi karti hain. Shekhar Ragini ko uthane uske roomme jata hain tabhi Ragini apne job pe jane ke liye taiyar hokar neeche aati hain.

Ragini : Papa pranam.

Shekhar : Khush raho beta. Chalo jaldi jaldi chalo. Maine tumhare liye garma garam pakode banaye hain breakfast mein.

Ragini : Kya papa aap bhi na. Aap ne kyun banaya aaj humari maid nahi aayi kya?

Shekhar : Are aayi thi. Usne tumhara tiffin bhi pack kar diya. Lekin mujhe hi aaj mood aaya pakode banane ka. Isiliye maine usse bhej diya wapas.

Ragini : Kya papa? Aap bhi na?

Shekhar : To kya karu Tagu? Ab kitne din tu mere sath rehne wali hain?

Ragini : Matlab?

Shekhar : Matlab ab teri shadi bhi to karni hain na. Pehle se hi kitne sare rishtey aa rahe hain tere liye. Ab kissi na kisiko to tu pasand kare gi hi na. Aur mujhe apne damad se jaldi milna hain aur uske bat mere pote poti ko bhi to dekhna hain na.

Ragini : Papa aap bhi na phirse shuru hogaye? Aap jante ho na ki iss duniyame aapki Raguko patanewala ladka abhi tak paida nahi hua hain aur ab paida hokar fayda bhi nahi hoga kyuki mujhe to shadihi nahi karni.

Shekhar : Dekh Ragu tu ye apna attitude badal. Warna tera rishta kabhi hogahi nahi.

Ragini : Papa chalo ab mujhe office jane ke liye der ho rahi hain aur wo Shekhar se bye bolkar chali jati hain.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update
want to see how laksh and ragini meets

please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Nice start seems like both Raglak are worker holics

Can't wait for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbb1

Nice start seems like both Raglak are worker holics

Can't wait for the next part

they aren't workholic but they don't have interest in making family n responsibilities nibhana
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Chapter 2

At MM

Laksh bachhonke sath breakfast ke liye niche aata hain. Wo sabko good morning bolkar b'fast karne baith jata hain. Tab waha pe sari family ek dusre ko aankhose usse bat karne ke liye bolti hain. Laksh ye bat notice karta hain,"Kya hua? Aap sab aise kyun behave kar rahe ho? Bhabhi aap batao na kya bat hain?

Swara : Me? Me vo bus... ha yad aaya Sanskar ko kuch batana thi tuze.

Laksh : Ha bolo na bhai.

Sanskar : Uf ...vo... Me nahi maa batayegi.

Laksh : Ma ab aap bhi bataona. Kya bat hain?

Annapurna : Laksh mujhse achha ye batayenge tujhe.

Durgaprasad : Ye achha hain aap sab ka. Idea aap dete ho aur bolne ke liye mujhe bol dete ho. Kyun? Sab DP ke taraf dekhte hain. Achha thik hain, kehta hu... Laksh hume tumse ye batana tha beta, ki tum humare business ko join karo.

Laksh : Dad, ye aap bol rahe ho? Aapko malum hain na ki mujhe US me job karna hain. Fir...

Durgaprasad : Beta, agar tum business join karoge to tumhe thoda experience bhi milega aur fir ye experience tumhe USme job karoge tab kam aayega.

Laksh : (thori der sochta hain) Mujhe thora time chahiye sochne ke liye. Sab uske liye man jate hain.

At Ragini's Office:

Mr. Shubham : Ragini's colleague

Mrs. Manisha : Ragini's friend & colleague.

Manisha : Ragini, tum bata rahi thi na ki uncle ne tera photo kahi north Delhi me dikhane ke liye bheja hain?

Ragini : (casually) haan. Kyun?

Manisha: Tum bhi kitni unromantic ho yar!! Socho tumhare liye to bahot bade bade khandano me se rishtey aayenge na. Uncle ji ki kitni badi badi logon se mulakat hain aur tum bhi to kaha aam aadmi ki beti ho? Bhale hi uncle Manager hain bank me fir bhi tumhara bhai bhi to US me bahot badi post pe hain na. Aur ek tum ho ki itni aamir ho kar bhi iss office me kam karti ho.

Ragini: Tum firse shuru hogayi? Tujhe kitni bar bolu ki mujhe iss shadi cheesonse itna lagav nahi hain. Mujhe shadi nam ke bat se hi bahot cheedh hain. Ek to wo jugar hain agar rishta hua to theek varna bad me pachtana parta hain uske liye.

Manisha : Lekin Ragini shadi to ek bahot achha ehsas hain. Tabhi waha pe Shubham aata hain.

Shubham : Are Manisha, ye sab bate kis se suna rahi ho? Iss Raginiko!!!! Ragini usse ignore karti hain.

Manisha : Dekhna Ragini kab tujhe kisise pyar ho jaye ga aur kab koi tera dil churake le jayega tumhe pata bhi nahi chalega. Agar bhagwan ne tere liye kisiko bhi banaya hain na to wo tujhe jarur aaj milega.

Ragini : Kyun aaj koi khas bat hain kya?

Shubham : Ragini please don't tell us ki tumhe aaj kya hain wo bhi malum nahi hain?

Ragini : Kya hain aaj?

Manisha: Are aaj 14th Feb hain yani ki Valentine Day hain aaj. Aaj bahot sare ladke ya fir ladkiya ek dusronko propose bhi karte hain samjhi.

Ragini : Ye pyar vyar ke chakkar me mujhe to fasna nahi hain samj gaye tum log? waha pe Ragini ko bulane ke liye peon aata hain.

At MM

Laksh ko milne ke liye uska jigri dost Om aata hain. Uski shadi uski hi dost Ms. Shweta Kapoor ke sath teh hoti hain.

Laksh : Are Om aao na. Kaise ho aur meri hone wali bhabhi kaisi hain?

Om : Me mast hu Laksh. Tu kaisa hain bol? Aur tera US ka bhoot utar gaya ki nahi?

Laksh : Me bhi mast hu aur rahi bat bhoot ki to wo kabhi utrega hi nahi. Me to US me job dundhne ke chakkar me tha lekin in sab ne mujhe yaha bulaya. Lekin mera Us me job karna to passion hain aur me apne khud ke pairo pe khada hokar job karna chahta hun. Tu bata na apna.

Om : Are aaj sham ko Shweta ko lekar Dinner aur date plan ki hain.

Laksh : Wow. Nice planning yar. Lekin aaj hi kyun? Aaj kuch special hain kya?

Om : Are buddu thoda apne sar se wo US ka bhoot nikal kar dekh. Aaj Valentine Day hain. Teri kya planning hain aaj?

Laksh : Om tumhe to pata hain ki mujhe in sab me koi interest nahi hain. Shadi pyar vyar yani ek faltu ki responsibility hoti hain. Usme humesha pareshani hi milti hain. Isiliye meri to koi planning nahi hain aaj.

Om : Laksh tu kitna bhi kuch bhi bolo lekin uparwale ne tere liye koi na koi ladki banayi hi hogi. Aur dekhna aaj tumhe to wo jarur milegi. Fir kuch time spend karne ke bad Om aur Laksh Shopping ke liye bahar jate hain.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome ...pls continue soon ...want to see ragini and lakshya come face to face😛

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