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Prabhleen Arora

@7APK

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Amazing OS ...
Loved it ...
Thanks for the PM ... 😳

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Nupur_5
Hey Mukta dear, first of all thank you for the dedication though I already told you there is no need for this! Still you did and I'm so honoured that an amazing writer like you have dedicated one of her beautiful piece to me along with Viji (Who rightfully deserve it)
So lots of love & hugs for this gesture :)

Coming to the OS: I really loved it like I did your every other pieces!

You didn't use name and told us to imagine any couple of our choice! Bt I only could imagine SwaSan NOT just bcoz I'm a diehard SwaSan fan, which I'm ofcourse, but also this couple is so like SwaSan!

Even it looks like to me that you were also saw them as SwaSan while writing this OS, as you used few SwaSan moments along with SwaSan's traits! Like you gave one beautiful love confession which was used by Swara saying Sanskaar that she loves him two, three, four...till INFINITY <3

So it was a SwaSan OS throughout, for me, as well as many others I can bet!

It was such a beautiful piece of writing which I enjoyed immensely!

Swara & Sanskaar's (As I told you already it is SwaSan for me) every feelings were described so beautifully! You penned down their feelings so beautifully poignant, thus took my heart!

Awesome and mindblowing!

I want to say so much more but little busy with exams hence stoping my rambling here!

Love you once again dear :)

Dearest Nupur 😊😊

First of all ,let me thank you for your constant encouragement and support for my works .

Indeed there was need of dedicating this story to you

as you have been such a sweetheart to me 🤗🤗🤗

Thank you for all lovely words for this piece . 😳😳

I m really humbled with them.

Thank you for making my day even more beautiful.

Ohh being such a die hard fan I expected you to imagine only them in this story.

I so knew you will choose no one except them.

As far as I am concerned to tell you the truth , I haven't imagine any couple.

But I am glad you did relate to the story thinking from swasan's POV.

And I think this will be a swasan os throughout to others as it was for you.😊

Once again Thank you so very much for thinking it to be a beautiful piece of writing,

You have said it all ...making be elated with your response and I am happy to know you made it inspite of having exams.

All the best for your exams .

STAY BLESSED .

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sneha lokwani

@Snehalokwani200

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Amazing os

Loved it

Gud u told us to imagine any couple

I imagined taarey

Keep writing

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Anamika sharma

@anu012

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Awsome os
beautifully written
loved it

thnks for pm

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: raaz19
It's beautiful...The writing in this o's is very well connected and bold...A power pact piece full of emotions which very from longing to love to trust and mainely the true feeling of trust...

Is see this piece focuses on trust and believing in once self...The added impact of making sure you graphics things with full force and look ahead always only adds to the beauty of this piece. ..

The bond really reminded me of swansan and yes sorry I said it...of course the piece is about any couple but I felt like I could watch them enact this pain and struggle...The bond was epic...

Seriously never fear what you have written is not good...its always amazing time read the depth and message you try to send across. ..

I hope everyone that reads this feels the same. ..that yes like you said never give up hope or chance of happiness as if you let it in life can only be as colourful as you make it...

And in your story that connection is based upon the trust if a forever in eternal bond of friendship...

Loved it...

Sorry to ramble on buddy...muktia you deserve a big round of 🤗 for this piece...

Take care...

Raz

Hey Razia 😊😊😊

Thanks a lot for this overwhelming appreciation..😳😳😳.

So glad to know that u found my writing well connected .

I am really humbled wth all your praises and u could relate the feeling I wanted to show i.e.trust and self belief 😊😊.

No need to say sorry as I have already said you can imagine any couple in place of them u want to.

😊😊

So im happy to know u could relate to the bond I showed with swasan and felt it to be epic.

Thank you so much for saying this that its amazing to read depth and msg I tried to send across.

I too hope the same dear that everyone who takes out their time for this can connect to this .

Thanks for liking dear and understanding what I wantd to portray .

Don't say sorry at all for your kind lovely and motivating words .😊

Stay blessed😊😊

Have a great day .

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Hey Mukta my dear 🤗 🤗

Firstly I am so touched by your dedication. It was and will always be a pleasure to be your buddy. 🤗 Keep shining and Best Wishes always for your lovely and successful future, filled with joy and contentment, my dear.

Coming to the OS: such a lovely title, first of all. Silver lining...truly, in the darkest of circumstances there is sometimes someone who serves as an anchor, a bedrock of support.

The way you have etched Swara's intense misery and anguish at losing her mother, her reasons for distancing herself from Sanskaar; and then the resolute, loving way Sanskaar brings Swara back from all that pain: this was superbly described. I don't mind admitting that I was teary in some parts, it was so moving.

The journey of recovering from a shattering loss, of finding happiness and love again, to emerge into the bright sunlight of a satisfying life once again...wonderful touch there.

Lovely read for a Sunday morning...and the message was wonderful...that no matter how dark life looks, there is always a silver lining, a way to come back to better times.

Always stay blessed and keep smiling, my dear.

Lots of Love

Viji

Dearst Viji

🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Its mine pleasure too that I have someone like you 😊😊

YOU ARE THE BEST ❤️❤️❤️❤️

And thank you for your wishes 😊😊.

Glad to know you liked title .

I was quite unsure about that because I am very bad at titles to my stories.

So after penning down whole story I could only think of this title which says there is always hope .

All you need to do is holding on .

So you also imagined swasan in story as leads 😃😃

Happy to know you felt the description to be apt .

I will take that as an complement that it brought tears in your eyes .

At the same time let me say sorry for that.

Yes it was a journey of recovering from shattering loss ,of finding happiness and love again

to emerge into bright sunlight of a satisfying life once again.

I was quite unsure about this piece as it was completely off track ,

but your feedback gave me relief.

THANK TOU ONCE AGAIN FOR YOUR LOVELY WORDS AND GETTING EXACT MSG I WANTED TO CONVEY.

YOU TOO ALWAYS STAY BLESSED .

AND KEP SMILING MY DEAREST 😊😊

LOTS OF LOVE AND BEST WISHES -

MUKTA

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soumi gupta

@soumi93

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Muktai One of the best work of yourss.
U nailed it
its awesome 😳

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Cupcake.
A beautiful os

it was so beautifully written

truly loved it

I liked how you penned down the emotions so effortlessly

I liked the concept of friendship love

Thanks for the pm