Swasan ff Mere Ajnabi Last Episode 15 updated

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Prologue
A girl is sitting on a bed wearing a red bridal dress n waiting for her husband n then listen a noise of opening door of her bedroom a men come n sit in front of her n say u came here for arav n dolly i hope u will take care of them
She is nervous before but after listening she relief but still she is scared whatever she heard about him is enough to scare anyone
She gets some courage n remove her ghungat n gets shock n more scared n scream you...
He look at her n too get shock n say what r u doing here...
She quickly gets up 4rom the bed n run outside the room...
Characters
Swara
A bold n beautiful girl who wants to be a son of her mother n support her sister but an incident in her life totally change her life n she lost all her charm n her dreams...:-(
Ragini
Elder sister of swara a simple girl who love n care everyone opposite to swara she is a designer n working bottique of laksh a famous designer
OShomi
Mother of swara n ragini a brave women who is taking care of swara n ragini after her husbands death she love her daughters very much specially swara
Sujata
Swaras chachi who always gives order to shomi vamp of my story ;-)
ram
Swaras chacha who wants to take care of swaragini but scare 4rom sujata
Kavya n priya n arjun
Daughters of sujata n ram
Sanskar
Hero of my ff n a police officer who worked hard n face many problems in his life but still care 4 others
Parineta
Sanskars bhabhi vamp in sanskar life
Adharsh
Sanskars elder brother who loves him very much but because of a misunderstanding n his sister in law her threw sanskar out of his house
Kavita
Adharsh sister in law who loves sanskar n want to marry him for this she can do any thing
Hello guysIm new here n its my first ff i dont know the abc of writting so forgive me if i do any mistake please give ur comments
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Hey really interesting I wonder what had happened pls update soon and pls PM me
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it sounds interesting... continue it soon.
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Episode 1
In swaraginis room a girl is lying on bed like a lifeless body today she lost her every thing her dreams her charm n most importantly her confidence she is remembering all the incident of today she want to cry but she lost her tears also sujata is bashing her
Sujata : aise ladki ko tu paida hone se pehle hi mar dena chahiya
Ram : bas sujata yeh meri zamadari hai koi ladka dhoondo n is kalak ko utaro hamare parivar se n he goes out 4rom their room in anger n everyone follows him
after them ragini comes n hug her n say
Ragini : swara kuch tu bola maa hamein chor k chali gye or tum ro gi bhi nai swara maa mar chuki hai then swara hugs her back n say
Swara: meri wajha se...
Ragini nai swara tum ne kuch nai kia mujhe pata hai kavya n priya ka unhon ne hi tumhein phasaxa hai i trust u swara mujhe pata hai meri swara aise nai kar sakti
Flashback
rams best friend rajeev came 4rom U.S.A he has one son sanju he wants sanju to marry priya but sanju like swara n so rajeev ask swaras hand for sanju sujata rejected this proposal...
Priya n kavya was very jealouse after this so they decided to take revenge 4rom swara
Swara priya n kavya were studing in same college one day they ask swara for bunk her college n come with them they r going out for full day enjoyment swara agreed because she did not have another choice after the death of her father her chacha support their family so she gone with them
Priya stop car infront of a big mention n they trio gone inside swara shocked to see two boys there priya introduce her with them n both watch swara 4rom top to bottom swara feel uncomfortable n wants to leave but kavya stops her n she too gone inside with little hesitation
They all sat on couch
A boy serves drinks to all swara think its a glass of juice n drink it n she feel vomit because she never taste alcohol before she goes to washroom when she feel relief she came back n shocked to see kavya were with one boy n priya n another n they were making love with each other swara ran outside n scream nahiii
She feels two powerful hands on her shoulder n she turned back to see but she fainted
when she become conscious she find herself in police station n priya n kavya asking sorry 4rom a police officer n blaming her
Kavya: sir yeh sab is ki wajha se hua hai yehi hamein wahan le kar gye thi hamein nai pata tha k wo log drugs supply karte hain hamein maaf kar dein plzz
Officer order a police man to take their body remands
When he saw swara n goes towards her n ask tell me about ur other group member
Officer: baki k sathi kahan hain tumhare he shouts on her bolo warna agr mein pochne pe aya tu buht bura hoga
Swara was still in shock so she did not speak he make her stand swara pushed him n say mene kuch nai kia he becomes angry n slaps her n say
At that time ram enter save swara 4rom him
Because ram was a well known businessman so police did not arrest them n after some formalities they leave police station n come back home all blame swara n sujata was beating swara no one believe her she was crying mene kuch nai kia n sujata continually beating her she gets injured shomi n ragini both were defending swara but all in vain n she fall on ground
Ragini n arjun took her to hospital
Shomi was shocked when she saw swara in this condition n died in shock
After one week swara comes back home
Now sanskars story
Sanskar is younger brother of adharsh maheshwari a well known businessman he wants to be like his brother they were living happily but one day a new member come in their family kavita who snatch his everything...
Kavita was a younger sister of sankars bhabi parineeta
Parineeta want kavita to marry sanskar but sanskar refuse n said he dont love her...
Kavita was very sad n dont want to giveup because she love him
One night she went in his room n start crying n screaming bachao...
When adharsh n parineeta arrive she run towards parineeta n hugs her n said sanskar was forcing her adharsh slaped sanskar n order him to leave the house
He left Kolkata n settled in mumbai
He worked hard to n become a respectable police officer after 3 years he got transfer back to Kolkata
There he got a case of a gang who make mms of girls n he was working on this case
He received a call from a girl
Girl : sanskar sir?????
sanskar: yes
Girl : sir jis gang ko ap dhoond rahe hain wo is waqt XYZ area k house no 27 mein hain n wahan 3 girlss bhi enter ho rahi hain
Sanskar : ap kon????
Girl : a victim unhon ne mere sath bhi...
Sanskar : ok thanx
Sanskar : lets go shone...
They reached there n he enter that house in garden he saw a girl screaming nahiii
he put his hand on her shoulder she turned n fall in his embrace he called lady police n hand over that girl to her n go inside they arrest all...
In police station
Sanskar : sharma ji kuch pata chala kon hain yeh log????
policeman : sir 3 girls gadodia family se belong karti hain in ko chor dena chahiye 2 ram parsad ki betiyan hain kaviya gadodia n priya gadodia n aik un ki bhatije (niece) hai swara gadodia
Sanskar : us se kia farak parta hai culprit jo bhi ho usy saza zaror mile gi
Policeman : sir ram parsad ki betixun ka kehna hai k swara un larkon ke sath mili hui hai n unhein wahan wohi le kar gye thi
Sanskar : lets see
He goes inside his cabin to investigate there kavya n priya put blame on swara when she become conscious she find her self in police station sanskar moved towars her n ask
Sanskar : kis k liye kaam karti ho tum n aur kitne log hain tumhare group mein swara pushed him n scream
Swara : mene kuch nai kia mein kuch nai janti...
Sanskar become angry n slap her
Then ram parsad enter n save swara 4rom him
After further investigation they leave them n they go back to home...
Precape : swasan wedding
Edited by hadiali - 9 years ago
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Episode 2
One week passed ragini is taking great care of swara and sujata is finding a match for swara when she meet a lady in a shop
Sujata : ay parineeta kesi ho???
parineeta : sujata anti mein tu theek hoon ap kesi hain???
Sujata : mein bhi theek hoon tu yahan kese???
parineeta : bas apne devar k liye ladki dhoondne aye hoon koi mil hi nai rai mile gi b kese jis ne apni pehli biwi mar di ho usy kon de ga apni beti
Sujata : tu tum aise insan k liye kyun dhoond rai hai ladki????
parineeta : arav n dolly k liye meri behn k bache hain un ko maa mil jaye gi
Sujata : phir tu tum sahi insan se mili ho swara se kra do us ki shadi mere jeth ki beti hai
Parineeta : thanx anti ap ne tu mere prob hi solve kar di mein kal hi aon gi shagun le k
In gadodia mention
Sujata is in swaraginis room
Sujata : tere liye ladka dhoond liya hai mene kal a rahe hain wo log deakh lena 2 bachon ka baap hai n suna hai apni pehle biwi ko khudi mar dia tha us ne
Ragini : chachi ap aise insan se swara ki shadi kese kara sakti hain mein aisa nai hone doon gi
Swara : mujhe manzoor hai mein kal txar ho jaon gi
Sujata leave happily
Ragini : swara tum aise kese kar sakti ho????
swara : yeh mere saza hai apni ko takleef dene ki saza unhein marne ki saza...
In maheshwari mention
Sanskar come back 4rom his duty parineeta call him to talk
Parineeta : sanskar mene ladki dhoond li hai kal ja k deakh lena
Sanskar : mujhe nai deakhni wo yahan arav n dolly k liye a rai hai date fix kar k bata dena mein a jaon ga

Swasan marriage day
Swara is ready in red lehnga when she is looking very pretty ragini informs her about arrival of barat ragini meet with with sanskar n feel relief
Ragini : hello im ur ekloti sali wese jo kuch ap k bare mein mene suna hai aise dekte tu nai hain ap
Sanskar : phir ap ne kisi aise insan se suna ho ga jo mujhe janta nai hoga
Ragini : mere behen buht masoom (innocent) plz us ka khaxal rakhna
Sanskar nodes his head in yes
Kavya n priya get shock to see sanskar n hide behind pillars
Kavya : swara tu gai kaam se yeh tu zaror us se hamare gang k bare mein information lene k liye shadi kar raha hoga
Priya : n swara ko tu kuch pata b nai
Ragini bring swara down for wedding rituals swara cover her face with her dupatta so sanskar cant see her n now swara become swara sanskar maheshwari ...
Now its time of swaras rukhsati ragini was crying swara too is crying but no one can notice her because she cover her face with dupatta
In Maheshwari Mention
Parineeta welcome swara in his sasural
Now swara is sitting in her room when a little boy of 4 come near her
Arav : hello mama anti
A smile appear on swaras face she kiss him
Arav : mama anti ap ko pata hai aap buht pixara lag rai
Swara : thanx
Parineeta come in swaras room
Parineeta : arav tang nai karo mama ko
Arav : yeh mama nai hain mama anti hain jese papa uncle mere papa nai hain
Parineeta : aisa kis ne kaha tumhein
Arav : papa uncle ne
Parineeta : lets go arav aj ap k papa ki shadi ho gye hai tu aj mere sath so jao kal papa k sath so jana
Arav : nai mujhe mama anti k sath sona hai
Parineeta : aj nai kal phir masi arav ko chocolates dein gi
Arav : ok
before leaving her room parineeta make swara more scare
Parineeta : bach k rehna swara xeh pehle hi meri behn ko mar chuka hai mujhe tum se koi dushmani nai hai bas mere behan k bachon ka khaxal rakh kxun k mein abhi wapis us ja rai hoon yeh dono is room k sath left wale room mein hoon ge raat mein agr jag jayein tu deakh lena
Swara nodes her head in yes n again cover her face
Swara is waiting for sanskar when she listen a noise of opening door of her bedroom sanskar come n sit in front of her after 10 min sanskar break silence
Sanskar : ap yahan arav n dolly k liye aye hain i hope ap mujh se koi umeed nai rakhein gi
Swara recognize his voice how can she forget him she remove her gunget
Swara : ap yahan
Sanskar : tum yahan kya kar rai ho?????
swara quickly get up 4rom bed n run outside she goes in arav n dolly room n cry
Swara : pori duniya mein yehi bacha tha mere liye mujhe laga tha k ab mere prob khatam ho gye but nai yeh tu or barh gye mein hi kxun hamesha aisa mere sath hi kyun hota hai???? Yeh tumhari saza hai swara...
she wipe her tears n sleep between arav n dolly because parineeta left for usa
in sanskar room he is sitting on bed
Sanskar : aise mere sath hi kyun hota hai sari duniya mein yehi ladki reh gye thi criminal jo ladkiyon mms banwati hai drink karti hai vulgar movies deakhti hai o god mene aj tak kesi ladki ko nazar utha k b nai deakha n meri biwi ladkon k sath apartments mein rehti hai...
Precap : swasan nok jhok...
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Read both parts in a one go..
Interesting concept..
Update soon
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Episode 3
Next day swara is lying between arav n dolly n both hug her tightly... dolly start crying
swara gets up n go towards kitchen she make milk for her n feed her arav too wake up
Arav : mama anti mujhe bhi breakfast karna hai
Swara : ohh tu arav braekfast mein kxa le ga????
Arav : bread butter n milk
He run to sanskas room
Arav : papa uncle uthu jaldi
Sanskar : agr na uthon tu
Arav : tu arav roman reigns ka superman puch mare ga
Sanskar : acha tu arav ko wrestling kehlna hai papa uncle k sath
Arav : nai arav ko breakfast karna hai wo bi mama anti k hath se
Sanskar : acha tu mama anti k aate hi party badal li lets go
In kitchen arav is waiting for him when he arrive
Arav : papa uncle a gye mama anti papa uncle ko b khana do
swara start serving him
Sanskar : gud start acha tum isiliye yahan aye ho
Swara ignore him
Sanskar : wese mere 4 years k career
mein pehle bar aise hua k culprit khud mere pass a jye
Swara : wese mene bhi pehle bar apni life mein deakha hai a foolish police officer jis ko yehi na pata ho k innocent kon hai n culprit kon hai
Sanskar : sanskar maheshwari ke agye bolne ki himat aj tak kesi ne nai ki
swara : swara gadodia ko chup karane wala aj tak koi paida hi nai hua
Sanskar : let me correct u swara gadodia nai swara sanskar maheshwari wao criminal n police officer sound gud together acha meri nazar 24 hours tum pe rehe gi n case solve karne mein buht help mile gi
Swara : help tu tab mile gi jab mein kuch bataon gi
Sanskar : sach ka pata tu mein laga k hi rahon ga
Swara : when u know about truth u will feel shame on u
Sanskar angrily leave
In police station all greets him for his wedding he goes to his cabin shone is already present there
Shone : sanskar tum yahan kxa kar rahe ho kal tu shadi hui aj duty par a gye ho bhabhi kxa soche gi
sanskar : yeh police ki job mere first preference bhi hai n mera pehla pyaar bhi
Shone : sanskar very bad...
Sanskar remember swaras words
Swara : when u know about truth...
Sanskar : shone wo jo 3 girls pakri gaye thi 2 months pehle un ka body remand lia tha na
Shone : kon gadodia girls????
Sanskar : han
Shone : han but wo case tu commissioner k orders pe band kar dia tha
Sanskar : mene case open karne ka nai kaha mujhe bas un ki medical reports chahiye
Shone : kyun tum un ka kxa karo ge
Sanskar : kisi ka mounh band karana hai
Shone : kis ka sanskar plz kyun apni job k peeche pare ho pehle karan ka case n ab yeh pata hai ram parsad is a biggest businessman of this city
Sanskar : dont worry kuch nai hoaga
Shone : ok next week tak mil jayein gi
Whole day swara spend with arav n dolly at night sanskar come back arav run towards him
Arav : papa uncle ap meri chocolate le k aye hain
Sanskar : ohh wo tu mein bhool gaxa
Arav : mein ap se nai bolta friendship khatam
Sanskar : ohh tu theek hai mein arav ki chocolate dolly ko de deta hoon
Arav : nai mere hain
he snatch cocolates 4rom him
After dinner swara goes with arav n dolly n sanskar goes in his room n sleep
Days passed with same routine swara spend her time with arav n dolly
swara too is noe getting better but Sanskar always hurts her with his taunts
Sanskar start feeling for her but that incident always disturb him
In morning swara is making breakfast when sanskar enter in kitchen swara was wearing red churidar sanskar cant take his eyes off her swara is trying to put a jar on shelf jar slips from her hand n jar is about to fall on her head but sanskar come n push her both falls on floor (eye lock)
Sanskar agian remember that incident n get up 4rom her angrily
Sanskar : ohh tu aise hi tum ladkon ko attract karti ho apni taraf par tumhara yeh jado mujh per nai chale ga wese ladkion ko apne sath lejane k liye kxa karti ho??? Bas aik files a jayein then i will show u ur real face
He leave angrily n swara fall on her knees n cry
Swara : sanskar mein ap ko kese yqeen dilaon trust me plzz mein wahan nai gye mera un ldkon se koi tauluq (relation) nai hai ...
In police station
Sanskar is checking his files when shone come n give him reports
Shone : yeh lo reports tum ne mangi thi
sanskar feels scared to open the report he put the file on table because he want more courage to open it he cant face reality he dont want to punish her he is in his own thoughts when shone call him n he come back in his sens
shone : sanskar tum ne bhabhi ko arav n dolly ka sach bataxa
Sanskar : nahi
Shone : what itni bari baat tum un se kese chupa sakte ho
Sanskar : mein usy yeh nai bataon ga jab tak kavita ko hosh nai aye ga mein yeh sach kesi ko nai bataon ga
Shone : agr kavita ko kabhi hosh na aya tu???
Sanskar : phir yeh sach us ki mout k sath hi khatam ho jye ga
Shone : or karan us ka kya?????
Sanskar : dimple usy kabhi jail se nai nikalne de gi n agr kesi tarah nikal gaxa tu kxa wo un ko apne sath le ja sakta hai
Shone : n bhabhi wo kya jane dein gi wo tu sach nai janti
Sanskar : wo us ka prob hai wese bhi wo itne din rahe gi hi nai
Shone : sanskar un kya kasoor hai kyun tum un k sath aisa kar rahe ho tumhare sath jo bura kia kavita ne kia unhon ne nai
Sanskar : tum jante ho wo kon hai??? jante ho meri shadi kis se hui hai????
Shone : tum ne konsa bolaya tha shadi pe jo mujhe pata ho
Sanskar : swara gadodia se jo apni college se girls un ladkon k pas lejati thi n yahan tak k apni sisters ko bhi le gye chiii
Shone : sanskar swara is innocent remember that wo hamein garden mein mili thi agr wo un ki partner hoti apni college girls ko blackmail karti hoti tu wo bhi ander usi tarah milte jese us ki sisters milein but if u still have doubts on her then check that file
Sanskar immediately open that file n shock to check that report he remember all his taunts, his slap n morning incident tears come in his eyes he remember swaras words (when you know about the truth u will feel shame ...)
Precape : ragini comes to maheshwari mention
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Nice update..
This story is really interesting
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi..
Welcome to India forum..
I have been following ur story on Facebook..
And I truly love the concept.
Awesome storyline..
Contrive soon..
Edited by Jidnyasa - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Hi..

Welcome to India forum..
I have been following ur story on Facebook..
And I truly love the concept.
Awesome storyline..
Contrive soon..


Thanx 😊

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