Swasan ff Mere Ajnabi Last Episode 15 updated - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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too gud waana ssee the reactions of everyone wen dey realise dat laksh is in luv wid none other dan ragini
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Episode 6
Next moring swara get up early as usual preparing breakfast swara is busy in making paratha after so much struggle she make a round paratha she place it on pan n turns to make omelette she smells as something is burning
Swara : yeh kesi smell hai??? (Wht is this???)
sanskar enter in kitchen
Sanskar make a pout face n say
Sanskar : ohhh jal gaya... (oh its burned)
sanskar starts laughing because he cant control any more soon arav n dolly too join him...
Swara : stop it its not funny...
they stop but again laugh now swara too join them...
Sanskar : plzz swara aise lunch mat banana i will order something (plz swara dont make lunch like this)
Swara : so u think i cant cook han???
Sanskar : i did not say that
sanskar come near her n start teaching her how to make a pratha n again surprise her
Swara : (monologue) is he really a human being isy tu paratha b bana aata hai how can he make a better paratha then me I am a girl n I dont know how to make a paratha n he knows strange...
Sanskar : kxa soch rai ho xehi na k mujhe xeh sab kese aata hai mene buht time mumbai mein akeela raha hoon yeh sab mene tab hi seekha tha now check this kesa hai (now u must be thinking about that "how can he make a paratha better than me"I spend huge time alone in mumbai so I learned this all)
Swara again shock n think how he knows wht am I thinking ohhh he will make me crazy...
She takes a bite
Swara : hmm buht yummy hai wese agr ap akeele thy tu maid kyun nai rakhi??? (If u were alone y u did not hire a maid)
Sanskar : because mujhe apna kaam khud karne ki adat hai wese bhi tab mein maid afford nai kar sakta tha(because I like to performed all the task by my self by the way I could not afford a maid at that time)
Swara : aise kese ho sakta hai itne bare businessman ka bhai maheshwari industries ka partner n aik maid bhi afford nai kar sakta I dont believe this (how is it possible brother of a biggest businessman n 50% parter of maheshwari industries could not afford a maid)
Sanskar : tum bhi tu sheakher gadodia ki beti thi phir bhi college local bus par jati thi u know wht swara life mein parents buht important hote hain n agr un mein se koi aik bhi hamein chor de tu buht struggle karna parta hai (even though u were daughter of sheakher gadodia still u went college by local bus u know wht swara parents r very important in our life n if we lost even one of them we have to struggle hard )
Swara : I know it very well ...
Soon they finish their breakfast
In afternoon laksh comes sanskar n laksh both r talking
Laksh : I think tumhari shadi last month hui hai right (I think u got married last month)
Sanskar : han
Laksh : tu yeh bache ???? Dekh mujh se sach bolna tujhe pata hai k tu mujh jhoot nai bol sakta mana k hum kuch saal dur rahe hain but I know u very well n phone per baat karte rahe hain (then whom these children belongs to???? See dont try to lie with me because u always failed although we were not stay in touch for some years but I know u very well but still we were connected on phone)
Sanskar : kavita ke (they r kavitas children)
Laksh : ohh tu yeh yahan kxa kar rahe hain???? (Then wht r they doing here???)
Sanskar : long story will tell u later
Laksh : bhabi ko pata hai yeh sab???(is bhabhi know about it)
Sanskar : nai (no)
Laksh : pata tha mujhe un ko kyun nai bataya ab??? (I already knew this y u did not tell her???)
Sanskar : agr mein usy bataon ga tu kxa wo inhein wo pyaar de gi jo ab de rai hai (If I would tell her then would she be able to love them like she is doing)
Laksh : sanskar yeh ghalat hai (sanskar thats not fair )
Sanskar : mujhe pata hai (I know)
When they are talking swara enter with tea n sock to see laksh...
Swara : laksh ap
Laksh : swara my baby doll how r u ????
sanskar give them a strange look
Sanskar : do you know each other???
Swara : hmm di in k botique mein job karti thi (hmm di was an employ on his botique)
Laksh : n yeh ragini ki behen hai (n she is raginis sister)
Sanskar : ohh tu tum ragini se pyaar karte ho nice choice...(ohh so u r in love with ragini)
Laksh : I know..
Swara : u know wht jiju mein tu khud bol rai thi k di court marriage kar lo manti hi nai hai (u know wht jiju I suggested her for court marriage but she denied )
Laksh : exactly tumhari tarah brave nai hai na (because she is not brave like u)
Swara make a pout face
Sanskar : kyun nai manti(y she is not agree???)
Swara : because of chachi
Sanskar : ohh.. dont worry man jayein gi (I shall make her agree)
Laksh : wo kese ??(how??)
Sanskar : yeh mere prob hai tum shadi ki taxari karo mein hoon na (its my headache now u go n get ready for the wedding bells) im her brother n I am accepting this proposal dont worry
Swara look at him with so much love her mind is stuck in word brother she remember shomis words (swara agr tumhara koi bhai hota tu tumhare baba ka business sambhalta tumhari har khushi har gham ka khayal rakhta) 4rom that day swara always want to be a son of her mother she changed her look as a boy she remember how she write articles for a newspaper at night n earn some monney for her family
Tears of happiness start flowing 4rom her eyes
Swara : (monologue) di ur so lucky u got a brother...
Laksh become happy n hug him
Laksh : thanx yar but mujhe ragini se milna hai aik bar baat karni hai us se (I have to meet ragini once)
Sanskar : y not kal a jana yahan ghar per mein ragini ko ly aon ga n tum dono yahan aram se baat kar sakte ho (yes u can meet her tomorrow here)
Laksh : sanskar u r the best
Precape : ragini accepts laksh proposal...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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And another awesome update!!! Love it and supper exited to see what is kavita wala twist!! Tanks for the pm and continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hai yaar
Thank u so much for updating fastly...
It was again a nice one
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Episode 7
At night swasan r doing dinner
Swara : thanx sanskar whtever u r doing for di no one can do thank you so much
Sanskar : first of all im not doing it for u so no need to thank n second now ragini is my sister so its my duty to take care of her happiness
Swara : but it means alot to me
Sanskar : aise kxa dekh rai ho (wht r u looking at) am I looking handsome???
Swara : haahah very funny
Sanskar : stop laughing u have only 10 min
Swara : for wht??
Sanskar : apna kaam khatam karne k liye ab kxa daily remind karana pare ga k 9 o clock se ap ka study time start ho ga n mujhe late ane wale students bilkul nai pssand so I am waiting for u in my room remember pory 9 o clock na aik min bhi ziaxad na kam(to finish all ur works because ur study time will start at 9 o clock n I dont like late students)
Sanskar : agr aise hi beth k mujhe dekhti raho gi tu 5 min or guzar jayein gy (if u keep staring me like this u will waste ur more 5 mints)
Swara get up 4rom chair n quickly finish her all works carries her books n move towards sanskars room she enter in room n set on floor near to his legs
Sanskar : swara ur 10 sec late he shows her watch
Swara : sorry u know wht sir my daughter is only 1 n half years old she was not leaving me thats y I am late
Sanskar : ohh so it shows that ur husband is not a cooperative person am I right???
Swara : no no sir he is very cooperative
Both laugh together... sanskar start teaching her a lesson n she is feeling sleepy
Sanskar : swara neend a rai hai????( feeling sleepy???)
Swara : nai tu...(no not at all)
Sanskar : mujhe a rai hai (I mean Im feeling sleepy)
Swara : tu yeh lesson mujhe khatam karane k bad so jana (so u can sleep after completing this lesson)
Sanskar : kal kara doon ga dont worry (we shall complete it tomorrow)
Swara : ok
Next day sanskar goes to gadodia mention
Sanskar : chachi mein yahan ragini ko lene aya hoon (Im here to pick ragini with me)
Sujata : kyun us se kxa kaam???? wese bhi wo tumhare sath nai jye gi (y??? whts the matter n by the way she will not go with u)
Sanskar : ap kon hoti hain us ki life k decisions lene wali(who r u to take decisions for her life???)
Sujata : us ki chachi (Im her chachi)
Sanskar : wao mujhe tu pata hi nai tha tu aik kaam karte hain pehle ap se hi baat karta hoon (wao I really didnt know that so lets talk to u first)
Sujata : kia ?? (Wht)
Sanskar : yahan hi bata doon bad mein mat kehna k mene warn nai kia tha (here before of all then dont blame me that I did not warn u)
Sujata takes him in her room n ask
Sujata : jaldi bolo mere pass time nai hai (then speak up I dont have much time)
Sanskar shows her a file
Sanskar : yeh hai ap ki daughters ki medical report yeh us incident k bad li gye thi n u know wht with help of these reports I can easily prove that swara is innocent now think agr yeh reports media pe a gai tu ap ko pata hai kia ho sakta hai (see its a medical reports of ur daughters with this report I can easily prove swaras innocence now think If these reports comes on media then...)
Sujata : tu tum mujhe blackmail kar rahe ho(r u blackmailing me????)
Sanskar : exactly u got my point
Sujata : wht u want ????
Sanskar : laksh n raginis marriage
Sujata : Its impossible
Sanskar : gud tu mein media ko is case mein involve kar leta hoon (gud so I should involve media in this case)
Sujata : roko...theek hai mujhe manzoor hai (ok I agree)
Sanskar : I think u dont remember I am a police officer case ko deal kese karte hain mujhe buht ache se aata hai (I know how to deal the cases)
Sujata : tum acha nai kar rahe (u r not going well)
Sanskar : really ...???
sujata : theek hai i agreed but laksh n ragini ki shadi k bad yeh file meri (ok I agree but after the wedding of laksh n ragini this file will be mine)
Sanskar : deal achi hai but u r a needer n u know its a rule to sign a deal that needer have to accept all the conditions of a demander n sanskar maheshwari logon ki weaknesses ko hamesha apne pass rakhta hai kabhi bhi kaam aati hain (sanskar maheshwari always keep weak points of people because it really works)
Sujata : ok
Sanskar : gud laksh n his family will come next week
When he was coming ragini is standing on door n he goes with her in her room
Ragini : i dont have words wht should I say??
Snskar : I am ur brother u can say whtever u want
Ragini : swara is very lucky...
Sanskar : lucky se tumhari shadi ho rai hai he winks her ;-)(I think u r getting marry with lucky )
Ragini smile n sanskar place his hand on her head
Sanskar : u know wht i dont have a sister n now I got a sister so dont cry in front of ur brother he hates tears chalo mein tumhein lene aya hoon (lets go Im here to take u with me)
Ragini nodes in yes n both leave for mm
In mm laksh is sitting on couch n he is very tens swara is consoling him ragsan enter in mm laksh gets happiness of his life in front of his eyes ragsan too comes inside n sit on couch swara starts talking with ragini n laksh signaled sanskar to take swara outside
Sanskar : swara lets go today we will make tea together
Swara : y??? mujhe chai bana aata hai (y??? I know to make tea)
Sanskar : mujhe pata actually mujhe change karna hai (I know n I have to change my dress)
Swara : ab k kapre mene bed par rakhe hain (I have kept ur dress on ur bed)
Sanskar give her an angry look he cant control now he hold her hand n force fully take her to kitchen
In kitchen
Sanskar : pagal ho kya laksh ragini se akeele mein milne aya hai n tum ragini ko chor hi nai rai (r u mad laksh want to meet her alone y were u not leaving her)
Swara make a pout face n say
Swara : tu mujhe bol dete mein a jati ap ne bhi nai bataxa ok leave it let me make tea n some snacks(y u did not tell me)
Sanskar : meethai bhi rakhna (sweets too)
sanskar smile on her cuteness n think swara how innocent u r n I was doubting you I am sorry..
In room laksh n ragini look at each other n laugh on swaras innocence then laksh comes near ragini n knee down in front of her n say will you marry me ragini nodes in yes n both hug each other ...
Precap : raglak wedding n swaras dance...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update..
Swasan growing bonding is really adorable
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Very nice
update more soon
and pm me for the next part plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice update
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Nice story update soon loved the slow bond between swansan
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Episode 8
Gm is decorated with yellow flower because raginis mehndi ceremony is going on but no one is happy except one person swara she is soo happy n excited she is wearing a pink lehnga with orange dupatta
She is arranging everything of wedding after all its her sisters wedding to whom she love very much ragini is getting ready for ceremony when swara comes inside
Swara : wao maa tu kehti thi chand asman pe hota hai (u know wht maa said moon always enlighten on tje sky)
Ragini : han hota tha but aj kal mm rehta hai (hmm it was but now a days moon is living in mm )
Swara : acha g mere billi mujhe hi meao very bad
Both laugh n swara starts crying
Ragini : r u crazy y r u crying
Swara : di today u will go with laksh...:'(
Ragini : so wht mera bhai tu tumhein pehle hi le gaxa(so my brother took u)
Swara : bhai??? (brother???)
Ragini : hmm sanskar bhai
Swara : wht he is ur jiju di tum party change kar rai ho (u r changing the party)
Ragini : u r wrong Mrs. Maheshwari kyun k yeh party bhi tumhari hai tumhara sanskar hai tu party bhi tumhari hui (this party belongs to u too... because sanskar is urs so party is urs ;-) )
Swara blushes
Ragini : bas karo nai tu jiju control kese karein gy (stop blushing other wise jiju will not be able to control)
Swara : shut up n lets go
Ragini : aik shart per (at one condition)
Swara : wo kxa???(which condition????)
Ragini : agr tum dance karo gi tu (if u will dance)
Swara : nai mein nai karon gi(no di I shall not)
Ragini : theek hai phir mein yahan bethi hoon kesi or ko le jao rasam k liye(ok then Im here take someone else for all rituals)
Swara : ok lets go blackmailer
Both smile n goes down after finishing all the rituals
Ragini : swara chalo promise pora karo (swara its time to fulfil ur promise)
Swara looks around n feel relaex to see that sanskar is not here he goes to attend an important call she stand n start dance at that time sanskar come back n mesmerise to see swaras dance
Swara is dancing on
Kajra muhabat wala
akhiyon mein aisa dala
kajre ne leli mere jan
haye re mein tere qurban
he cant control him self n come close to her
Duniya hai mere peeche
Lekin mein tere peeche (she point her finger on sanskar)
Apna bana le mere jan
Haye re mein tere qurban...
she stop dancing because he is so close to her then he give a peck on her cheek she close her eyes...all claps for swara n sanskar realise that it was his dream
Swara thanx everyone n she is shock to see sanskar n hide behind ragini
Sanskar smile on her cute expirations
That night swara spend with ragini in GM both remember their childhood n their parents both cry but they r happy 4rom heart
Next morning swaragini r sleeping in their room when sanskar enter with arav n dolly
Sanskar : abhi tak so rai hain dono swara uthu 8 baj gye hain (they r still sleeping... swara wake up it 8 o clock)
Ragini get up
Swara : plzz sone do na buht neend a rai hai (plz let me sleep Im feeling sleepy more)
Arav : papa uncle ice cube formula use karein (papa uncle use ice cube formula)
Sanskar : ice cube formula ????
Arav : hmm mama anti ka ice cube formula agr ab kesi ko jagao n wo na uthe tu us ki shirt mein ice cube dal do wo uth jaye ga(mama anti told me this formula if someone is not waking put an ice cube in her shirt )
Sanskar : wait me abhi laya (Im bringing)
He was about to go when swara stops him
Swara : no... im getting up see mein uth gye (Im awake)
All laugh on her n she make a pout face
Today is ragalak wedding ragini is getting ready in a saloon
Swara is in her room she dont know how to wear a saree because she always wear cloths like a boy she is struggling with her saree when sanskar enter in room
Swara shock to see him inside n scream
Swara : ap yahan kya kar rahe ho??? (Wht r u doing here???)
Sanskar : arav n dolly ka poche aya tha(I came to look arav n dolly)
Swara : wo yahan nai hain plzz go (they r not here)
Sanskar : swara y r u screaming tum ne kapre pehne hui hain so stop screaming (u have wore ur dress)
Swara give him an angry look n finally wear it properly
Swara : wao I have done se sanskar mene saree pehen li u know di always make my fun now I shall show her that I can wear it she start jumping sanskar stares her with love
Sanskar : swara chalein (lets go)
Swara nodes in yes
Wedding rituals are going on in GM swara is so much happy
Sanskars phone ring he look at the number n become tens
Sanskar : swara I will be back
Swara nodes ok
He goes outside to attend the call
Sanskar : hello
Caller : Mr. Maheshwari kavita ko hosh a gaxa hai (kavita got conscious)
Sanskar : Thank god ok doctor mein pehle hi flight se mumbai a raha hoon plzz take care of her(Im coming)
Precap : Sanskar comes back 4rom mumbai n shock to see swara is crying in fear

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