Hai Nita dear i was being a silent reader of your story but now iam to control my Silence and hence commenting here.
I loved each and every part of the story and most importantly the way you have shaped up Sanskar's Character. It is very difficult to find a partner like Sanskar in today's world.
Thanks to you first and next Kavita for running away from Mandap or else we wld'nt have gotten SwaSan.
Felt bad for Swara in the begginning to get married forcefully to a person whom she had'nt met in her life but they say Everything Happens For A Good Reason.
Loved the way ayou have showed Sanskar's Understanding,care,concern towards Swara for making her feel comfortable as much as he can.
I don't know in which part was that but i seriously laughed at Sanskar's condition wen he was struck in Shekar' friends group and atlast his mobile had saved him.Liked Sanskar's idea of Bachelor's party to Swara to enjoy the night in her parent's house.Aah man Sanskar how can he be so understanding towrads Swara asked her to chose her own dresses even if they are Western dress and not to change her dressing style bcoz she got married.
Really loved the bonding of Besties SanArsh(sanskar+Adarsh)and the bonding of sisters where Pari had actually adviced Swara for a Date wid Sanskar and the Jealousy of Adarsh wen his son had stopped crying once he was in Sanskar's arms.
Swara's Outburst towards her mother was Justified where she was literally forcing her with the threat of her in laws wen her Husband understands her more. Thanks to pari for saving them from fighting.
I loved the morning scene of SwaSan in Adri's house where Swara kept her hands on Sanskar's chest.
Swara's jealousy wen she was seeing the album of Sanskar's college days i liked it very much and on top of that the way Sanskar was behaving wen his phone rang with Hearts onscreen.
Nita A Special Thanks for the Party update where you have shown Swara took Sanskar arm as her protecting shield without hesitation and their Dance where both felt current passing in each other through their touch i really liked the way Sanskar made her comfortable in party.
Aah Swara's outburst in the party was nice where they thought that she snatched him and wishes to be their at her place.
Oh my God Tara annoyed alot to me and even to Swara by making her feel that Sanskar married her under pressure and he only feels she is his Responsibility.
Thanks to Sankar before she could think anymore Cleared to Tara that he is very much happy in his Married lofe giving a Mental piece to swara.Liked the relief of Swara wen she had seen the Caller id name wid Hearts.
Gosh these two are very much comfortable wid each other and i was really very happy wen both unintentionally confessed falling in love wid each other.
Iam Loving this Slow Pace in SwaSan where u are perfectly showing Love is'nt an overnight realization.
Coming to our other jodi RagLak wat to say abt Ragini her Jealousy and insecurity always makes her to fail in her plans but can't blame her entirely as she herself is in the Hands of Annapurna where she is pressuring her to be a Good wife and Good Bahu.
Laksh his decision are sometimes very immature whera instead of making things right he messes it even more.liked how he helped Ragini in the matters of Jealousy and inturn Ragini shared each and everything wid Swara.
I does'nt want to say anything abt Annapurna the less i say is better.
Finally the best part of entire story is Uttara God this girl had went through a lot in such a small age and i loved her Mature decision to grieve alone instead of taking help.
I really loved her bonding with her bahbi's cum Sister's and her anger towards her Brother's specially Sanskar for keeping her in Dark abt his marriage.
Loved how she said to Swara abt her ending of friendship wid Kavita with whom her brother was Hurted.Loved the departure of Uttara where she was relieving her memories.
Thanks for this beautiful story Nita. Nita if possible PM me too the next parts.
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