FF: Forced into Marrying your Soulmate(T2: Epilogue 3 on 103[14/5/17) - Page 11

Originally posted by: sneharay

Superb Update..

Originally posted by: bharath91120

Very good

Originally posted by: Anusha62

Nita dear amazing update..
loved swasan convo,so swara got another sis uttara,liked worried ragini for swara..
sorry for short comment my net is very slow ya:(
nd update part soon..!!

Originally posted by: rayab_rajpoot

nice work

thanks for the pm

keep writing

Originally posted by: harshitaloomba1

Sorry for the late reply..

Awesome updates loved thrm all

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hey Nita 🤗

Sorry I am late and also that this isn't as lengthy as I would like but this is a busy weekend but I don't want to delay any longer in commenting.Hi Shruti dear, Sorry will never stop between us it seems 😆. And i dont want that, so i wont start with an Sorry as well about how late i am that i have yet to comment on DK chapter 27 ,or sorry for this late reply😉.. Also your comment matter a lot dear and not the length.. If it was even just one line i would still be super happy .

Another nice update with you having moved the progression of the story and particularly between the couples along a decent timeframe too. This one really actually belonged to Uttara in a way but yet the interaction between SwaSan was felt very nicely. I liked the explanation of Uttara and her background and the way it went from her anger at first against her brothers but managed so well with her sister in laws to them finding such a special bond. This extended not just to them but also included the brothers and hence helped their newly wedded relations too! Nicely done.Thanks dear... Yeah i know this one was more about Uttara. It just that i cant bring her and sideline her, so i wanted to give her some story too. But really happy to know you liked SwaSan interaction and the bond between all five😃

Loved the conversation between SwaSan again- more of their understanding each other and bringing walls down. Liked how Sanskaar is getting deeper affected- waiting for the day his control will slip 😉. Also nice that Ragini is so much more positive and the previous issues nicely resolved. Also the RagYa relation physically seems faster than SwaSan's does like in the show but of course the real connect SwaSan are finding touches me more...Slip will continue 😉.. Happy to know you find real connect between SwaSan scenes dear, you know that makes me super glad coming from an awesome writer like you 😃.. Yes Ragya always go on an a fast express mode 😆. Well i dont want to turn Ragini negative ,so i fast tracked her change too... A positive Ragya seems much better for my FF😉

Oh so the honeymoons are coming up!! Cannot wait to see what happens! Nice update again Nita...Honey moon track is coming up,but i just dont know how long it will take to materialize though, as i am still busy 😭. Thanks for the lovely comment dear

Love,

Shruti xoxo

Love

Nita

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hey Nita my dear pal...🤗 🤗

I've been meaning to comment for a few days now, but got delayed owing to a lot of work and official travel pressure, and not yet being back to full health. Thanks for bearing with me in the interim. 🤗,...Hi Viji dear.. Look how late i am on my reply ,so i totally get it ... Thanks for bearing with me as well... 🤗.

Congratulations on the new thread first of all. 🤗Thanks dear😊

I've told you this before, and I'll say it again: the steady, incremental progress you've shown in the bond between Sanskaar and Swara is so lovely and realistic. Love doesn't usually happen in a jiffy. The lasting kind of love, the soulmate kind of love, takes time to develop and flower in all its intensity. I really liked the party scene you showed in chapter 9, where Sanskaar was all lost in admiring Swara's beauty in that party dress. 😳 She really enjoyed his attention too, and had a sense of comfort and belonging, when being introduced as his wife. 😉 Though they are still on the voyage of discovering what they really feel for each other, a certain sense of possessiveness and familiarity has definitely started coming through...for both of them. 😊...Really happy to know you liked there steady and incremental progress in there bond.. Yeah Love cant happen in an jiffy at least that how i think😆. Yeah they might still not understand everything but slowly they are making it there... 😉

I loved the very mature way Swara handled those girls who were indulging in malicious gossip about her. She calmly told them that she wouldn't complain about them to her husband, but they needn't stay at the party since they obviously didn't identify with the reason for the event...to warmly congratulate the couple and share in their joy. 👏👏 That must have seriously put those gossip mongers in their place and shown them the mirror about how shallow they were. 👏.I want her to face them off, instead of stay hidden and still hold her ground . She didnt need that she is the boss wife card to make them feel bad, she can do it on her own...😊

I also loved how Sanskaar very calmly and firmly told that girl Tara, that her interest in him during their college years was completely one sided. As far as he was concerned, they were part of a friends group and that was it. So amazing and typical of Sanskaar, that he very politely but firmly said this in Tara's and Swara's presence. He is one cool dude...believes in speaking his mind, the full truth, without any unnecessary drama. 👏...He is Sanskar after all, he will always make us be amazed at him 😉... He knows how to handle any situations😆

So the mystery of the girl in Sanskaar's phone book...the one whose name was followed by a string of hearts...was his beloved kid sis Uttara. 😊 I kind of suspected that, so happy that my guess worked out correct. Swara must have felt very relieved. 😉...Almost all of them guessed it correctly .. I never thought i would fool any of you .😆

Coming to chap 10, I loved the family dynamics you've shown. Uttara's love for her parents and her guilt at their passing was wonderfully described. As was the way her bond developed with her uncle and aunt, to the extent where she started calling Sujata "Ma". Again, her feeling of guilt at that, and then how she came out of those feelings of blaming herself, were very well described. Aww i am so happy you liked Uttara part.. I like her,so had to give her some back story as well😉. I could have just kept her a Sanskar sister without no POV but i like her more so need to give her some credit as well.😊

Her bond with both her brothers---Sanskaar, of course, but also how she grew to be very fond of Lakshya too, was nice to read about.It was rivalry for Ramta affection turned to sibling love between Lakshya and Uttara.😆 ..

So Kavita was Uttara's friend...and Sanskaar didn't want her to worry and feel sad about how her friend had literally deserted her beloved bhai at the altar. But all's well that ends well...was so much fun reading about Uttara's bonding with both her bhabhis. That part, about Swara looking at Sanskaar, and him blinking at her to let her know that he was fine with her taking Uttara's side in her cute, child like quarrel with her brothers, was so cute. 😊 Very couple like. Uttara is still young and pampered, so her childish quarrels with her brothers made sense.. 😆 . Sanskar is an perfect gentleman he will never put Swara in fix like Lakshya😉

That conversation between Swara and Sanskaar was again, so perceptive and mature. They really are made for each other. And slowly, they are coming to feel for each other too. Those "slips" each of them made in their talk, indicating how each of them feels a bonding, a sense of belonging and protectiveness over the other...that was really well described...Slips will continue, it will let the other know what they are trying to hide... Thanks dear happy to know you liked there conversation.. I know there still newly wed but i like my couple to be mature and perceptive ..😉

So Lucky and Ragini take the next step in their relationship huh. 😉😳 I was laughing at that sentence about how Lucky didn't want to get Unlucky the next night, so he wanted to keep Ragini in good humor. 😆...Yeah i dont want there progress to be delayed, i am taking a page from the Cvs and going fast track just like the Cvs..😆 .. Lucky wants to be lucky 😉

And Annapurna...God, what a conniving, narrow minded, machiavellian person she is. Has no sense of family, no sense of perspective. So happy that Ragini seems to have discovered the goodness within herself, after her frank talk with Lakshya and Swara. She is still scared of her domineering, commanding mother, but has realized how wrong she is, how futile and venomous Annapurna's resentment towards Swara is. All her life, Ragini felt a bit jealous of Swara, and this feeling was actively caused and fueled by Annapurna. But now it looks quite hopeful that Ragini would be able to come out of that...Ragini is making quite a progress ... Annapurna is really narrow minded and conniving.. fueling a rivalry between two innocent kids at such a tender age was not right

And in the end, lovely tidings of the SwaSan honeymoon in New York. 😊 Wow...I love NY. Amazing place, I hope you give us scenes of them having a stroll in Central Park, walking down the Manhattan or the Brooklyn bridge, visiting the Statue of Liberty...😊 And RagLak going to Italy. Mamma Mia!! 😳😆...Will try to make it memorable... But i think you might be surprised by one scene.. 😉..

Waiting to read the next chapter my dear. Also, I will be traveling (this time on a much needed holiday 😊), from April 11 to 20. Please bear with brief comments in that time, I will be reading and commenting from phone...I am busy too dear.. Hoping that i will post it soon and not take so much time but i still have to get to it , on top of that i am little sick as well.. It feels like i got no stamina left in my body. Have fun on your holiday dear🤗

Loads of Love 🤗

Viji

Love

Nita

Originally posted by: arsh4heaven

first of all m sry dear i couldn't comment earlier

my pc was not working n i was busy too

so plz dont mind my delay... Come on look how late my reply is, so i totally understand dear.. Even i am lot busy nowadays.. So i totally dont mind 😃

back to the update

it was awesome as always

u r an awesome writer dear

i loved this ff

btw congrates for new thread dear..Thanks dear. 😃 I am so happy that you like this FF and your compliments made my day 😳

swasan was amazing their convo was mind blowing

i loved everything about their convo

sanskar always thought about swara n her comfort first

n the 'slips' which they done in their talks

that indicate their bond n this is the base of their future relation..Happy to know you liked SwaSan convo and you are right the slips are indeed the base for there future relation.. 😉

lakshya behave some time immaturely

thank god ragini apni ma ki bato me nahi aayi

looking forward for swasan honey moon

thanks for pm

do continue soon dear...Yeah , Lakshya is now solely focused on his wife at least till the honeymoon😆.. Ragini will be only positive from now on , i dont want any more villians.. Making SwaSan realize there love itself is an daunting task and having them tackle Ragini wont help there progress😆.. As i said lot busy will try to update asap

Love

Nita