SWASAN OS - Carpe Diem - Page 5

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

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Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hey Lucky my dear pal 🤗 🤗

First of all, before I get down to describing how much I loved this piece, yaar, please put a No Copy code on your OS. Better to be safe than sorry later. 😊

Coming to the story--so romantic, so sweet and so moving. It really was a Carpe Diem moment. 😳 How I wish we could see such lively interludes between SwaSan on the show too, instead of an incessant series of crises, and SwaSan having to battle each of them!

I loved all those sweet little moments in this OS--Sanskaar tenderly observing his wife's detective-giri (even though he must be quite tired of it! 😆). The way he reacted when Swara asked whether they should go over their action plan, was so hilarious as well as romantic. 😉 😆 I loved the way he said, with a tired but sweet, loving smile, that he remembered everything she had said, and she need not take his memory test. 😳

And that lovely moment between them---when he tells her, that he respects and adores how much she cares for his family---which is now their family---but he also wants his "couple time" with her, when she is his alone. The romantic way he asked, whether that was really selfish of him, was so very cute. And the answer is --of course he is not. 😉 Every couple needs to spend such together time also--its but natural, but for SwaSan, they get such moments so rarely, na? Always mission after mission! 😆

That late night escapade from home, driving in secret to have ice cream was so very lovely. As was the banter and sheer joy which they took in each others company. The whole sequence of the tenderness, yet the ardor and desire flaring between them, was portrayed in a very appealing manner. I've read it twice already, and each time I read those sections, I have this huge, dreamy smile on my face. 😳

Wishing SwaSan many more such lovely moments. Seize the day, indeed! 😊

Great job Lucky, hope to read more from you soon. 😊

Lots of Love,

----Viji

Originally posted by: Chexa123

That was a really cute and sweet OS...

Swasan away from all those crap happening at MM...

Such an affectionate and tender moment between them...

It was really good...

Originally posted by: bennetlizzy

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Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Beautiful OS :)

Originally posted by: sneharay

Its really lovely os..

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Lucky,

I should have done this earlier, much earlier,😭 but then much later than never. And I got to read it once again.😊

I had liked it the minute I read but somehow never got around to saying it. It was a sweet story that truly captured the beauty of their love of each other. The gently teasing of each other and tender love - despite the ever-present passion and desire they somehow end up expressing their love.

I did love the moments leading to the end too - Sanskaar slightly exasperated with his wife's detective way (in a loving fashion) he does love her a lot but then he is not wrong to wish he had her to himself for longer time, at least, a little more that than few stolen moments they get😊

Then the mischievous Sanskaar takes out his Swara for a midnight ice cream - stealing out of the house. An act in the heat of the moment which leads them to literally seize the day.

Please do write more and do PM me.

Best

Nyna