SWASAN OS - Carpe Diem

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

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nida

@mystery75

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Posted: 9 years ago

it was so sweet

with such a simple and normal setting

i toh just got completely lost in the os

really loved it😳

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sujay kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

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It was damn awesome os 👏
Seriously i loved it ❤️
Swasan 😳
Beautifully written
Thanks for pm

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mystery75
it was so sweet
with such a simple and normal setting
i toh just got completely lost in the os
really loved it😳

hey ..didnt get your name .would you mind sharing please

Thanks a lot😛🤗

Edited by lucky.m - 9 years ago

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Ginny potter

@Bluehue

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Posted: 9 years ago

awesome os. beautifully written... 😳

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mix_of_emotions

@mix_of_emotions

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Posted: 9 years ago

Omgg so cute...perfect moments n sequence looked like just for swasan.n best thing was dialogues. Yaar so well phrased convo between them I loved that line kabhi kabhi selfish hua karo tum...😳

Keep it up n keep writing more⭐️

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Nalini Ansh

@Bennet.Lizzy

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Posted: 9 years ago

That was awesome. I loved it to bits lucky...you so nailed it. Carpe diem it was..

Keep writing more. Would love to read anytime.

But a more detailed comment for this tomorrow

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Dear lucky😊

First of all Thankyou for that wonderful piece of work. It was such a blissful moment and I happened to read it last night just as I was about to hit the bed. Believe me your story made my day. I felt transported to the scene. I don't have to tell you how needed it was needed with the present drama unfolding on screen.

The whole picture of Sanskar sitting with a pillow hugged to his chest, gazing at his lovely wife through her rantings, and taking just the right amount of care to sooth her out of her growing discomfort about the incidents at home all so sweetly put forth. I loved how he explained his sudden declination with such balance leading her to feel guilty for a moment then suddenly making her feel comforted with those words. He was just awesome, you have dealt it so well.

I loved the icecream scene so much. The tenderness blooming with just the right touches of romance. His care for her comfort and the sudden yet subtle shift of expression in his eyes from an overwhelming desire to supple warmth.it was terrific work. Your OS just made me fall in love with the pair again

I'll be looking forward for more from you.

Lots of love

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Nupur

@Nupur_5

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Posted: 9 years ago

After the whole torturous week of no SwaSan & stupid, illogical drama, i this was a soothing balm!

Wish CVs give us something like this...Wish!

Lucky, this was really amazing, Thank you for this lovely OS :)

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Please give me some time to Unres dear Lucky- still sick and also working on DK but will comment as soon as I can manage x

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Lucky 🤗

Such a cute and blissful OS- much needed given the dearth of exactly these sort of scenes that we need in the show. Made me realise again how we always get cheated of so much they can show for SwaSan. I liked how Sanskaar was totally acknowledging of how exasperatingly irritating his wife can be and yet he loves her so much, finding cuteness in what most many would give up on 😆 His comments re her so called detective skills were so Sanskaar they made me smile. And I LOVED the "selfishness" he displayed 👏👏 That is so Sanskaar! Not the current one we see who just plays along with the other madness (except little scenes like the paani puri) but this was the Sanskaar I can relate to. I loved their little escapade and having an ice-cream break- perfect newly wed moments I so yearn to see! Their whole sequence there was sweet and yet sensual in its own way. Like you summed up at the end, the desire was swamped by the love and caring but of course it was and is very much there. Really enjoyed this and wish we could have had some nice post marriage scenes or should I say way more than we got on the show!

Oh and on carpe diem- off topic but in my old law firm, our (hated) time recording system was called Carpe-Diem! Lawyer humour! As we literally have to charge by time recording in 6 minute slots (yes I know its crazy!) we all have these online systems where we record and monitor every minute (almost) of our working days! Some bright spark decided it was "seizing the day", hence the name of the programme 😆 As I said, random but had to share!

Lots of love,

Shruti xoxo

Edited by tootiefrootie11 - 9 years ago