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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Lucky my dear pal 🤗 🤗

First of all, before I get down to describing how much I loved this piece, yaar, please put a No Copy code on your OS. Better to be safe than sorry later. 😊

Coming to the story--so romantic, so sweet and so moving. It really was a Carpe Diem moment. 😳 How I wish we could see such lively interludes between SwaSan on the show too, instead of an incessant series of crises, and SwaSan having to battle each of them!

I loved all those sweet little moments in this OS--Sanskaar tenderly observing his wife's detective-giri (even though he must be quite tired of it! 😆). The way he reacted when Swara asked whether they should go over their action plan, was so hilarious as well as romantic. 😉 😆 I loved the way he said, with a tired but sweet, loving smile, that he remembered everything she had said, and she need not take his memory test. 😳

And that lovely moment between them---when he tells her, that he respects and adores how much she cares for his family---which is now their family---but he also wants his "couple time" with her, when she is his alone. The romantic way he asked, whether that was really selfish of him, was so very cute. And the answer is --of course he is not. 😉 Every couple needs to spend such together time also--its but natural, but for SwaSan, they get such moments so rarely, na? Always mission after mission! 😆

That late night escapade from home, driving in secret to have ice cream was so very lovely. As was the banter and sheer joy which they took in each others company. The whole sequence of the tenderness, yet the ardor and desire flaring between them, was portrayed in a very appealing manner. I've read it twice already, and each time I read those sections, I have this huge, dreamy smile on my face. 😳

Wishing SwaSan many more such lovely moments. Seize the day, indeed! 😊

Great job Lucky, hope to read more from you soon. 😊

Lots of Love,

----Viji


Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
That was a really cute and sweet OS...
Swasan away from all those crap happening at MM...
Such an affectionate and tender moment between them...
It was really good...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

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It was damn awesome os 👏
Seriously i loved it ❤️
Swasan 😳
Beautifully written
Thanks for pm


Hi sujoy

Thanks a lot😛😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Helee

awesome os. beautifully written... 😳



Thank you😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25

Thank you😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: mix_of_emotions

Omgg so cute...perfect moments n sequence looked like just for swasan.n best thing was dialogues. Yaar so well phrased convo between them I loved that line kabhi kabhi selfish hua karo tum...😳

Keep it up n keep writing more⭐️


Hi

Thanks a lot😛 and glad you liked convo between swasan and about being selfish line ..swara is so selfless always worried about others happiness, I neither expect nor have any hopes for her to change😆 so one out of duo has to be selfish na😉 atleast for the sake of swasan and fans like us😆

Thanks once again😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: bennetlizzy

That was awesome. I loved it to bits lucky...you so nailed it. Carpe diem it was..

Keep writing more. Would love to read anytime.

But a more detailed comment for this tomorrow

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Dear lucky😊

First of all Thankyou for that wonderful piece of work. It was such a blissful moment and I happened to read it last night just as I was about to hit the bed. Believe me your story made my day. I felt transported to the scene. I don't have to tell you how needed it was needed with the present drama unfolding on screen.

The whole picture of Sanskar sitting with a pillow hugged to his chest, gazing at his lovely wife through her rantings, and taking just the right amount of care to sooth her out of her growing discomfort about the incidents at home all so sweetly put forth. I loved how he explained his sudden declination with such balance leading her to feel guilty for a moment then suddenly making her feel comforted with those words. He was just awesome, you have dealt it so well.

I loved the icecream scene so much. The tenderness blooming with just the right touches of romance. His care for her comfort and the sudden yet subtle shift of expression in his eyes from an overwhelming desire to supple warmth.it was terrific work. Your OS just made me fall in love with the pair again

I'll be looking forward for more from you.

Lots of love
N



Hi Nalini😛🤗

First of all thanks a lot for such lovely comment..makes me happy to know that this OS made your day😳 ad totally agree on drama currently happening the show 😡rips off my hopes of seeing swasan but stillI keep holding on with a flaring hope aaj nahi tho kal..kya kare love them so much😛

I just wanted to bring out how much we miss those moments in words of sanskaar ad how irritated I get often with swara's detective giri..happy to know that it played out well but our sanskaar is sanskaar 😉who loves his darlin wife hence back to his ever supporting comforting caring nature ..But I so wanted swara to feel guilty..😆sadist heart😆

Thanks for liking the ice cream scene as well..and thanks once again for lovely comment ..
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lucky
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Nupur_5

After the whole torturous week of no SwaSan & stupid, illogical drama, i this was a soothing balm!

Wish CVs give us something like this...Wish!
Lucky, this was really amazing, Thank you for this lovely OS :)


Hi Nupur 🤗

Thank you for reading and commenting and anything to do with swasan edit,vm or FF/OS always my pleasure😊 dear

Ya ..I know How it feels 😕..may be this OS was result of torturous week bestowed upon us by our loving CV's😡..wish we could we could atleast some bits of swasan this week😛

Thanks once again

Lucky
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

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Please give me some time to Unres dear Lucky- still sick and also working on DK but will comment as soon as I can manage x

Unres:

Lucky 🤗

Such a cute and blissful OS- much needed given the dearth of exactly these sort of scenes that we need in the show. Made me realise again how we always get cheated of so much they can show for SwaSan. I liked how Sanskaar was totally acknowledging of how exasperatingly irritating his wife can be and yet he loves her so much, finding cuteness in what most many would give up on 😆 His comments re her so called detective skills were so Sanskaar they made me smile. And I LOVED the "selfishness" he displayed 👏👏 That is so Sanskaar! Not the current one we see who just plays along with the other madness (except little scenes like the paani puri) but this was the Sanskaar I can relate to. I loved their little escapade and having an ice-cream break- perfect newly wed moments I so yearn to see! Their whole sequence there was sweet and yet sensual in its own way. Like you summed up at the end, the desire was swamped by the love and caring but of course it was and is very much there. Really enjoyed this and wish we could have had some nice post marriage scenes or should I say way more than we got on the show!

Oh and on carpe diem- off topic but in my old law firm, our (hated) time recording system was called Carpe-Diem! Lawyer humour! As we literally have to charge by time recording in 6 minute slots (yes I know its crazy!) we all have these online systems where we record and monitor every minute (almost) of our working days! Some bright spark decided it was "seizing the day", hence the name of the programme 😆 As I said, random but had to share!

Lots of love,
Shruti xoxo



Shruthi ..🤗🤗

Thanks a lot for taking out time and posting such a lamba comment in spite of not keeping well 🤗coming from you means a lot😛🤗


how much we miss old sanskaar na..these days hardly we get glimpses of what sanskaar used to be ad yes I wanted sanskaar to acknowledge on all our behalf how irritating swara can be sometimes😆 😆but in his way ..😳 like a total darlin he is..I so want him to be selfish when it comes swara😉 and their moments

Yes the undercurret would always be there like ice pack scene ..this was such a sweet moment sob just wanted to keep it that way ..hence that gentle swell of love but credit for this part goes to my buddy..will convey the same to her

Thanks once again

Lucky
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: harshitaloomba1

Loved it hope it happens in real too



thank you ..😊

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