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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Bhanu nice update...

Lol wow...finally slow and steady the jealousy is happening between both love birds...really enjoyed the mehndi convo was my favourite part...oh how I wished Sammy took her hand and kissed it...

Sujata auntie in your story too sweet. .And both panicking...to cute...

Bhanu this part was perfect complement to the last episode...I must say kavita is working her magic in helping swara declare her love...how I wish satvik would leave swansan alone...poor sanky cannot catch a break. ..

Sangeet cliffhanger very bad...Please make them dance together. ...

Update soon and keep smiling...

Thanks for pm..

Raz

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Ginny potter

@Bluehue

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#72

awesome chapter. I m loving jealous swara... but this KMH sathvik needs to know his limits. 😛 plz let's swasan dance together in next chapter 😊 update soon. thanks for the pm.

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Kaveetha

@Kaveetha

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#73

You are bhanu.. Am i right? Nice name.

It was not boring dear. Infact it was beautiful.Lovely update. 👏

Ha ye sathvik ko kahi dur bhejdo... Every time he is peeping in to others things. 😕 & this kavitha.. oh god, iski problem kya he.. I know my name is also kaveetha, but i don't like her..

Dear i don't know what happened to you, but ithna zarur kahungi.. Time will help you to cure your wounds. May lord buddha bless you.

I 'm a sri lankan, so plz ignore my hindi mistakes. Thnks for the pm friend.

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357159pikachu

@357159pikachu

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Hey friend,

really great work.👏👏👏 Iss Sathvik aut Kavitha ko ek kaam karo kahi Pacific ocean mein phenk aao jahan par bahut saari sharks hon. ya fir better idea. Piranha 3D ke director ko de aao aur unhe kehna unki Piranhas ke luch ka intezaam ho gaya hai. 😈😈But jab tak Swara confess na karein tab tak Kavita ko mat Phenkna. Jaise hi confess kar dein swara usko mein phenk aaongi.

And yr i tell u Swasan jodi is really awesome but iss FF ko padh kar lagta hai ye Swasan jodi zyada awesome hai. Kam se kam ismein swara apne dil mein baat Sanskar ke khatir hi rakh rahi hai. Plz jaldi update kardo.

And ya one more thing, I dont know whats the matter but on reading the comments i understand something bad has happened 😔😔😔 so dont worry main update ke liye wait kar sakti hoon.😉

And may all your probs go away in the air and you become real happy back again.😊😊😊

TC and Stay Strong

P.S.- I am really bad at consoling. Sorry agar kuch gondogol kar diya hon. Mera kuch nahi ho sakta hai.

Edited by 357159pikachu - 9 years ago

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357159pikachu

@357159pikachu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: bhanu16

ur comment really made me laugh today koi baat nahi hum phenk denga

thankyou you so much dear ur liking my ff this much nd for ur lovely consent

I am really glad to have brought a smile or as you say a laughter on ur face. and believe me I am planning to write an OS (after u complete the entire story including the epilogue) in which i will throw kavita in a distant where she wont be able to see herself in anyway so forget about sanskar. aur sath ko North pole mein phenkoongi usmein. 😆

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Kaveetha

@Kaveetha

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: bhanu16

thanks you so much dear it mean alot

i had lot my one and only bestie she is the best part of my life dard hai par meri pass koi opinion nahi

koi baath nahi vunke sapna meri sapna bangaya i will fulfill ever wish

arey aye bath hindi ke hi toh my mother tongue is not hindi but my career made mee learn it

I'm sorry to hear that.. Don't worry. Everything will be fine.

That's the spirit dear.. Go for it. 👍🏼

My mother tounge is sinhala, i learnt hindi by watching films, i can't use it as grammatically corret. But i hope to learn hindi after finishing my higher studies.

Take care.. 🤗

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kinjal

@sahakinju

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Nice one bhanu.
Love the jealousy of swara.
Thanks for update,
My first reading is your story so i like this so much.

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Ginny potter

@Bluehue

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#78

awesome chapter bhanu. 😊 loved the song sequence ( my latest favorite song) and the confession. 😳 oh god what's kavita's problem. 😡 but hope swara will believe sanskar this time... he won't be able to handle her mistrust again. 😔 will wait for next. thanks for the pm.

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kamila.

@Seriously.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Hey bhanu.. Awesome.. Swara confession ohhhooo.. Really superb... Kavity.. Eww disgusting... Hope Swara will trust him this time...

With love..

Kam..

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357159pikachu

@357159pikachu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#80

Awesome confession. Pyaar hi pyaar aaya uss confession. Agar sab nahi hote na then sanskar apni punishment dene lagta😉. Awesome. yr iss Kavitha ko iss baar sahi mein phenk do. 😡

But mere paas ye haq nahi hai, ye haq sirf swara ke paas hai. After all USKE SANSKAR 😉 ke saath ussi Kavitha ne aise kaise misbehave kiya. I feel like kicking her out of the world to some alienated planet where she wont even find water or best AIR to survive. 😡😡

But I know for sure Swara will trust her Sanskar, no matter what... this is LOVE else she doesnt love him😡😡😡.