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singithi

@singithi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#291

Perfect part dear.
Nooo please don't give that end to them. Please. Don't seperete them like that...
And dear don't stop writing. Ur an awesome writter. Please keep writing. Well enjoying a Lott ur writing. Please write... Keep it up ur marvalous work...

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Annu

@ANNU30

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Posted: 8 years ago

#292

Bhanu👏👏

The way u r updated every part was 👏👏.

Please don't separate swara and sanskar. Punish that sathvik -😡----- through sanskar. How he think that swara will come to him and he will touch her😡 disgusting.

I wish sanskar got to know about that ba-----😡😡 and punish him

Please update soon

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#293

Bhanu...

Marvellous update dear...i was tear eyed...swasan last hug in jail after night of romance...i was all sad...sathvik i hate him...thank God nothing bad happened with swara...kavi came on time n sanky too...but she drank poison...ohhh...dont want any sad ending bhanu..plzzz give happiest ending...

Waiting

Talia

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kinjal

@sahakinju

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Posted: 8 years ago

#294

Hii bhanu.
What a beautiful part dear.
You define the meaning of love in this part. Love your work always.
Please waiting for epilogue.
Please write another ff Waiting for your next story dear

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357159pikachu

@357159pikachu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#295

👏 For all the chappys. Sorry sab par comment nahi kar paayi. literal waala sorry.

😳 Shaadi wale parts were so awesome. Sanskar ki sangat mein Swara became even more naughtier. Poor Laksh Ragini. they have to suffer the consequences of Swasan's mischiefs. Swasan are the naughtiest in this FF. Loved all the updates.

Now for the last chapter. You really made me cry. 😭😭😭. Swara aur Sanskar ka pyaar is really unimaginable. I mean they have that one in a thousand type of love. Swara wanted to give her life away after becoming Sansakr's. 😳 She is the devi here also.

This Sathvik should die and reach to hell.😡 The devil is waiting for him to come and take his place. I can tell that the Devil might be feeling jealous that he cant reach to the level of Sathvik.😡 I mean a person who can stake his brother's life for his selfish reasons can do anything. There is no limit for such a guy.😡 Killing wont be enough for him. I want Sanskar to beat him black and blue everyday till he becomes paralyzed and stays alone in a room without any family member and a male nurse😈.

And Swara ko mat maaro plz. how will Sanskar survive without her? he loves her so much and so does she. they are each other's only weakness. PLZZZ. I cant see them dying.

And after ur FF i have started loving Kavita also. Hats off mate.

ALL IN ALL AWESOMEEE👏. Jitne emoticons daalu utne kam hain. Awesome work. Fantastic. Fabulous.

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357159pikachu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#296

(dramatically) Nahi aisa nahi ho sakta! kehdo ki ye jhoot hai! Tu meri maanat khatam nahi ho sakta. (drama over)

yr awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 Itna dhinchak update tha. Thank god Swara is safe. Aur Sathvik bhi Sudhar gaya. Good paring. Bure ke saath bura, KAVSATH. they really suit each other. they would complete each other just like AdRi. Ek ke paas nahi toh doosre ke paas kisi aur ki life spoil karne ke idea zaoroor hoga. Their life is so cute. Ragini was like "YOU ARE PREGNANT FROM 3 MONTHS AND YOU DIDNT EVEN KNOW ABOUT IT." Really? Swasan are too much. 😳

And Sohan is so like Sanskar. Sanskar ka chota version. PARTNER😆. Wah! Aisa koi partner kaash meri bhi life mein hota. And Sanskar ka manane ka tareeka was so Sansakari😳. Sohan ke upar bura asar padh raha hai. Picnic😆. Saanvi pe line maar raha hai Sohan. Sathvik is a great dad and brother. Sohan really said it "ONE DAY YOU WILL YOURSELF GIVE YOUR DAUGHTER TO ME." 😲 And that too to Sathvik.😲 Sanskar ne sahi mein Sohan ko bigaad ke rakha hai. I really loved the father-son duo bonding. And Sanskar ka ASanskari mode 24*7 one rehta hai😳. Loved Sohan to the core.

This FF makes SwaSan even more speciai. Pehli baat toh itne saare chappys and if we read one we cannot stop to read the next. Awesome work! loved it! Dhaasu! Out of the World (specially Sohan and Sanskar, sorry i cant get over the duo)!

Aur plz write fast. will be waiting to read further more stories. And next time please story itni tragic mat banana. I mean dont make so many villains. Like a cute love story with Naughty Sanskar and Sweet on outside and Mastikhor on inside Swara.

FANTASTIC WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#297

Bhanu darling..

I dont knowabout other but im with you in this entire journey...

It was a delight to be part of thus journey...swasan slow friendship which turn to undying love for each other...i enjoyed alot...epilogue made me soo happie...swasan ..raglak..kavsat with each other..all misunderstanding n problems solved...people forgiven n gave second chances..the glimpse to future was overwhelming...sohan ...swasan son teasing kavsath daughter...sanvi...regan raglak son..it was sooo cute..i cant describe...love it...

Wish we could have sequel...love u dear...thank u for this journey...

Talia

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kinjal

@sahakinju

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Posted: 8 years ago

#298

Hii bhanu miss this character so much &miss you too dear, but not for long
I love this epilogue &whole ff dear end was soo beautiful.
Three kids are really good.
Waitingfor your next ff

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