SWASAN TS: ALEXAMENOUS(LAST PARTup on pg1 ON 1/04)

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Esha

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Aweome work mukta dear...love ❤️

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Razia Ajmal

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Nice update will be waiting to read the others soon..

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Aayat23

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: _Esha_
Aweome work mukta dear...love ❤️

Hey Thank you Esha dear...

Glad to know you liked it. .

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Nalini Ansh

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hello! Mukta is it?

I have read quite a few works of yours (silently) they are so refreshing always. Bringing out old memories and glazing them new. Showing them in a new light. It's so heart warming

This one seen is my favourite. Just like it is for everyone. And you did an awesome job with it while also bringing those lovely feeling back to surface. I see that this is a ts and I'm sure it's going to be just as wonderful.

Please let me know on any update. Would love to read anything coming from you

Love

Nalini

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Res 😊

Shall Un Res soon

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Hey Mukta dear 🤗 🤗

A very nice beginning. I'm glad you have taken up the tale at this very fascinating juncture in the serial plotline, but with several key modifications of your own. I am so very glad that you made Swara and Sanskaar talk over the fact that he loved her; instead of the prolonged period of uneasiness which was portrayed in the serial.

Sanskaar, here, as in the serial, is so mature and selfless. He loves Swara unconditionally, and reassures her straight away, that he would never compel her to accept his love. He also assures her that he would always remain her friend, and I liked the way he asked her to continue regarding him a very close friend, the same as they had been before.

The chapter reminded me of one of my favorite scenes from the serial--Sanskaar's drunken love confession. Thanks for bringing back those amazing memories. 😊

Also, in your story line, has the "sindhoor marriage" happened? What I mean is, prior to Sanskaar's love confession, did the story proceed as in the serial, with Lakshya insisting that Sanskaar fill Swara's maang in the mandir at home?

Also, an interesting twist by you, that Swara and Sanskaar are not in a "fake marriage", rather, they have got married for real, with a contract that they would split in 6 months after bringing out Ragini's truth.

Eagerly looking forward to the next chapter.

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Aayat23

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Thank you everyone for your feedback..:-)

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Aayat23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

I'll be updating next part by tomorrow.
Sorry for delay:-(

Edited by muktai - 9 years ago

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Hansika.....

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Awesome update dear.
Loved the way u have shown sanskar cofessing his crimes and my most beautiful scene Sanskar's confession both in show and in ur story, You have portrayed sanskar's character very well.
Continue soon dear

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sujay kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Awesome update
Loved it 😳
Ragini 😡
Update soon

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jess_27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

part 2 was wonderful... swara finally getting to see sanskar's unconditional love for her and his undying support...

the scene with swara crying on his shoulder, and sanskar teasing her for making his shirt wet was very sweet..

sanskar is a true gentleman and he knows how to protect his girl.. ragini ke drama ka bahut acha jawab diya swara ne... im loving ur story... update part 3 soon..

love

Jessica

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