SWASAN TS: ALEXAMENOUS(LAST PARTup on pg1 ON 1/04) - Page 16

Originally posted by: Olivia12

Hello dear,
Loved your take on the sequences from the show with your own amazing inputs.
As you have written in the introduction, your focus is Sanskaar's selfless love for Swara and Swara's unshakable trust on Sanskaar. True to your words you have excellently presented this TS until now and last one will hopefully conclude it on a beautiful note. Looking forward for the final part.
Thanks for PM.
Lots of love,
Olivia

Originally posted by: princessSonia

Plz do update soon...

Eagerly waiting for the update...

Originally posted by: ILoveToRead.

Its fabulous!

Originally posted by: rayab_rajpoot

hi mukta 😊

its awesome buddy

i wished swara would have reacted same way in serial too😉

thanks for the pm

keep writing more😛

Originally posted by: bennetlizzy

hello mukta!!

im so late i know.

such a wonderful take. swara litrally jumped out my screen today. i could hear her voice boom in the hall of maheswari mansion while throwing glances at sanskar looking awestruck by her intensity. i felt teleported.you are truly amazing. i love your works.

as i have said its really a blessing to relive these moments dear and i once again thankyou for that.

you have so perfectly toned those dialogues and gave them the right depth and intensity. looking forward for more. i would read as many parts as you could deliver if this is what i get

lots of love
n

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

My friend,

First of all sorry for my late reply.

The third part was mind blowing.The starting of the update was nice. I felt something fishy. But the ragini's molestation drama was never expected. Sanskar was in a dilemma.

But I really loved the entry of swara. And she gave a tight slap to both laksh and ragini. They deserve this. And the dialogues of swara was awesome.

Swara's trust for sanskar was nice. And she was supporting him.

Jab mushkil Mai hoga hum,

Hamara Sahara banega vo

Jisse hum par yakeen hai

Jo ladega hamareliye poori duniya se

Pyar mushkil vakt mai saamne ate hai.

Thanks for the pm

Waiting for your next update

Originally posted by: chandanagimsy

This was amazing..how the hell did I miss this for these many days...one Di.. It's awesome..the quote about true feeling was very apt a.d the way swara stood for her best friend SANSKAAR was amazing..waiting for next part now

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

superb update dear
omg swara's each dialogue was spot on
loved it update soon

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hi Mukta 🤗

Hi VIJI🤗

Lovely chapter. Swara strongly defending Sanskaar and proving Ragini's cheap molestation allegations wrong, was simply awesome. And that last slap to Ragini was making me go all 👏 👏 Completely deserved! Very quick thinking by Swara, using Ragini's call logs and voice records to prove that she had framed Sanskaar.

Thank you for liking this chapter. Glad you liked Swara's strong determination.

While imagining that slap I had same feelings😉. She deserved them😊. Swara you know na how quick in planning and deciding😆

I really liked the modification from the serial plotline you had shown---wherein Swara also realizes how much Sanskaar's trust and love mean to her. She has realized that she loves him, too. 😳

You liked modification from serial plotline seriously, I so wanted Swara to realize her feelings, so ended up showing that.

Lakshya is so indecisive and juvenile. Even when Swara told him the complete truth when she met him at the bridge, he still chose not to believe her. He only trusted her when she showed him that video recording. And then, without even thinking of all the wrongs he had done, he straight away wants to pretend that things can go back to normal.

Lakshaya😡😡 I better not to start speaking coz I will be never stopping.

He coolly says that Swara can divorce Sanskaar, and get back together with him after he divorces Ragini! He does not seem to realize the implications of his lack of trust in Swara at all...

HE NEEDS STRONG SLAP FOR THIS BUT WHAT WE CAN DO...BUT SWARA HAS GIVEN HIM MUCH NEEDED LECTURE IN NEXT PART.😃

Poor Sanskaar...😭 He came at the bridge at just the time when Lakshya was telling Swara this. Now he may feel that Swara also still loves Lakshya, still wants to get back together with him. I hope Swara manages to tell Sanskaar of her feelings for him, too. Very soon. 😳

poor sanskar he has to be present at wrong time and yeah he misunderstood and now will be back in his I will stay away from you mode. Don't worry Swara will take care of him.

Lots of Love,

---Viji

LOTS OF LOVE AND PRAYERS FOR YOUR SPEEDY RECOVERY

MUKTA