Ragya ss- Mere dilki malkin part21 up PG 47 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: dewcute

Read the updates..

Very well written...

thanks 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
omg its soo nice..😳😳
really loved it..👏👏
raglak pain
continue soon😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Thanks for this beautiful story first its really Going Fantastically Yaar and loving it to much And Thanks for Pm dear Very very Nice and Raglak pain :((
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: mansinarang95

omg its soo nice..😳😳

really loved it..👏👏
raglak pain
continue soon😃

Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Wonderful emotional update. Loved the way laksha trying to get old ragini back. Loved the way you discribe raginis pain very well. Waiting for next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Thanks for the update and the PM. Laksh is vry funny. And even Ragini, sometimes...Ice bucket challenge. Lol!!😆
Awesome. Loved it.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Awesome update.👏
Loved the way Laksh made Ragini realize her mistakes. I can feel Ragini's pain. And Laksh is such a sweetheart. I can even feel Laksh pain after Ragini told him to go away from her. Plzzz update the next part soo. Eagerly waiting. Thanks for the PM.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Humnava

Thanks for the update and the PM. Laksh is vry funny. And even Ragini, sometimes...Ice bucket challenge. Lol!!😆

Awesome. Loved it.😊

Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Wow really emotional update thank you

So finally he said it hurts him when she is in pain

Aww she still loves him she cannot hurt him no matter what

Can't wait to read the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Hi, everyone so here is the 6th part of this story it consists of ragya povs. Thanks a ton for reading and appreciating the story up-till now. pls do read this part and leave ur preciouse comments.


Part-6

Ragini who saw him felt broken, she questioned herself y was she doing this y did she hurt him when his pain is hers.. The answer was her over cautious brain and extreamly broken heart but was it's Laksh's fault completely ( thinking all this she gets up with the support of the sofa and starts to go to her room, SwaSan who came out of their their room listening to the loud voices saw her and spoke up)

SwaSan -Ragini( they came close to help her , but she showed them her hand sining to stop which was well understood by them)

SwaSan - Par Ragini!!

R- Pls! swara humein akela chod do pls..

(ragini tries to control her tears but she could not and hence even with an injured ankle too she manges to go to her room but directly falls on the bed without closing the door ...)

Ragini enters her room and falls on bed and starts crying bitterly with a pillow in her hand. She cluched it close to her mouth such that her mouth is covered with it and no one can hear her sobs..

Laksh is on the other hand sitting on a bench in MM garden.. he is teary eyed feeling broken and hurt.. looking at the sparkling night sky.

The MM wasis are worried for them but they decide to leave them and hence they go to sleep..

SwaSan saw Ragini crying in her room and they saw Ragini crying bitterly and from the window of their room they saw Laksh sitting broken on a bench but finding no clues what to do they too sleep now..

In swasan room-

Sw- Sanskaar yeh Ragini aur Laksh ki zindagi mein kya ho raha h..

Sa- Tension mat lo swara sab theek hoga Uparwale par bharosa rakho ... who har cheez aache k liye hi karta h

Sw- u r r8 well gn

Sa- Gn

While RagLak at their respective places are crying and thinking -

RAGINI POV- yes , laksh was r8,I have always been wrong.. I was hurt this a truth but now I have hurted everyone Swara, Sanskaar and Laksh and was ready to hurt them more.. How? How can I stop so low ? I messed up everyones life .. if till today swara and mama and papa suffured it was because of me. If sanskaar fell in LUV with swwara it was because of me and vice- versa is al my deeds. I have broken these 3, I have forced them to move on when only if I had moved on early then all the mess would not have been created .. I tried to disrespect papaji..i tried 2 put dirty allegation on sanskaar Chiii.. I tried to kill swara 2wice.. chiii.. I killed myself, I have taken all the hardworkk of papji and sanskaar ... y? Y? just b'coz of of My love...

In the name of love I have done so wrong .. I have insulted a feeling called love .. I tried to separate swasan again and laksh's reaction of kidnapping me was obvious.. I don't deserve to be here, hurting laksh .. Killing him every second of his life.. I'm forcing my love on him.. no no no I cant do it I have no r8 .. no r8 .. and thinking all this she sleeps with guilt in her heart...

LAKSH POV- I deserve this, all this what ragini said was r8 ... I'm a fool I don't know how to love .. I hurted Ragini so much that , I killed the the sweet innocent Ragini... Today also her behavior is b'coz of me .. I know she got obssed but I was no different .. It took me time to underatnd that swara is no more mine and in this process I have hurted 3 people the most Swara, Sanskaar and ragini .. I accused ragini of being obssed for me and ende dup doing the same .,. I accused her for killing swra twice but what in the end I tried to kill her 2wice that too very horribly..

Look at her she lacked her mother's love all her life, then the revelation of her father in love with someone eels, she having a step sister Ohh!! If I would be on her place I would have never forgiven thembut she did except everyone whole heartedly... now sharmishtha maa is her own maa.. But on top of this I the great stupid laksh Maheshwari broke her heart 3rice toh yeh toh hona hi tha . If I feel so broken when swara left me and went to sanskaar then what have been her condition after that tragic life me and my stupidities have killed heer .. I'm responsible for her state .. I'm .. and he too sleeps on the bench thinking this...

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