Ragya ss- Mere dilki malkin part21 up PG 47 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: rbb1

Nice update thanks

Lol ice bucket challenge that was funny

aww him holding her hand while talking on the phone cute

Wonder what will happen next

Hope you post the next part soon

thanks and yes i am just typing it now so hope for the best... storyis ready till part 6 and 7 half so i will try to posts more asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
amazing
actually nw I m addicted to ur ff
can't wait fr nxt one
I totally in luv wid dis raglak especially dis laksh
oh god he s so crazy nd smart
thanks fr pm
u r a fabulous script writer I must say
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Oh god.. .mazaa aa gya...
The ice bucket challenge 😆
"Chuhe kha gye"🤣
It was really amazing yaar...he holding her hand while on phone...
Go lucky. .u r amazing. ..m on ur side in the redemption of malkin ji...
God!!! This is the first ff m reading with Laksh as smart n non-impulsive..in all it is from ragini's side n this one is from lucky's side so m loving it more n loving Laksh more n more n more...

Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Wonderful update dear. Loved the way laksha trying to make ragini redum and bringing her back to herself. Do continue soon. Waiting.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome 👏
Ice bucket challenge 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update...
Thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi everyone so this is the last update for today cause now i am tired of typing well this is the longer part and from here actuall and seriouse redumption track starts i am sorry for this part beinga bit sad but pls do read andgive ur opinion on thispart as well as ragya an track . so now we go .

PART-5

It has ben a week, Laksh is trying to convince ragini to let him enter his room but it was in vain.. swara was also back and was shocked to see their open fights and the new methods laksh was using 2 convince ragini which also irritating Ragini to her limits increasing her anger..

The another trick of this newlydiscoved methord by laksh was talking about his back - pain everywhere with everyone without disclosing the reason

At dinner time -

Laksh is on phone and rgaini is going down for the dinner when she stops hearing his convo -

l- hazan bhai Omi! Koi ( sees ragini coming ) KOI AACHA DOCTOR H KYA??

Ragini gets irritated and standswith folded hand..

L- who kya h na mere Back mein bahut pain h

Omi- kya hua bhai

L-(looking in ragini's eyes)- UNKNOWN reason h bhai.. chal call u later

Omi- hmm

Laksh cuts he call

R- Kya zaroorat h sabko batane ki

L- aree!! Ab kya doctor ko bhi nahi dhoondh hunga kya

R- humein sab pata h konsa doc ko dhoondh rahe ho ( and leaves stamping her feet.. this time she is more angry)

l- oho!! toh bata do

R- kya ??

( she suddenly turns to speak but loses her balance on the stairs)

hmmm...
Yeh moh moh ke dhaage
Teri ungliyon se ja uljhe

Laksh runs and saves her from falling

(ragya share an eye lock)

Yeh moh moh ke dhaage
Teri ungliyon se ja uljhe
Koi toh toh na laage
Kis tarah girah ye suljhe

Hai rom rom iktaara
Hai rom rom iktaara
Jo baadalon mein se guzre


Ragini again had flashes of laksh trying to kill her and all thr love which was deep inside her heart and was oozing out of her bleeding heart filled into her was lost. It's place was taken over by disgust and disbelief for laksh she pushes laksh away...

Laksh sensing her feelings simply leaves ..

Yeh moh moh ke dhaage
Teri ungliyon se ja uljhe
Koi toh toh na laage
Kis tarah girah ye suljhe

L- are u okay

Ragini tries to move without saying a word when she falls again..

R- aahh..

Laksh again catches her ...

L- Ragini !! Pagal ho! Agar gir jati toh? Kahin lagi toh nahi na

Laksh gentle places ragini in her old standing position with his hand supporting her

r- aahh!!

( ragini had an ankle twist) Unable to see heer in pain laksh lifts her in his arms and makes her sit on the sofa)

L- Kaka! Doctor ko bulana.. Tumhe samajh nahi ata kya .. aapna dhyan nahi rakhti ho.. abhi gir jati toh socha h kya hota

R( teary eyed jerking his hand )- kyun ? kyun? Laksh kyun kar rahe ho aap esa! ab kya chate h humse .. ab konsa (crying) konsa dhokha dena chahte h humein? Ya iss bar zehar dekar mana h humein? Humein bata deejiye na !! boliye na!!1

L( shocked)- Ragini ! Yeh tum kya bol rahi ho..

R( with disgust)- SAACH!! Sach keh rahe h hum! Aaj tak yahi toh karte aayen h ! har bar apne matlab k liye humare jasbaton se khela h aaapne!!

L( getting hurt)- Ragini ! yrr kya bol rahi ho mene kahana I'm really sorry for what I did in past but ..(cut by ragini)

R(teary eyed)- Haha .. good joke Mr. maheshwari u r were and will never be guilty for what all wrong u did

L- Shut - up ! 1stly I am really guilty for my deeds and 2nd ly u have no write to do say so cause u have commited bigger crimes than I did (looking directly into her eyes)

R- haan haan haan !!! hum jante h bahut galat kiya h apni behen ki zindagi kharab karne mein koi kasar nahi chodi, aapke bhai par galt ilzam lagaya aur aapka bhi dil toda h .. I know my crimes are too big and koi mafi nahi h unki aur

L- Aur there is no justificstion for them

R- I Know! But u know what U r a traitor ! u have broken my heart several times and so much that it have stopped beating but it is bleeding it is bleeding Mr. laksh Maheshwari ... How will u cure it.. jab humara dil toota swara ki wajahse toh I tried to kill her and when ur heart broke because of me u tried to kill me so what is the difference b/w us

L( hurt+ Moist eyes)- I KNOW!! Ragini I was wrong aur pharak h bahut bada pharak h , pfarak yeh h ki I am guilty for my crimes and I am not committing any more and u, u are neither guilty nor in any mood to stop ur drama but pls now stop all this yeh sab bhool jaao aur pls apni chot dikhaoo it might be paining

R(confused)- AApko kya farah padta h ?? .. (she paused for a few seconds when her alert brain started thinking more and more ) nahi nahi kuch toh kuch toh chahiye aapko batayiye na kya chate h

L-Shut-up.. I ..

R-got it aapko ghar aur Co. wapas chahiye h na. toh isskeliye itni mehnat sse natak karne ki zaroorat nahi h I will give them back to u yeh lo( handing over the keys of MM to laksh) aaj abhi chabiya dete h aur ghar aur co. k paper bhi aapko jaldi hi wapas dedein ge par pls don't play with my heart again plss...

Laksh was shocked and felt hurt to see so much disbelief in their relationship he did not want to hurt her or anyone now he is trying to change himself into a responsible person but here ragini is not ready to accept him and is continuely acussing him as the cause of her heart break ... her miseries ..

L- sshhh!11 CHUP BLIKUL CHUP( red eyes) ho jao samjhi , kya bol rahi ho samajh bhi aa raha h tumhe! Iti si baat ka ita issue bana rahi ho aur pls patti karwalo yrr it might be paining aur dc bhi aarahe h ..

R- Koi zaroorat nahi h

(ragini now again jerks laksh's hand fom her legs)

This was it for him

L(stood up)"Shivam store se danda la

Sh- ji bhaiya ji

Shivam gives him the stick which he further hands over to ragini..

L- tumhe lagta h na ki mene tumhe hurt kiya lo marlo mujhe mar dalo par pls khud ko koi takleeef mat do

r- kyun na dien kyun..

L- KYUNKI TUMHE CHOT LAGTI H TOH DARD MUJHE HOTA H..hit me damit kill me but pls don't hurt urself..

Ragini was numb now she could not believe her ears, her heart said pls stop it but mind won over it.. she could not believe laksh now..

l- MARO MUJHE ..agartumhe shanti milti ho toh I am ready

Ragini held the stick tight with Red swollen eyes, lifted up and hit with full pressure but not laksh.. her own hurted ankle

R- aaahh.. ( cries miserably)

S- RAGINI!!!

Laksh turned towards ragini

L- kya kiya h tumne ..

R- kaka doc ko bulane ki koi zaroorat nahi h aur yeh who h jo har bar humare sath hota h ek hi jagah par bar bar chot lagi h par koi malham nahi lagata aur rashi bat marne kit oh I CANNOT HIT U AAPKO NAHI MAR SAKTE HUM LAKSH

L- kyun?? U hate me na phir kyun ( saying this he holds ragini by her shoulders and shakes her )

R(grabing his collar)- NO. ILU, ILU more than I love myself... (teary eyed) but I know u won't ever reciprocate

L holds her hand with the the stick tightly looking directly into her eyes but could only find distrust and haterate..

L(broken)- leave the stick

R(teary eyed)- no..

L tightens his grip on her wrist resulting in breaking of her bangles from the same place where it was cut earlier

R- AAhh..

(the stick falls Laksh throws it away)

L-RAGINI!! (holds her hand)

R( jerks his hand0- Chle jayeye aur Mat kheliye humare dil se pls pls laksh I beg u

Laksh felt hurt, he felt raginis pain , his heart ached with this pain.. but the words spoken by her were stabbing his heart they echoed in his mind " traitor" ," humare dilse mat kheliye"," chale jayeye yanhan se" made his blood boil .. his eyes turned red and he left...

Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh dear it is so nice!!!
Ragini's pain could be felt in the words..I loved the way u made her accept her wrongs... it was indeed nice..n Laksh...what to.say for him..he is a sweetheart...kaash tum ye story CVs ko bhej deti..we could hv a good story for RagLak...
Plz continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove

Oh dear it is so nice!!!
Ragini's pain could be felt in the words..I loved the way u made her accept her wrongs... it was indeed nice..n Laksh...what to.say for him..he is a sweetheart...kaash tum ye story CVs ko bhej deti..we could hv a good story for RagLak...
Plz continue soon..

thanks a lot 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Read the updates..

Very well written...

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