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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 4

Lakshya is standing there for some min n then left on his bike.

Scene hospital

San - to ab tumhe samajh aya mai kaun hu. Or mujhse kaise behave karna hai.

He said while glaring her n grating his teeth

Swara in same tone

Sw - look mr maheshwari I know mujhe galatfehmi hui thi but I was just doing my duty. N about your status so kind of your information swara apke paise or status mai na yakeen rakhti hai or na hi darti hai.samjhe aap .

N she leave hurriedly to kuhu's ward. N he is looking her shocked. Bcoz she is first girl who answer him like this n he didn't give back. He is remembering what happens 1/2 hr ago

Swara is doing kuhu's checkup. Kuhu is a child found in hospital dusbin to swara.she has heart problem.but as she was an infant n don't get proper treatment so she is in incubator for 3 months n swara is her in charge.n after her getting well heart surgeon will do her operation.
Sanskar a big business tycoon always do charity .he hear about that girl from news paper n want to adopt child's expense

So after all formalities he come to meet kuhu n swara is examining her progress

San - excuseme dr I want to meet kuhu.

Sw - aap kaun .or kuhu se q milna hai.

San - I want to see that child.

Sw - look kuhu ( swara give her that name) is not an exhibition so that any one come n see her bcoz she is left by her parents n heart problem.

Sak - look don't talk me like this.i come here to meet her n definatelly will

Sw - ok.now ill see how can you meet kuhu. Security inhe bahar ka rasta dikhao.

Sanskar handle security man after telling his identity n visiting purpose. He is about to hell on swara but stop when he see swara is talking sweetly with this 1 month child.who don't understand her .he lost in her but remember his insult

San - now you wait n watch Dr whoever u r , only you will be the one who take me to kuhu.

N he left for Dr murthy cabin n swara for children's ward.

Fb end

San - so Dr swar koi to keh raha tha mujhe kuhu se Milne nahi dega.

He taunt her

Sw - mera bas chalta to tumhe hospital se hi nikal deti par kya karu mujhme itna ego nahi hai kisi ki tarah mere liye kuhu ki well being jyada mayne rakhti hai.

She return his taunt.n after giving him instruction she left from there.

Sanskar is looking at kuhu with so much love n tears in his eyes. Swara just missed it by some sec that this arrogant n rude person has this soft side too.

Scene shift
Ragini is very happy today because she did very well today on her first day .she come happily n tell all things to her ma.
Shomi is too happy for her both daughters.

Par - ragini laado

Rag - haa Dadi ma aye ..

She come to par runningly

Par - laado mahra ek kam kar de

Rag - haa boliye dadima him jarur karenge

Par handover her 25000 rs and

Par - ya rupye le kar ja or kalyani kaki ko de aa .wa Badi dur rehbe hai or mahre ghutno mai darad hai.or shekar or thare dadji bhi do din bad aawenge .thari kaki ko jarruat hai.

Rag - ji dadi ma him de aayenge

Par - mahri laado. Sambhal kar jaana beta.

Ragni smile n put money in her bag n leave from there.

She is crossing from market suddenly some one strike with her n her beg fall n money come out from it.
Some goons watch she had lot money n follow her. After 5 min they push her n snatch her bag n run.

Rag - help .help.wo humare pause lekar bhag rahe hai.

Sanskar is passing from there n he heard her crying.he follow goon. N after sometime he chase n beat them n get ragini' s purse. She is sitting on stool of shop n hiding her face in her hand n crying. Some people are consoling her

Just then sanky come

San - excuse me miss apka bag.

Ragini look at him.her eyes are all wet n red.
But when she see her bag she smile.

She get her bag n smile n thanks to sanky

All people left after praising him.sangini also about to leave

San - ruko.tumhe to chot aai hai

Rai - haa wo unhone hume dhakka diya tha na.

San - meri gadi mai medical kit hai aao ointment laga lo

Rag - no its OK

San - dekho tumhe Chot lagi hai bahas mat karo

He said all this with no emotions

Ragini follow him n he ask her to sit in car n she did .but she is afraid to stranger he seeing her nervousness

San - daro mat tumhe kha nahi jaunga.I am vegetarian

She tearily smile to him. She has tears bcoz her wound is paining

San look at her she is soo innocent girl whom he ever meet.
Rag - nhi detol nhi koi cream chalegi ye bahut jalta hai.

San - cream hi lagaunga but pehle tumhara wound to clean karna hoga na.don't worry nhi jalega jyada

Rag - plz plz no

San sigh

San - OK ek idea hai tum mujhe us person k bare mai batao jise tum sabse jyada pyar karti ho.

Ragini happily- humari bahan swara hum use sabse jyada pyar karte hai wo na bahut acchi hai .humse bahut pyar karte hai. Humari guide or mentor bhi hai.WO na humse bilkul opposite hai.n she continue

Sanskar apply detol n ointment on her wound while she happily renting about her swara unaware of any pai

San - done

Rag - kya ho gaya hume jala bhi nahi .

San - qki tum apni Behan k khayalon mai dubi thi or thara dhyan nahi tha.you know ye dar tumhare dimag mai tha.

Rag - wow aap to great hai .eekdum swara ki tarah

San - tumhe mai drop kar deta hu.

Ragini look at him in dellima




TBC..

Precap - sangini talk. Swalak meeting and swaragini talks.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
nice update di
so this is swasan fight reason
both are so sweet
that goons injured ragini n snatch money
but sans bring it back.
it seems sangini bonding will be good.
is this love triangle or square story
precap confuse me
update soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
nice update
continue soon
thanks for PM..
sangini were nice..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
very nice
love it
thnx for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
nice update
swasan ne ek dusre ko accha tasan diya
rag ko chot lag gayi or SaN be uski help ki or dettol bhi lagaya
waiting for next part
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Nice story...
Love the bonding between swaragini...
So kuhu is the reason of swasan fight...
Nice...
Thanks for pm...
Update soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: kashvi19

nice update di
so this is swasan fight reason
both are so sweet
that goons injured ragini n snatch money
but sans bring it back.
it seems sangini bonding will be good.
is this love triangle or square story
precap confuse me
update soon
thanks for pm



thanks kashu
you will come to know soon which type of geometrical fig their relations form
manasvi.. thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: shdiksha

Nice story...

Love the bonding between swaragini...
So kuhu is the reason of swasan fight...
Nice...
Thanks for pm...
Update soon...



thnku
yup she little bundle make them meet n fight
let see what happens next
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: spatika

nice update
continue soon
thanks for PM..
sangini were nice..



thnku dear
yup their bond will strong with time
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: aashi24

nice update
swasan ne ek dusre ko accha tasan diya
rag ko chot lag gayi or SaN be uski help ki or dettol bhi lagaya
waiting for next part
thanks for pm



thanks dear
he he swasan tashan just started

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