Swaragini SS - Rishton Ki Dor. part 4 on page 4

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Hii guys
I am sur ( mini)
I am watching swaragini from first episode. But join this forum today only.I am writing some stories in arjun forum . this is my first short story in swaragini forum . hope you like.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Prologue
Swara n ragini are two sisters . very loveble n inseparable. Jo bhi unhe milta hai kehta hai they are twins or unke rishte ki misal deta hai. Ki sisters ho to aisi. Par ek sach or ek naya rishta unki life mai tufaan ki tarah aata hai. Kya unka powerful rishta kar payega is tufan ka samna. Ya ever inseparable sisters ho jayengi humesha k liye dur. Kya tut jayegi ya wo mil kar tham lengi rishton ki dor

Should I continue
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Please please do continue. ..I was eagerly waiting for such an SS...the forum is full of luv stories of SwaSan n RagLak...I wanted a sister's story. ..

Please continue soon..
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Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove

Please please do continue. ..I was eagerly waiting for such an SS...the forum is full of luv stories of SwaSan n RagLak...I wanted a sister's story. ..

Please continue soon..

Thanks ..I want to write on sisters love. Who can be better then swaragini. I'll update cs n part 1 within some time.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shinning_AD

Nice.. Continue soon 😊

Thank you..
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Character sketch


Deendaya gadodiya DD - head of family .father of shekher n Hus of parvati.love saragini his grand daughters very much.have friendship with swara.


Parwati gadodiya PG- wife of DD .mother of shekher n mil of sharmishtha.grandmother of swaragini.love ragini more then any thing. But maintain distance from swara .N point out her small mistake.


Shekhar gadodiya sh - son of DD n pg . hus of sharmishta called her mishti . father of swaragini.love them both n equally. Owns a shop.


Sharmishta gadodiya SG - she is a simple but strong Lady. Always value relation n ideals. Love her family n daughters very much. Always want swaragini to hold their rishton ki dor.


Swara gadodiya sw - A beautiful bubbly cripy girl . love her family a lot.her family is world to her.she has modern values with traditional approach.love n respect all but never bear injustice.love her one year younger sis ragini alot. Always protect her from cruels as she think ragini is navive. Lovingly called shona.Age 25


Ragini gadodiya rag - she is sweet simple traditional girl.love n pamper by all as she is youngest member of family. This make her navive n lill darpok. She is like shadow of swara n very much depend on her.all called her laado lovingly. Age 23.


Sanskar maheshwari SK - he is a businessman by profession. A serious n good guy.always remain in his self made shell.treat all equally n seriously. Always ready for work. Age 27 love his younger brother lakshya very much.both are orphan their parents died in accident 7 year back.live with their daima annpurna.


Lakshya maheshwari - lucky . he is care free funloving guy.respect his brother very much. He don't miss his parents as this place is filled by his elder brother very well .age 25.
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Part 1

Fb color - red

One girl is sitting beside Howrah bridge n starring continuously toward bridge.
Girl - is bridge ko uhi ghanto dekhna or achanak uski taraf daud padna racing karna humara favourite play tha. Kitne khush the na hum.
Fb
Two little girl of around 8-10 year old are starring bridge .suddenly a girl start running toward bridge.
G1 - yeah aaj pehle hum bhage dekhna swara aaj to hum hi jeetenge.
Sw - abhi faisla kaha hua hai abhi to race start hui hai.comeon ragini.
After some time girl whose name is swara win race. N second girl name ragini sit there sadly.
Sw - hay laado kya hua.
Ra - hum haar gaye shona.
Sw - kal or tej daudna or mehnat se tum jeet jaogi.
Ra - sach shona
Sw - sach laado.
Fb end

Girl - kitne khush the hum ek sath.koi kami nahi .har dum sath .koi bhi gam ho ya khushi.humne kabhi ek dusre ka hath nahi choda humesha hum ek rahe.par aaj ,aaj mai akeli reh gayi .q hua aisa ek hi pal mai sab bikhar gaya.

Itne mai

G2 - kisne kaha tum akeli ho hum dono to ek dil or do jaan hai. Hum alag kaise hue
Girl 1 us taraf dekhti hai excitedly thadi hokar

G1 - tum aa gayi.bilkul thik kaha tumne humare to naam bhi yu jude hai jaise ek hi ho. Swaragini.


Par agle hi pal waha koi nhi wo ladki Jo khadi thi wahi baith jati hai.

G1- smile sadly ek half heart pandent hath mai leker. Yad hai tumhe jab sarla aunty ma ki dost humare ghar pehli bar ayi thi unhe to laga hum twins hai

Fb
Scene baadi
Gadodiya family
Sh - mishthi mishti kaha ho.
SG - kya hua shekhar q subah subah awaj laga rahe ho.
Sh - ha mishthi madam bhul gaya aaj to aapki dost aa rahi hai to aj hum par kaun dhyan dega.
SG - kya shekher aap bhi.waise aapki dono princesses kaha hai.
Itne mai hum yaha hai ma .
SG - ohh shona laado yaha ho .jaldi aao or dresses change kar lo.
Sw - kya ma humesha ek jaise kapde q pehnati ho. Dekhna jab badi houngi to apne man se pehnungi.

Ra - ha ma ek jaise q

SG - qki mai chahti hu meri swara or ragini humesha swaragini ban kar rahe. Tumhe pata hai ye behno ka rishta Jo hota hai na ye bahut khas hota hai. Behne dost hoti hai.jarurat padne par ma ban jati hai.musibat mai bhai or pyar ki jarurat padne par behen. Bahut pyara rishta hai ye. Jab behne sath hoti hai na to kanto bhari rahe bhi asan ho jati hai. Chahe bade hokar kitne hi alag raho ya dikho par tum dono humesha dil se ek rahoge promise karo.

Swaragini - hum promise karte hai ma hum humesha sath rahenge.

Sh - mishti aapki dost aa gyi

SG - are sarla aao

Sar - kaisi ho shomi

SG - ek dum thik .shekher se to tum mili hi ho tum shadi k bad turant abroad chali gayi ab ayi ho 12 sal bad.

Sar - kya karu mere husband ko time hi nhi mila ane ka Badi mushkil se ab aa payi hu.

SG - inse milo meri betoyan swara or ragini.

Sar - are wah badi pyari betiyan hai teri to shomi twins hai yeh.

Swaragini giggle

SG - nhi swara Badi 10 sal ki or ragini Choti 8 sal ki. Waise sabko ye twins hi lagti hai.

Sw - WO to hum hai. Judwa matlab ek dusre se jude hue

Ra - humesha sath.hai na maa.

Or dono ki hasi ki jhankar pure ghar mai gunjti hai.

Fb end

Girl - pata hi nhi chala kab dadaji Dadi ma papa ma k pyar k saye mai or ek dusre K sath hum kab bade ho gaye.




Precap - grownup swaragini.

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Part 2

15 years later. ( in fb)

Swaragini are grownup .swara is now 25 year old beautiful girl . she join sehat hospital as junior docter recently. N ragini is 23 old beautiful girl .she join a primary school as teacher recently.

Par ek chij hai Jo umar or waqt k sath nhi badli or WO hai swaragini ka rishta or pyar.
Unki hasi aaj bhi us ghar mai ek sath gunjti hai jaise koi sur.

A fine morning in baadi

Pg - dekh shekhar ab to swara ne apni padai bhi puri kar li or ab to wa Dr bhi ban gayi hai ab jaldi se uske liye ladke dekhne shuru kar daal.

Sh - are wahh ma shona ki itni chinta.

Pg - dushman nhi hai WO meri .bas uski harkaiten mujhe pasand nhi. Kaise kapde pehenti hai .or kabhi kabhi to mere riti riwajo par bahas bhi karti hai. Or waise bhi jab uski shadi hogi tabhi to mari laado ki bhi hogi.

Sh - ha maa mai dekhta hu pandit ji se baat karta hu.

Dd enter

Dd - tu nhi shekhar .mari shona k liye to chokha ladka mai hi dhudunga. Jo meri pyari si dost ka sahi sathi ban sake.

Sh - thik hai babuji jaisa aap thik samjhe.

Pg - thik hai bas swara koi pareshani na khadi kare.

Dd - tum bhi na bina matlab shona par barasti rehti ho. Kitni pyari hai meri bacchi.

Sh-shomi are listening their daily fight on their shona n laado

Pg - mari laado ko dekha kitni sanskari hai.meri sari batien Jo manti hai.

Dd - to shona bhi to apne vevhar are kisi ka bhi dil meet leti hai.

Pg - waise kaha hai tumhari shona

Dd - wahi jaha tumhari laado hogi.

Scene shift

One beautiful girl is sitting on bench of park .she is wearing a salwar kameej .she is looking nervous n playing with her dupatta edge.
Suddenly another beautiful girl wearing jumpsuit come .she has naughty smile on her face .she slowly come behind her n
Gi 2 - bhooo

Gi 1 - swara

GI 2- ragini

N both laugh

Ra - tum bahut buri ho swara humesha hume dara deti ho.

Sw - or tum humesha dar jati ho ragini. Ha ha

Ra - ab bas bhi karo swara

Sw - accha theek hai pehle ye bata itni pareshan q hai.

Ra - tujhe kaise pata.

Sw - behan hai tu meri. Mujhe nhi pata hoga to kise pata hoga ki jab meri laado udas ya pareshan hoti hai to yahi aakar baithti hai or apne dupatte se khelne lagti hai.

Ra - hmm..meri shona ko sab pata hota hai.

Sw - WO to hai.chal bata kya hua

Ra - WO aaj school mai pehla din hai na to dar lag raha hai.

Sw - offo ragini tu swara gadidiya ki behen hokar dar rahi hai. But I am sure jab tu meri shaitaniya sambhal leti hai to un bacchon ki to sambhal hi legi.

Ra - smile such

Sw -shotti

Ra - hume aaj tak samajh nhi aya swara tumhe bangali itni pasand q hai.

Sw - usme samajhna kaisa hum Bengal mai rehte hai yahi paida hue bade hue to Bengali to pasand hogi na.

Ra - par hume to marwari rituals or boli pasand hai.

Sw - offo ragini sabki pasand alag hoti hai.

Ra - ha wo to hai.

Sw - chalo jaldi warna pehle din late ho jaogi.or mujhe bhi aaj important surgery mai dr basu ko assist karna hai.

Ra - haa has jaldi chalo hum pehle din late nhi hona chahte.

TBC

Precap - swaragini in their working place.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I didn't know u updated 1st part...amazing...m loving their bond...
I jz hope, unlike the show, tumhare ff mein unka bond aisa hi pyaar bhara rhe...no negativity...n jz wait m buddying u, pm me when u write next part..
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Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove

I didn't know u updated 1st part...amazing...m loving their bond...
I jz hope, unlike the show, tumhare ff mein unka bond aisa hi pyaar bhara rhe...no negativity...n jz wait m buddying u, pm me when u write next part..


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