SwaSan SS |Pehla...Tera Mera Pyaar| Epilogue in pg 7

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Hello everyone 🤗 hope u all r doing well.. I hope many of u know me but still for those who doesn't know let me introduce myself.. My name is Liana & currently in love with SwaSan. Im not much active in this forum but whenever im here my time spend reading wonderful OS/FF/SS by u all <3 I just love to read all the stories.. so decided to share one of my short story which I wrote last year but didn't post anywhere.. hope u guys ll like it. Posting a portion of this story will post the rest if u guys like it J

Pehla... Tera Mera Pyaar

Just help u to imagine how SwaSan ll b in this SS

This story is about Swara Gadodia a college going girl from Shimla, who is very bubbly, the basketball champion of her ege, who lives her life to the fullest, she knows how to live every bit of her life but she is not much studious jst pass marks ajaye to bas hai, & the guy of this story is

Sanskar Maheshwari totally opposite to Swara, he is shy & introvert but a scholar, do top in all exams, his mother died at a very young age & his dad raise up all alone, but as his dad do a service where he get transferred Sanskar also hv tooget transferred frm one place to another, but now he had decided tht he ll complete his study with his childhood friend Sham who live in Shimla, Recently Sanskar got admitted to sham's collage & start to live his grandparents home where he spent his childhood days but no one stays with him as his grandparents died & his dad shifted to delhi. He was too in delhi but due to this transfers his studies were getting hampered & as he is very much focused toward his studies & career he decided not to compromise anymore. & from that it starts of a new life, a new beginning with new challenges J

Sanskar's First Day of college

Sanskar entered to the gate, was lil nervous but sham was there to console him, both talking & passing the corridor, frm where they can see their playground,

Sham: Yar Sanskar, its ok yaar, tu itna ghabra kyu raha hai, when im there y fear??

Sanskar: its not like tht easy Shamu, tu to mujhe janta hai yaar, mujhe naye logo k bich adjust hone mei time lagta hai, pata nehi yaha kaise log honge,

Sham: tu to aise baat kar raha hai, u never live there, I knw 10 year bad lauta hai but bhai mai hoon na I ll tc of everything

Sanskar give a fake smile,

Suddenly the sound of ball tapping took his attention, he saw few girls r playing basket ball, & then it start raining, all the girls went inside but there was only a girl who still not going inside, his eyes where following her, her big, black & deep eyes & a slight smile playing on her lips (shows her determination) she wont stop till she didn't get the ball into the basket & yes she did, she start jumping with joy & almost dance in the rain Sanskar had never seen such a lively person, befikar bekhawf, the other girls shouting, come inside Swara Swara!! Principal maam dantegi ! Thand lag jaye gi yaar! Come inside she showing her hand saying she doesnt want ,& after sometime ran as she could her the whistle of playground instructor Sanskar keep staring till she goes disappear , Sham noticed it, he stopped & tap on his shoulder,

Sh: abbey, kaha khogaya? Pehle din hi Clean bowled

San(feeling shy, realizing he get caught by his best friend): nehi yaar kuch bhi, nothing like tht btw yeh Swara kaun hai?

Sh: oh Swara she is in our class ,the basketball champ of our college, uske rehte no one cn defeat this col

San(got impressed): wow!! Thts great

Sh: par dur rahio usse, kafi khatarnak hai aur ate jate har kisika poppat kar deti hai (make fun)

Sanskar got conscious & back to reality

Both Sham & Sanskar entered to their class & Sanskar saw Swara was drying her hair while chatting with her friends & laughing, & he kept staring & got bump with a bench & got hurt, ouch!! He said & tht took her attention Swara looked & his condition, he was holding his knee & screamed which make Swara laugh & tht annoyed Sanskar, then Swara control her laughter & said sorry in ishara, the teacher came & then introduced Sanskar as the new boy, all said hello & then they continue their class, after the class end, Sham went to introduce Sanskar, with others, now it was Swara's Turn

Sham: hey Swara meet Sanskar, my childhood friend

Swara: *laugh* Sham, I know his name yaar thori der pehle hi to teacher ne kaha & laugh giving hi 5 to her friends,

Sham felt embarrassed & said, yeah still u didn't knw he is my childhood friend & also tht he was topper in his previous col

SW: woh to shakal dekh k hi pata chal gaya,tha anyways nice to meet u mr parhaku (studious) forwarded her hand to shake, & he kept staring & nervously bring his & shake,

San: Same here, ok

Sw: Hv to leave bye..

Sh: dekha kaise baat karti hai?

San: agar tu aise stupid o ki tarha bat karega to aur kiya karegi

Sh(grab R's neck by shoulder): Acha bachhu itni jaldi party change, tera bf mein hoo k woh?

San: are yaar koi party change nehi ki, its jst he is smart girl that's it..

Sh: par use patana hai to u ll need my help bachu

San: I don't need yaar, I mean we r so different, aise dur se hi thik hai,


PART 2 @ Below

Last Part @ pg5

Epilogue @ pg7

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before i post the 2nd part i need to clearify somethings, like this story is a Short story so ll b end by 3/4 parts & it ll cover their 11th & 12th grade school life.. & as i kept it small i didnt wrote in detail. one more thing is that as Sanskar is a scholar & transfer frm delhi in the middle of his 11th grade & bcos of being good student he didnt get difficulties to adjust with studies & in part 2 they ll cover their 1st year


Part 2

few day's passed like this, Swara hs no idea about Sanskar's feelings they wr jst classmates, hi hello & all never interact ,much & Sanskar was too shy to go & talk or spend time with her, but one day.. whn Swara was sitting in their college's study room & trying to solve a math,

Swara(to herself): pata nehi yeh mathematics kis ne banaya, itna difficult equation solve hi nehi ho raha, she was jst tearing the pages & throwing it away, Sanskar was passing by there when a paper come in front of his feet, he looked & tht direction & saw it was Swara who was throwing without looking at anywhere ,he picked it up & open it & smile, then he solved the equation & gave it to a girl who was entering into the study room & asked to pass it to her, whn the girl handle it to Swara she was surprised & happy to see tht it was solved she thanked the girl & she said, she didn't solve it but showed Sanskar, who was going frm there, she run to him to stop,

SW: araye.. ruko.. ruko mr parhaku!!

Hearing this Sanskar stopped & look at tht direction, Swara came nearer o him huffing ,

SW: kab se awaz de rahi thi & u didn't listen, Rajdhani Express (name of a train) ki tarha chal rahe the

SAN: oh im so sorry I didn't heard u,

SW: kyun? Kanpur mein hartal hai??

SAN:(got confused) matlab?

SW: kam sunai deta hai?? Acha woh sab chhoro, jst tell me, did u solve it?? (showing tht piece of paper)

SAN: yeh haan (innocently)

SW: kaise kar lete ho yaar?? Mujhse to hoa hi nehi

SAN: yeh bohat easy hai look (start to making her understand)

SW: wait wait! Yaha khare khare u may teach but I cant learn, can we sit some where pls

SAN: yeah sure

Both sit in the study room & then Sanskar help her to understand the whole sum, Swara was so happy & reliefe, She thanked him.

SW: Thanks yaar, u did a huge favor for me

SAN: no need to say thanks my pleasure

SW: aise kaise thanks na kahu.. baki sab to thek hai but Math mujhse hota hi nehi & if I do bad this time ny parents going to take all my stuffs like mobile & lappy & I cant afford it! Both smile

This was the start of their interaction, after that day, they become little bit comfortable, now whenever Swara get stuck in any study related problem, she run to Sanskar for help & he always there to help her out, they didn't realize but they start to spend more time together & also liking each other's company, now Sanskar wasn't feel tht shy to talk with Swara. Sometime in breaks Sanskar sit & study near the ground where Swara play basketball & he secretly steal glances, one day the he was siting whn got hit by the ball, & get hurt on his head & shoulder, Swara came running & all panic, she hold him by shoulder,

SW: are u ok? Jiada lagi to nehi, she was so concern, was checking his elbow & forhead & blowing from her mouth, the care & concern was totally visible in her eyes, Sanskar was jst staring without answering to her questions, soon she realize tht he was staring, both eyes met & they had en eyelock which got broken by sham,

Sh: dude, r u ok??

SAN: yes guys im fine nothing to get worry, ek ball hi to thi.. so chill.

Swara felt lil bit awkward as, she didn't realize y she was so scared when he got hurt.. there was something new development in their relation which she isn't getting , both where fighting their emotions, don't know what to do,

Soon it was time for their Final exams to b announced, the routine was hanged on the board,

SW: omg!! Finals ab kiya kare, mera to kuch syllabus complete nehi hua, mai pakka fail ho jaungi

SAN: don't worry main hoon na, I ll help u out,

SW( being happy): awww u r such a sweetheart & hugged him,this sudden act of her surprised him but then he thought it's a friendly hug & he too hugged back, they remain like this for few sec & then Swara realized & then broke it, both felt shy & awkward,

SW: so then milte hai for study,

SAN: hmm lets do one thing, today hv lunch with me at my place, then wahi se I ll give u the notes & stuff & sham ko drop kar dunga, is tht ok with u?

Sw (at first she was lil confused but then said yes): but wait I need to do change first so u go & I ll come at ur place ok?

SAN: r u sure? U ll b able to locate?

SW: yeah, but if I get some prob phone hai na will call.

SAN: ok

At Sanskar's Place, the house was very old but pretty & there is a small garden infrnt of the house, through which they hv to reach the main door of the house, Swara was amazed the way he maintained the house all alone, he was much more organized then her,

SAN:oh hi , welcome to my place

SW: hi, wow nice house, must say u hv maintained it very well.

SAN: thanks,

he let her sit & then after some time had lunch made by Sanskar, there also Swara got surprised as the food also taste good.

SW: wow Sanskar I must say u r too good yaar, itne dino se I thought k tum sif parai mein topper ho but omg!! Ghar aur cooking me bhi superb man

SAN: kiya karu, mom k jane k bad ghar ko & dad ko samhalte samhalte adat hogai, as say practice makes a man perfect, & smile, but Swara cn see his pain of being alone but she didn't let Him realize she understood so she also smile back & change the topic, they sit on his living room's floor & put the stuffs like copy, pen, calculator etc of the center table &start to study, after 3/4 hours study session, Swara got tired & unconsciously put her head on his shoulder & close her eyes , Sanskar looked at her, & smile & realize she already slept so she put her head on a cusion & went to bring coffee for them, whn he get back with coffee he saw her awake trying to solve some of the problems, he smiled & offer the coffee mug,

SW: oh thanks yaar, u didn't get tired? Mai to bohat thak gai hoo,

SAN: but I didn't as used to it na

SW: ya ya Mr. Paraku, how cn I forgot!! R smiled & pull her cheek lightly,

SW: abbey!! Yeh kiya tha??

SAN: sorry, u look so cute while getting annoyed tht I feel like pulling them, im sorry abar tume bura laga, Swara make a fke angry look & Sanskar was embarrassed & also feeling scared tht he did wrong & seeing his cute expression Swara burst out with laughter & this time Sanskar was angry he said

SAN: acha bachhu u r pulling my leg, bohat hasi arahi hai saying this he start to tickle her which cause her to laugh more & while laughing she was pleading him to stop, they didn't realize whn they come so close to each other Sanskar was almost on her & as she trying to stop him she raised her hand which he hold tight their eyes met & they had an eyelock soon they realize in which position they r Sanskar get off frm her & said sorry for his behavior, he doesn't knw wht was wrong with him he never did such act,

SW: its ok yaar, dosti mei thori bohat masti mazk chalti rehti hai & today, I got to knw if u want tum bhi masti kar sakte ho.. & u should, its getting dark aur weather bhi thek nehi lagta so I think I should leave

SAN: are wait I ll drop u na? I hv my nana ji's car here,

SW: its ok yaar,I will manage aur waise bhi mera ghar 10 min walking distance pe hai so ll go.

SAN: then may I hv the pleasure to walk with u?

SW: yeah sure, u don't have to b tht formal,both start walking, after 5 min its start raining, Sanskar run holding Swara's hand & took shelter but Swara left his hand & went to get drenched, Sanskar was asking her not to get wet, as examr r coming nearer she might get cold.. but she wasn't listening & he was mesmerized to see her like this, she got totally drenched & her dress got transparent, her & he noticed tht some guys where looking at her with bad intention even, she also noticed & felt awkward when Sanskar came forward wrapping her with his jacket & took her frm tht place in such way that she get covered by him completely, ths act of him make Swara feel so good, she realize how caring & Protective he was, a smile came into her lips, finally he left her home safely, she offered his jacket back but he said he ll take this in college.

She went to her room & all the way was thinking about him only the way he protect her, now he bcom for respectful for her, he was really different frm other guys, he was very nice, decent, soft & ver very special to him, she smiled hugging tht jacket tight on her body. Days r passing like this the people around them can sense it but this to are still unaware of it.

Sham at Sanskar's place

Sh: so dude, kya scene chal raha hai tera aur Swara ka

SAN(lil shocked & confused): Scene? Tu yeh kiya keh raha hai? We r jst friends

Sh(laughs): SERIOUSLY? ONLY FRIENDS? Dimag thek hai? The much time u two spend together, lagta to nehi JUST Friends do such

SAN: yaar I didn't hide anything frm u, its true from the day one I start to like her, but we r so different, woh kitni cool, life ko fully jine wali & me so boring there is no match L

Sh: u knw whts ur prob u start to judge urself, have u evr told what u feel? Then how u cn b so sure, kaun jane she actually feels the same thing u feel for her. Bas beta himmat kar or bolde

SAN: no I cant ! if she doent feel the same way I wont b able to face her in my life & she has bcom an important part of my life dost banke hi sahi at least she is in my life.

At Swara's cousin + friend Tia's place ( Swara hv two best friends Mona & Tia)

Mona: kya yaar Swara, y u r not getting its not friendship yaar.. u r in love with Sanskar

Swara: I don't knw yaar & waise bhi exam k tension mei ye sab bate mat leke beth

Tia: uffo we r not want to giving u pressure jst want u to realize ur own feelings,

Swara: I knw may b im falling for him, but kiya fayeda

Both M& T together: MATLAB??

Swara: matlab Sanskar ko jitna jana hai samjha hai I don't think he ll believe in love & all so use apni dil ki bat kehke ek accha dost khona nehi chahti

Tia(holding Swara by her shoulder): look love is such emotion jisse koi nehi bhag sakta, kab kaise kisse hojaye u never know, par agar tu batayegi hi nehi to kaise chale ga

Mona: we all feel it yaar there is some spark in u two but god knows whn u both ll realize

Tia: but hope u both realize it soon b4 it gets too late.

Swara thoughtful.. later all get busy with their papers & with time they r done with all the papers & the result was published, like always Sanskar did top & Swara's performance was remarkable, all wr super happy & in happiness Sanskar HUGGED her tight!! Yes I knew it! U ll do it im so happy for u yaar, Swara also hugged him but this time her feelings wasn't like a general friend, they broke the hug & Sanskar saw Swara was teary, he hold her face into his palm & said

SAN: whats wrong? Is everything ok?

SW: yeh yeh to khushi k anso hai

SAN: pagal & hugged her again..

Edited by -Liana- - 9 years ago
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Res...

Unres ...

Liana... Hugs... Sissy...
Me..me.. Me first on your first TS... 😃 .. It was fantastic but I can't understand Hindi sissy... But I did... I loved it different characterisation.. Loved both swasan... Sanskaar reserved.. Swara as a bold one... Im loving it...

Soo Sanskaar lost his mother.. No problem Swara there naa.. To take care of him... 😳

I loved swaras. Introduction... It was flimy... Ang friends talk between sham and Sanskaar..

Waiting for next...

Love you...
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Role reverse from the show!! Interesting start!
Update soon...And plz PM me :)
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Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Res...

Unres ...

Liana... Hugs... Sissy...
Me..me.. Me first on your first TS... 😃 .. It was fantastic but I can't understand Hindi sissy... But I did... I loved it different characterisation.. Loved both swasan... Sanskaar reserved.. Swara as a bold one... Im loving it...

Soo Sanskaar lost his mother.. No problem Swara there naa.. To take care of him... 😳

I loved swaras. Introduction... It was flimy... Ang friends talk between sham and Sanskaar..

Waiting for next...

Love you...


Awww di its a pleasure to hv u here <3 🤗 thanks for reading this short story & im so sorry about it.. i didnt know about it actually last year whn i wrote it one of my friend sug to keep the dialogues in hindi so she cn connect with the characters more only thts y kept it hindi as she was my only reader & i hv no planning to post it here
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thank u so much 😊
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Originally posted by: swa291

Awsome yar keep writing


thanks a lot ll cont soon
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Originally posted by: Helee

nice start...! loved it


thanks a lot 😊
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Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Awesome start 😡


thnks but y angry ??
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Originally posted by: Nupur_5

Role reverse from the show!! Interesting start!

Update soon...And plz PM me :)


ys it is completely dif from the show jst imagine swara & sanskar whn they wr in their col 😳 & ll pm u nxt time thanks for reading

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