SwaSan SS |Pehla...Tera Mera Pyaar| Epilogue in pg 7 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

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Liana... 🤗 .. Darling sissy... I loved it.. Just loved it their growing feelings for each other... Wonderfully penned..

They both unaware of their own feelings.. Soo finally.. Friends helped them... 😳 it's good to have friends...

I lived romantic moments between them... Swara caring Sanskaar all...

Waiting for next...

Love you...


love u di for such wonderful comment.. 🤗 glad to knw tht u enjoy reading it means a lot to me 😳 ll updat it soon & tht ll b the last one
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Superb update 👏
Loved their growing friendship 😳
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Superb update 👏
Loved their growing friendship 😳
Update soon


thanks a lot bro glad u loved the updt , going to post the nxt part soon 😳 whc is going to b the last one as well
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved the story and there progression of friendship a few trust. ..so nice to read about there confusion do update this cute story soon...
Razia and pls pm me when updated will.be waiting..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: raaz19

Loved the story and there progression of friendship a few trust. ..so nice to read about there confusion do update this cute story soon...

Razia and pls pm me when updated will.be waiting..


thank u so so much for ur lovely comment razia, glad tht u enjoy reading.. ll b updating soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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last part

Swara was super happy & was in party mood completely !!

Swara: after so much of pressure & such victory we need to celebrate guys! Will give u a treat ! Let go to the club evening ! We all ll hv fun!

All bcom excited and happy expect sanskar! His eyes bcom big after hearing the name of club as he doesn't like the loud music & crowd ! He said

San: no ! I think it's a bad idea ! U Guys can go I won't join

Sw: don't b so boring yaar ! After so many days we r going to hv some relaxation & fun don't spoil the mood! Plz plz plz & this treat is specially for u as u helped me out a lot during the exams so if u won't come we ll also don't go.. All bcom sad & tried to convince sanskar & at last they all went for the party !! In the club all were in the dance floor hving fun but sanskar was sitting in a corner , eyes eyes fixed on only one person who was dancing carefree , she wasn't aware of her surrounding but dancing to the fullest ! Her smile while dancing make him smile to he jst love to see this sight of her ! Soon his smile turn into anger whn she saw some guy was dancing around her , she wasn't looking, she was totally into herself but they wr not they wr hving bad look at her & was trying to touch her in wrong way sanskar could sense it & he went closer to the place where she was dancing & stand Btwn swara & the guys with angry look swara was still aware of what's going on & still dancing & the guys also ignored sanskar & went other side of swara & wax getting close making her uncomfortable ! Sanskar couldn't stand it anymore & he bring out all his anger on those guys he beat them up black n blue !! All the friends & alone with swara was shocked to see him like this as they never expect sanskar that calm & shy boy can b so furious ! Sham being his close buddy can sense the actual reason but swara was yet to realize !

Sham went their & make sanskar calm down the manager of the club asked all to leave so they left .,

Out side of the club

Sh : what's wrong with u yaar! I hv never seen u like this b4

San: what's wrong with me ? Can't u see how they whr misbehaving with swara ?

Sh: we all wr dancing dude & so they r & if swara ws hving prob he would tell

San: I can see it Tht in her face she don't hv to say anything

Swara was surprised to knw it how well he knw her but sham was in teasing mood!

Sh: really ? U knw her so well Tht frm sitting far u cn sense if she was feeling comfortable or not .. Sanskar jst glare at him & left the place ! All said together !!

I this one year hv never seen him like this b4 ,

Tia: I still can't believe what he did few mins ago.

Sw: I'm

Also surprised !

Other didn't notice but swara did Tht he got hurt so after all left she thought to check him out at his home!

She bell the ring hesitantly ! And he opened it & got surprised to see her

San: swara u r here ? At this hour ? Is everything ok?

Sw: so many questions at the door ? Won't u let me come in?

San: oh I'm so sorry come in

She smiled & come in & he closed the door she went to the living room

& sat in a sofa & took the first aid box which was kept on the table

Sw: how cn everything can b fine whn u would behave like this,

San: oh plz not again now u don't say what sham said Tht I was wrong & they wasn't misbehaving

Sw: no sanskar I m not saying u r wrong but u get hurt for me & so I thought as a friend I should help u too

San: oh as a friend u want me to help out? She jst smiled & hold his hand and make him sit now b a good boy & let me put u bandage !while applying medi swara was saying that he shouldn't get involve into Tht fight & she could manage the situation ! And if the club manager called police then they might b in big trouble that make him angry he got up frm his sit & said!

San: then what u guys want I will let those guys go who troubled u ? In anger he didn't realized Tht he grabbed. Her by arm & bring her soo closed to her & it was hurting & she said

Sw: what's wrong with u sanskar ? I wrnt like this ! Leave me it's hurting

As tears fall frm her eyes it felt all his anger & he left her & said sorry but by that time she was went out frm their running ..

San: I don't want to hurt u but how ll I explain Tht it hurts to see u in trouble I can't bear it! Whn some one look at u with bad intense ! I want to protect u frm all the pain !! Frm all the world bcos I love you but I don't know how to say ! I'm afraid of loosing u ..

Few days passed as they wr having holidays ! Swara wasn't no mood to talk with sanskar as she couldn't figure out the sudden change in him & sanskar can't take the cold vibes of her so he decided to visit his dad in the holidays & left the place ! When swara's anger cool down she decided to talk to sanskar & figure out what's the matter! What is bothering him but whn she couldn't find him she bcom sad..

Finally the holidays was over ! Their first day in 12th grade all were excited only two people was hving gloomy faces ! Sham tried to cheer up sanskar's mood but their was no use on the other hand Tia & Mona also tried to convince swara & makr everything normal between them ! But no use now they behave like strangers

Tia in the canteen

Tia : swara stop behaving like this yar ! It's like u both wr in a relationship & had a break up

Swara glare at her

Tia: ops sorry but it was a misunderstanding & it has been 2 weeks already y u guys can't b like friend ?

Sw: what I did? He was the one who bcom

Mad k later whn I want to tell he left without informing us! Then where is my fault!

Mona: whatever he did 2 weeks ago it was for u! To protect u yaar ! Can't u see how possessive he is about u! Agar mere liye koi Aisa karta to I would hug him tight & never let him go

Sw: shut up Mona! It's not a movie it's reality ! He over reacted !

Tia: and what u r doing?? Talk with him na ?

Sw: no I can't :(( if he want I ll talk but I won't go to him for patch up

On the other hand !

Sham convincing sanskar ! Yar that matter ended two weeks back now get back to normal!

San: I was rude to her!i don't knw how to face her !

Sha: b a brave boy & go jst one apology I'm sure she ll for give u .. San: but how??

Sha : that's ur punishment ! I won't help u hv to help urself to figure out how to say sorry ..

Soon something click into his mind & he left the canteen to complete his mission "swara manao" (convincing swara)

Swara was relaxing on her room

Whn the bell rang , she open the door & found a box laying on ther floor she got surprised & look here & there so see if there is someone but no clue so she took the box suspiciously & slowly open it to found her fav chocolates, she bcom

Super happy & without thinking for a second se unwrapped one of it & found a small not in it! Written

"Ur friendship is precious for me" a smile crept in her lips she could sense who it could b but for assurance she start to open all the chocolates wrapper & with each one she found a note "I don't want to lose it" I know I acted stupid & I'm

Ready to get any punishment but plz don't ignore me, it's killing me inside .. Plz forgive me ! I want my old friend back ! Plz plz plz , she bcom

Emotional & her eyes bcom

Teary .. In the last note it was written if u r able to forgive then do come to Tht lake point I will b waiting ...

It was more than two Hours he was waiting for her &

With each passing time he was losing hope & bcoming sad :( and as its getting evening the weather of shimla getting cold ! He was shivering still waiting till

The sun set infront of him, suddenly he felt a warmth around him two hands wrapped a jacket around him

& he can recognize that touch

Sw: want to die in this cold? R u new to this town? Don't u know the weather gets chilly whn it's getting dark

Sanskar smiled & said

San: I know & also knew Tht someone is there who won't let me die in cold

Sw: achha bachu! So much of confident? But if I won't come what would u do?

San: I would die

Hearing this she hit him

On his shoulder & said

Sw: don't talk like this otherwise I ll get angry again

San: ok baba sorry sorry !!

Sw: now this is too much we r friend na? So no more sorry & thank u

San : ok ma'am

As u say! Let's forget everything & start from fresh ! Friends ? He extended his hand & she shook

With a smile :))

Everything bcom normal like before all the friends were happy & really hoping they ll confess their love soon !! It was really weird that all the people around thm like their close friends were so sure still they r not ready to accept it! Time keep passing and they still are happy to b as friends both want each other's company & the fear of rejection was what keeping them mum! Soon their exams come nearer & all bcom busy with studies . Whn one day they wr hving group studies at sanskar's place , all completed their work & left but swara need to complete few more chap so she stayed back ! Both wr studying & but like always swara felt sleepy & fall asleep on his shoulder , sanskar smiled at her this act but ths time he too thought to take some rest so he lean to the sofa & closed his eyes while swara was resting her head on his shoulder ! Sanskar didn't realize whn he fall asleep like this was as he jst want to take some rest, after some time swara woke up & saw sanskar was sleeping his mouth slightly one she smiled at his innocence & closed the mouth slowly without disturbing his sleep ! She then lightly caress his hair & sigh ! Said to herself , how I wish to tell u how much I'm in love with u, I know u like me as a friend but love? I'm afraid ! I don't want to confess my love & then get hurt ! Ur friendship is the best thing I hv right now & I would treasure it till the end of my life .. As a friend at least u ll b there for me that's more than enough ..she then softly kissed on his forehead, making sure that he don't wake up & later she left the place without disturbing him

Next day!

San: hey swara ! Y did u leave without waking me up?

Sw: u wr sleeping so peacefully Tht I didn't hv the heart to break it !

San: is it only the reason? I'm sorry if u felt bad About anything

Sw: r u crazy ?? I know u wr tired we all trouble u so much , u help us all in study so u must need so rest too ! & we r friends na then y sorry don't b ;)

Sanskar become happy & smile at her :))

Soon they wr done with their finals

The Farewell day was there, may b after today their paths will b different, they wont be able to meet each other, its like a last opportunity for them, Sham trying to convince

SH: dekh yaar bohat hogaya yeh dosti dosti, hum sab ko dikhta hai u guys bcoming more than friends ek bar bol k to dekh?

SAN :kaise, what if she said no I ll lost her friendship also, woh mere bare mei kia sochegi?

SH: if she is ur true friend she wont but aj agar tune nehi kaha to u ll miss this chance so jst tell, at least in future there ll b no regression that "kash u hv told then it might be something else"

S: put his hand on R's shoulder, & said

SH: waise bhi mene tia ko kehte huye suna hai , Swara's parents looking for a groom to get her married so if u get late to confess teri Swara ko koi aur lejaye ga,, ll u b happy?? Isse pehle k bohat der hojaye bata de apni dil ki baat

Sanskar got shocked & his eyes got teary with the thought of losing her forever ..

Sanskar looked at Sham & give a Hug

SAN Thanks yaar, ab chahe jo ho I will tell her that I how much I love her

On the other hand Swara's friends mona & Tia Suggested her the same & both decided to confess but how?

The Farewell Party

Sanskar & Swara both of them now infront of each other. Sanskar wearing a black suit, white shirt along with a red tie & Swara was looking stunning in a plain red saree Swara long black hairs wear open

Dil Pe chalaaa naa jab zor koiii... WHEN NO FORCE COULD CONTROL YOUR HEART
Tu mere Pas aa gayiii YOU CAME CLOSE TO ME Main tere pas aa gayaaa... I CAME CLOSE TO YOU Both standing infrnot of each other Swara cant met her eys with Sanskar she is feeling shy Pyaasi hai teri saansein... YOUR BREATH IS THIRSTYPyaasi hai meri saansein... MY BREATH IS THIRSTYUspe yeh barsat haiii... * 2 ON TOP OF THAT ITS RAINING...Same with he is feeling awkward dnt know how to go forward to Swara, Both know that they are in love but don't know what to do next
Pehlaaa...hai pehlaaa... Tera mera pyar FIRST...OH FIRST...OUR LOVE Both eyes met for once again went back to lower &met with each others lip but no word came out from there
Ruk si gayi hai teri meri raahein hum jo saath aa gayeee WHEN WE GOT TOGETHER hai, manzil ke pas aa gaye. WE CAME CLOSE TO OUR DESTINATIONThey are in love they knew it but dnt know how to confess feeling nervous Aaye the kahaan se donon? WHERE DID WE COME FROMjaayenge kahaanpe donon? WHERE WILL WE BE GOINGYeh to ab kise yaad haiii... *2 WHO REMEMBERS ALL THAT NOW
Both trying to come closer to each other but something is not letting them to come Again their eyes met with each other &increase their heart bits
Kab se te hum tum Tanha akele Aaj Tujhe chain mil gayaa... TODAY YOU ARE SATISFIEDAaj mujhe chain mil gayaa... TODAY I'M SATISFIEDBaahon mein meri tum YOU ARE IN MY ARMS Baahon mein teri hum I AM IN YOUR ARMSAur yeh Jawaanraat haiii... AND ITS A YOUNG NIGHT...Aur yeh Jawaan raat hai Pehlaaa...hai pehlaaa... Tera mera pyar FIRST...OH FIRST...OUR LOVE

Here is the song link in case any of u r interested to listen

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ufJ4xXKLq5Q


They come near to each other but don't find words to speak, Finally Sanskar broke they ice say "You r looking gorgeous"Swara: Thanks,tum bhi bohat handsome lag rahe hoSanskar:really??Swara just nodded her head slowlySanskar:thanksThey both went to the farewell party it was great everyone enjoy a lot but Sanskar was thinking when he could confess to Swara finally the party got over & Sanskar took Swara to drop her to her hostel(Sanskar was cursing himself for not having the courage)then he decide he ll confess here he stopped the car.Swara: Sanskar y did u stopped the car?? Is everything okSanskar: No its notSwara:Sanskar what happen??Sanskar: I want to tell u something Swara:tell,im listeningSanskar: not here please come out from the carSwara: Fine Botgot down frm the car & & realize it was the place near to that lake where they started their friendship againSwara: now tell kia baat hai??Sanskar hold Swara's hnd tightly & start sayingSanskar:Swara from many days I want to say something to you but never have the courage to say kyuki mai tumhe khona nehi chahta,tumhari dosti mere liye sab kuch hai,tum se milne se pehle I was aimless I dnt know what I want from my life but u gave my life an aim to live a aim to smile & I want your support till the end of my life but not like a friend like a life partnerSwara was totally surprised she has tears in her eyes & Sanskar also have tears Sanskar: So Ms. Swara Gagodia I Love you & I promise I ll love u till the end of my life now I want to know your answer but before that I want a promise from you if ur answer is no then please dnt break our friendship I wont die without uSwara put her hand on Sanskar's mouth & said "Aj keh dya phir kabhi mar ne ki baat mat karne, tum ne ye kaise soch liye I wont love you I love you more than my life ye Mr.Sanskar maheshwari,saying this Swara hugged tightly Sanskar in a way that no one can separate them, suddenly it start heaving raining seems god also give his blesses to this beautiful coupleas they broke the hug they look into each other's eyes both had an passionate eye lock Sanskar cupped her face looking deep into her eyes both closed their eyes as the locked their lips into a passionate kiss ☺️

Edited by -Liana- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Liana... 🤗 ... Sissy... Simply superb... I almost read three times... That song is soo good and apt for this story... I'm loving it...

That fight... Then reunion.. Was awesome.. Simply... Perfect...

Final merged with kiss just elegant... 👏 .. Give a romantic but elegant epilogue... Like marriage.. Expecting baby.. Future achievement..together.. In business.. Something like that... If you want... But loved this part to the core...

Love you...
Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 9 years ago
Sujayricky thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update 👏
Swasan kiss 😳
Please give a epilogue please
raaz19 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A beautiful closure to a sweet story...amazing bond of friendship turned to loved sealed with a kiss...promise of a lifetime together blessed by the heavans...
Nice update and thanks for the pm...

Razia
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Posted: 9 years ago
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read all parts together
very nice story loved it😊
keep writing more

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