||THREAD 2|| My Foe To My Soul (PART :- 24 PAGE :- 135) - Page 88

Originally posted by: -Sinishere-

I must say you did a tremendous job in selecting the poems... Of paco & Pablo... 👏 .. Was soo awesome. Suited the situation and our hero. 😉 . I know you're villian of romance. I think sunny is inspired by you. Joking. How did you type this much big update da. Yeah signal is not good in chennai.

Okay coming too subject. Laksh. Ha. Ha ha. Your killer mind always do this. Just fantastic machi. I like him a lot.

Our hero. Sanskaar. I know where he is inspired... He is to good. His POV is okay man.

Our heroine. Swara. She have to grow up. Yeah man I accept we all forget about husband when we are in our maternal home. Even I have switch off my mobile. But here I can see the pain of Sanskaar. Soo I can't accept what Swara did. Then her redemption was good. Her carving for him.. Wow super.

Machi I have lied more.. Please forgive me.

Your's.

Sin.

Originally posted by: anu012

Fantastic update
loved all songs which u add in this update
finally swara confess love to sanskar
update soon nxt chptr

thnks for pm

Happy Ramadan

Originally posted by: Snehalokwani200

amzing update

loed it

update soon

Originally posted by: divya2913

... Divya...🤗... love you dear...

My dear Kamila, i have no words to describe how amazing this whole update is, its such a pleasant and heart wrenching update, superb dear. Actually you know the happiest thing is that a long time awaited superb proposal given by swara to sanskar and in my real life also the same thing happened in a reverse way that my hubby proposed me yesterday whole heartedly for the first time im sooo happy.

I'm very glad that you liked this update... I have spellbound... man.. with your comment ... yeah I accept that separation and longingness pave the path to confession... ohh dear I'm very happy for you... mine is totally different... I confessed to my husband when he pushing me out of his life...(He confessed me before).. give me hug...🤗

OMG dear i don't know really how to comment i loved each and every scene, the Whatsapp conversation, pallu romance, Antakshari, Maternal visit, the phone convo, the longingness for each other, and finally the proposal everything is superb.

Im overwhelmed yaar... swara is peculiar she have her own way to convince her husband... he is flatter... mmmawh dear... im very glad that you liked it...

The part which i liked the most are when sanskar pulled her and pinned her against the wall, the song which he dedicated to her, the quotes which he used for the proposal and the payback which swara gave to that sunny when she asked swara to forward the kiss to sanskar(that is the best payback), the goodbye kiss is so cute.

Pulling and pinning he is expert in that...lol... yeah when I read the translation I thought it'll suit swara... I like the Tamil version most.. omanapenne... gave back from swara youll witness it frequent... goid bey kiss.. blushing...

Really sanskar is an understanding person, he simply asked her to stay in her maternal home for her comfort its nice, little bit worried for sanskar when she again and again disconnected sanskar's call( i too do the same when i visit my mom's home but still worried for sanskar), but the real treat came after he stopped calling her not in anger but to give her own space to enjoy her three day trip It's really needed for swara to confess her feeling to sanskar and that happened too.

He is indeed... most of men won't do that... according to call.. I'll simply switch off my mobile... coz hell call me for every one hour... ... 😆... the longingness... is the best thing in love I would say... everyone must taste.. it... we can't stop ourselves if we meet them finally... phew... you know what I'm telling... well said dear...

Loved each and every dialogue of swara when she proposed him that is the best dear, both are made for each other, the part which irk's me is that sunny why she always flirting him even after knowing that he is already married the worst part is when she said that if you like the guy then it is okay for me its really irritating yaar, throw her out of the house please.

Proposal... what can I say... yeah I planned like this... but I typed different dialogues... which is gone by a single phone call from idea... then I typed this... I'm very happy yaar.. that you liked it... yeah both are made for each other.. sunny may be she is waiting for her turn... 😕😆...

She is irritating you too... lol... sire will throw her out... but I needed her for a while... 😃

Song selections are simply superb dear, its perfect for every situation when they played antakshari, when they departed from their respective place to see each other after those three day long long trip.

Songs... I'm very happy yaar... i love each songs... I have those songs in my queue... especially saathiya... song from hum apke hain koun...

Finally loved each and every scene, every songs every words you used. AWESOME update

Love you babes... mmmawh... for this wonderful comment... it made my day...

With love...

Kam...

Originally posted by: Kaveetha

Kamila akka.. 🤗 ... kavee🤗sissy..

Sorry for the late. These days i hardly get time to read all the stories due to lectures & works. I read the update in last monday but couldn't leave a comment on it. Later i forgot to comment. So i'n really srry akka. 😒

Don't say sorry sissy... it's okay yaar... you commented naa... that's enough for me...

Enough of my bak bak.. Back to the story..

Wow... Long & long update. Thnk you so much.

Aww.. Swara's whatsapp convo with sanky was so sweet. She care for him so much. And sanky too sent photos to her. Ha.. ha.. ha.. Laksh teasing sanky was so funny. He recorded that to show swasan's children in future.. 😆

Sanskaar blowing air on her nape... & that room scene.. Oh god i'm blushing.. ☺️

His tamarin has her own way to convince him... he can't stay anger around his Tamarin... what's app... I'm not in it... but I saw my cousin.. she is just 13used to take selfie send that to her friend... I hate selfie... 😕... she loves him... cares him soo much... he have any other option than sending photo back to his wifey... Laksh teasing I'm very happy that you find it funny... that awkward scene... no words.. from me.. you find it hot... I'm blushing too...

Loved swasan confrontation about swara's avoiding. He gave her time & didn't force himself on her. Such a nice husband. He is a gem. He is gem indeed... but avoiding by our love is worst thing in the world... very painful...

Laksh is very funny & mischievous. Anthakshari game was superb. Loved all the song parts. The song sanky sang for swara was superb. Loved it. Laksh... is really a lakshman... with some naughty ness... I'm very hapoy you loved all the songs... I live that song too tamil version most...

And the truth & dare game.. amazing.. Raglak was so hillarious. Loved bond between sanlak & swaragini.

Oh this sunny... 😕 how can she say swara to give that kiss to sanky?? Oh come on man she is his wife. I liked sanskaar when he tried to go away that time. Sunny kissed swara.. 🤣 swara gave a fine answer to sunny. Good.. 👏

Oh akka sanky's proposal was outstanding. 😳

The games... I have to pick a perfect questions for everyone I think... Raglak...I promised you guys that I'll use Raglak in a good way.. the bond is needed to prove how the family will be... sunny kissing swara... I thought it'll be perfect if she kiss swara than Sanskaar ... I'm very glad that you liked the sanky proposal...

Swara was exited to go to her maika. But i felt bad when she treated sanskaar like that. I know she missed her parents but she could have spoken to him properly. Poor sanky didn't disturb her even though he was missing her. You have written them beautifully.

Swara.. sometimes she'll live in her own world... were only she matters... she is there with her family after months... soo is obvious to behave like that... she didn't realise that he means a lot to her... until he stopped contacting her.. thank you soo much sissy mmmawh...

Yippee.. Finally swara confessed her feelings. The best part. Thank you so much akka. Loved it. 🤪

Overall it was a superb update. Loved every part of it.

Ok..akka take your time & update.

Im very glad you liked the confession part...Don't say thank you sissy.. it's my duty..

Wish you a happy ramdaan!

Love you..

Kaveetha

Thank you soo much kaveetha sissy...

With love...

Kam..

Originally posted by: gayu6

Hi akka read the update n teaser to teaser last pat it seems like there is some misunderstanding between them ah. Loved the update akka. I loved those craze moments when he s having his breakfast n taking selfie n sending her photo n tat time laksh teasing I loved those.the entire part I loved akka. Y u r nt in fb akka create an account na pls. Started reading again ur story in fb also akka 😃

Originally posted by: lol_leku_RoFl

Hi Akka..how are you... Hi lekha..🤗... I'm fine sissy... how are you???
I'm sorry I dono page of my res..
So posting my comment...
Don't say sorry leku.. Plz...
Wow superb awesome update...
Swara ...typical wife behaviour...her love for sanskar,care everything unique..oh god..sanskar not have sense he attend wife call in first ring..but after 65 missed call ..he called her back...correct ah patha..swara thaan kovama irukanum...but its reverse..he melted in her innocence..hahah..superb ...oh lil hot scene ...pity man..he cant enjoy it completely...you described it well Akka..
I'm very glad that you liked this update... dear... yeah she is behaving like a typical wifey of Sanskaar ... you find her care love for her husband is unique.. I'm very happy... but she made a mistake naa... wait what mistake she made... ohh slap... she slapped him naa.. soo she have too woo him.. if she get angry... he'll get more angry.. she has her own way to melt him... awkward moment made us freeze...
Oh god...one situation made them maintain distance..sanskar is sooo pavam Akka...
Six days' sanskar finally poured out his feelings...nice akka...family timing..nice idea Akka...swasan gaze on eachother..cute Akka...sanlak teasing eachother..hahhaa funny.Ragini burst out nice Akka...swara irritating sanskar..nice..
They maintaining distance... he doesn't want to force her or frightened her... he loves her... she is scared... he can't tolerate that she is avoiding him... im very happy leku... family timing... thank you...
Hahha..very funny laksh and sunny combo..but sunny begin sanky..let her go to hell..but its comedy..song selection...swasan glance...i completely enjoyed with song...hope soon swara will accept her love...

Laksh... is a bro who pull his legs and forward his hands to his brother... to lift from the floor... sunny funny...song you liked it I'm happy ... she confessed sissy..

Laksh...great villian Akka...sunny sunny...he wont leave anyone alone ahhh..blo***..let me kill her ..wonderful came truth or dare...same time very difficult...sanskar got caught but to my suprise ..sunny kissed swara..hehehehe LOL...unbelievable...nice task to sanskar..i love that words Akka..superb...
Laksh and sunny are villains of swasan romance... I would say only sunny... not Laksh... thank you sissy.. Pablo Neruda words are too good... paco too...
Again sunny..cheap...sema swara rocked...sunny shocked..she need it..swara oh so cute Akka...her expression in my imagination..apt girl for this story..
Swara vs sunny you'll witness it im upcoming parts... not all only few... sunny she is sweetheart... lol... apt girl naa Swara... 😃
Oh wow...sanskar request...swara imitating him...swasan scene is so cool,sizzling for me...so u planned small break for them...as planned..correct timing for story..well written update Akka...
Sanskaar... request but I like his bossy order to his wifey... swara imitation... it'll be fun to watch that in serial naa... sure will update as soon as I get proper network...
Sorry...
No sorry...
Love you..
I'm back
Lekah...

Love you too...

Welcome back... 🤗

With love...

Kam...

Originally posted by: lol_leku_RoFl

Hi once again...
Hi Lekha... 🤗
Superb update Akka...felt so emotional Akka...
At first she was immersed herself in her mothers place for meeting and enjoyment...

Love you sissy... you felt emotional... I'm very glad... coz I'm not good in emotional... everyone do that... even me...
She is so much..how avoided hos calls..but later she felt pain of avoiding..but he let her enjoy ..sema Akka..superb...awsone..her brother got nicely..pavam payan..
She is enjoying sissy... she is always with him... but... she is here with her parents just for three days... he is gem right. That was me and my bro... still we used to fight like that...
Nice bonding..sis and bro..superb family timing...felt as my family time.. i want this kinda family bond in the serial... they wasting it on fake pregnancy... love you sis...
Both missing each other madly.. they are missing... longing for each other...
Wow..i didn't except this will lead to proposal Akka..its natural..words are so good to read..hats off. .
Pls kill that sunny...spoiler lady...

Why leku... this is possible sissy... the separation and longingness will lead to confession... Thank you sissy... you liked it... mmmawh...

I need sunny for more time... if i kill her my bro sujay will get hurt... he loves her... 😆

Superb...
Update...
Wonderful...awesome...
Happy Ramzan to you and family..
Enjoy..
Will wait for your update..still in late..
Mmmawh sissy love you...

Thank you soo much...

Will update...
Love you
Lekah

With love...

Kam...

Originally posted by: nikky22

hey di😊... sorry for d late response..😔

part 22:

selfie wid food... lovely

lucky capturing video of sanskar😆😆

yaar di u r making dis sanskar more and more sweet... i am loving dis sanskar in ua ff di...

aww tamrin missing her husbandfinallyyy... the most awaited confession of our crazy girl...

teaser:

diii wat was dat teaser... u r scaring me... seriously divorce oh my god😲...

now am eagerly waiting fr ua next update dii...i know even u hav personal works soo take ua tym diii... will b waiting...😊

thanks for d pm di...

love u diii..❤️