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kamila.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#661

Originally posted by: SwaSan4ever
Sanskar is such a sweetheart ! Without knowing the exact reason he is showering so much love I hope later he get to knw the real reason I want to knw how he feel to knw y she ate those rotten eggs
Will b waiting for rest of the parts

Thank you soo much dear... Sanskaar is a sweetheart I want to maintain the same image for him here too.. True fan Haan.. 😳 .. He loves her soo much.. He don't need any reason for that.. Yep sure he'll get to know the real reason behind his wifey act...

Updated dear... Full part...

With love..

Kam..

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arathy

@sarathy321

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Posted: 9 years ago

#662

A wonderful update akka. ..

Loved every scene...

The song sequence , their kissess and romance...very nice...

And the last part was a bit surprise ...Sanskaar helping her out with persuading his career...

Waiting for ur next update

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#663

Res for 21 (B)😊

Unres

Dear Kamila,

I am so so very sorry for this delay in unres.😭

But what an opening, Sanskaar openly flirty in spite of the rotten egg fragrance - truly he is completely fida and Swara is also slowly opening up😊 eating rotten eggs is worth him , she is also fida.

How much more better can Sanskaar get - he makes excuses (very valid ones) for her to his family.

The possible romantic encounter in the moonlight spoilt by Sunny (quite apt, in a twisted way) and then Sanskaar searching for a hidden camera🤣

And her half confession - when she admits that she ate the rotten eggs to stay in the marriage it was like she was confessing her love but then he wants her to say those words. And yet he does realise that she loves him maybe a little more than he loves her. Well am sure the kisses would soon cause explosive fireworks between them

Such a lovely potential romance and Swara had to ruin it by thinking it was ''Aashish" Sanskaar wants to seduce her and she slaps him. Poor guy and poor Swara - both end up spending the night apart.

But they do makeup so sweetly and you leave us with a tantalising hint about the next chapter. Do update soon.

love,

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago

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mahin

@mahin123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#664

As usual beautifully written. Thank you so much for writing such an awesome story.

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SwaSan4ever

@SwaSan4ever

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#665

The whole update is awesome & finally Swara 's confession next part can't wait plz try to update soon plz plz plz !

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lekahravi

@lekahravi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#666

Late res..
So,big update..

Sooo late unres...
Heee

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sreeninnu

@sreeninnu

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#667

Awesome update dear...u nailed it...thank u for a lamba update 😛

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cutegurlx

@cutegurlx

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#668

Awesome update diii
i love that song alot ... its my fav
swara confession ... cnt wait fr it
update soon

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Anusha

@Anusha62

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#669

Hello kammila such a long update,well outstanding u have good imagination thoughts i shuld say!!!!!
Coming to update
*agar main kahoon..mujeh tumse mohabat hai..WOW yaar,lovely song sequence..da way both raising there eyebrows,there expressions whn in signal couple,girl kissing sensually infornt of every1,hahahah sanskar culdn't take it anymore nd stoped car in side of road to kiss his love.oh superb then though her hand smelling terrible he entwined his hand wid her nd kissed it.uff lovely!!!
*whn sanskar come back to room aftr talking wid sunny funny,suddenly startd searching for camera cute swara got irkd whn she get to knw he is searchng for camera,she felt bad nd sanskar teasing her by holding her belly ooo romantic,then she atleast confessed indirectly y she ate rotten eggs to "stay in marriage",dat she to love him da way he love her.agn lip lock god heart freaking kiss re so sweet!!!!
*crazy swara wake up sanky at 5.30 to bring peppermint spray..head massage was aww,by mistake slapping scenes agn cheek kissing scenes each nd every line writen perfectly cool!!!!
P.S:"waiting for swara confession in ur style"