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sumeetadeb

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Posted: 9 years ago

#671

Superb👏.its awsum.mute interpretaion of song by our swasan(credits goes to u) just amazing.nd end with slap and its consequence-it make me soo egar to know swaras action next to convince sanskar.

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shamina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#672

Awesome update.
The precap is also nice.eagerly waiting for it.
The characterisation of Swara is beautiful.she is a crazy girl.
Waiting for your next update

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sneha lokwani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#673

AWESOME UPDATE

CS WAS SUPERB

AWWW LOVED SWARA'S CS

MM PRECAP SOUNDS INTERESTING

UPDATE SOOON

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Kaveetha

@Kaveetha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#674

Kamila akka,

Are u going to end this ff soon? No.. Don't do that how can i stay without your ff... (Like sanskaar's diwali wala confession 😆)

Ok... I'll start with the song sequence..

I haven' listened that song before but i liked it. So just few minutes before, i downloaded it. Now i'm humming that song.. Agar main kahu mujhe thumse mohabbat hei... wow... amazing.

Back to the story..

Aww... Kissy kissy.. 😳 very romantic. But akka somehow i guessed this kiss in previous part. Cause sanskaar loves swara a lot. So he wouldn't mind to kiss her, whether her mouth smell good or bad. Well that is how our sanskaar is. I loved it..

Yeh swara bi na... Sent her hubby to get a mouth freshner in the early morning. 😆

Head massage... Lovely..

Oh.. That slap.. 😲 she thought that it was ashish.. I think Sanskaar felt very sad because she hit him, not because of the slap. But it was accidental. Both of them hadn't their dinner.. Poor swasan.. After that, the morning cheek kiss was lovely. 😳

Akka, each & every scene.. you have written beautifully. Excellent work👏

Yayy.. Next update is swara's confession.. Eagerly waiting. Update it soon.

Love you akka..

Kaveetha

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Pygmalion63

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Posted: 9 years ago

#675

AWESOME UPDATE..
LOVED IT SO MUCH..
Lovely song...
Next Swara's confession WOW

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showrav

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Posted: 9 years ago

#676

unres page 91 dear

Edited by showrav24 - 9 years ago

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kamila.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#677

Originally posted by: showrav24
unres page 91 dear

Read your unres bro... It brought me a orbit white smile to my face... 😃 .. I reply once im free...

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Teddy94

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Posted: 9 years ago

#678

Hey dear.. Happy to see ur update..

As usual amazing...

Loved the song seq... Their gestures n all..

I love all ur song seq wich always suits the situation...

Tht Sunny bunny is always irritating.. Disturbing Swasan..

So sanky got to know y she ate the eggs...😳

Loved his PoV n the kiss it's awesome 😳

Swara woke up sanky to bring freshener tht too at 5:30 😆😆

N the mrng Scene is amazing.. Loved it😳

N the kitchen scene.. Swara wants to keep her mouth shut but as always she can't 😆

N tht. Sunny doesn't have a taste..😡 Loved the way Sanskar supported Swara..😳

The way Swara changing Sanskar n herself for him is awesome...😳

I loved it wen she drooled over Sanskar.. It would have been good if he would have caught her..😆

Swara taking care of Sanskar... Brkfst n massage... The way she massaged his head n made him sleep on her lap is awesome...😳

But she messed it by slapping him... It's not her fault... Felt bad for her...

Sanskar even after being angry on her always try fulfill her wishes... Loved their bonding in the ff... But Swara thought they r divorce papers...

N his kiss on her cheeks😳 is awsum...

Eagerly waiting for her confession.. I know it vl be hatke in ur style...😆😛

Waiting for nxt update.. Cont soon...

Love u dear for long update...🤗

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divya2913

@divya2913

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Posted: 9 years ago

#679

Hi Kamila, thank you so much for the pm first, and after reading your entire update i felt satisfied for the long wait, and

Day by day swara feeling comfortable around our hero sanskar is really nice that too she responded to his kiss during midnight that's really awesome,

and the slap which she gave him and the response he gave her is so natural, i too don't like if someone sprinkle water during my deep sleep but the difference here is our hero is on full romantic mood he would have never expected such a response from his love at that moment, poor swara still feeling like she is in her Maternal home that's y she gave such a blow to her sweet husband mistaking him as her bro, lovely dear.

Actually ur story is different from my expectations in all the way bcoz i used to predict something about the next update but it came out always as a surprise for me.

I don't know really i should say this or not but still im saying this please don't take it in a wrong way bcoz i feel like u r most similar to swara of My foe to my soul, the same bubbly and fun loving girl i think, bcoz the words u r using and the dialogues, scenes are almost natural, no one can imagine something which they are not, i love each and every part of this story of yours, love u dear.

And also i liked the way he brought application form for her further studies that's really showing his love for her dream also, she is so lucky.