~SwaSan Drabble Series by Shona and Anna~ Page 16 ~New Drabble Updated

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
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Shona and Anna 🤗

Lovely Drabble! I loved the cuteness of the whole thing- it was romantic and slightly naughty and yet tender at the same time. The mix of the separation telling on both, with Sanskaar's clever and yet sexy idea of being the "strange" delivery man who morphs into the passionate "substitute" husband and their interaction was nicely balanced and hit all the right notes:). Really enjoyed it!

Lots of love,
Shru xoxo

Hi Shru🤗

Thank you so so so so so much Love for reading and commenting on the drabble!! I am so very glad that you liked it!! You know how much I love reading your comments!!😃

Anna really wanted a Baadi romance scene. And We both wanted a happy and naughty wala one!! So all of sudden this thing striked us and we worked on it!!

Now Mr and Mrs Maheshwari are naughty!! aren't they? They are not like typical couples were only hero is bold and heroine is a shy!!! Our SwaSan are naughty, bold and absolutely beautiful.. Don't you agree? So thought this idea would work well on their bold and naughty avatar!!

But I am so glad you liked it!! Thank you so much once again love for reading and commenting!!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

anna and shona.. good work.. lovely drabble.

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#33

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Very romantic, mischievous, sensuous and oh so passionate 😳 Right mix of sugar & spice! Really liking this Mrs and Mr Sanskaar Maheshwari who can't wait to get their hands on each other. 😉

Viji🤗

Thank you so much love for reading and commenting!!

I am so so glad you liked it Viji!! Now that they are married, we can't expect them to be away from each other!! Can we?😆 😆 After all, they are the naughty couples!!!!😆 😆

Thank you once again for reading and commenting

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#34

Originally posted by: indrani7495
awsome... 😳 the inseparable Mr. n Mrs. Maheshwari... very nicely written...keep posting more such drabbles...!! n thnx fr d pm !! ..:))

Thank you so much for reading and commenting Indrani!!

I am so glad you liked it!! Will definitely try to come up with something soon and will definitely PM as well!!

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: PRINCESS_ALISHA
oh naughty naughty sanku & swara

i loved it. plz keep posting shona and Anna.👏

Alisha🤗

Thank you dear!! I am glad you liked the naughty naughty SwaSan😆 😆

Thank you so much for reading and commenting😉

Will definitely do

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Anusha62
lovely update..!!

Thank you so much Anusha for reading and commenting Anusha

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Originally posted by: Esha012
awesome

Thank you so much for reading and commenting Esha

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#38

Originally posted by: -Prithi-
this is awesome

Thank you so much Prithi for reading and commenting!!

I am glad you liked it

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Tapathi
Shona and Anna...😊
very good idea...👏
very intresting tooo...
and Drabble series was just Ooolakomostas...!
plz dnt ask me the meaning...if i like anything more i will use this word...😊
do countinue...and Shona thanq for PM...😊

Hey Tapathi!!😉

I am glad you liked the concept😃

And thats the new word i just learned😆 😆

Thank you so much for reading and appreciating it!! Will definitely continue and PM as well