Originally posted by: coolgal270
Shona and Anna,
Wonderful idea and wonderful writeup!👏
Totally enjoyed this drabble..
I loved how you ve captured the small nuances of a marriage...how she misses his embrace at night, how she plays with his hair,how he holds her close and sleeps, how she doesnt want to disturb him even though she wants to hear his voice.. V v nice!
And then he comes to meet her & completes d 'san' part of swasan.I have always wanted to see them like this... Together, blissfully happy, content, laughing and carefree... Without any responsibilities of the family, just the two of them completely into each other and living their life khulke... Your writeup has just portrayed that so beautifully... I can so visualize this happening and it gives me so much of joy. Thank u!👏
And ofcourse, loved the whole'permanent' and 'temporary' game between the two 😆. Especially the first one- permanent address.. Actually her permanent adddress is his heart, isn't it!
And the romance - the love along with pasion...uuiii.. How he backtracks her into a wall and pins her there,gives her bangles, makes her wear them, the teasing, her enjoying his harkatein, both lost into each other, love and desire blending in one... Uff!! Awesome!😳
Your OS is humorous, romantic,funny,light,passionate and very very cute. Thus making it an awesome story!! I hope the CVs implement this one day!
So looking forward to more of these..
Muah..
Lots of love, sumi!
Kumkum Bhagya
Anupamaa
