Vajra : An elven tale SwaSan chapter 13 page 52 Updated 21/5/16

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Anusha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

great start da tittle is so amazing do continue!!!!

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Zephyr8

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Another interesting story begins...The prologue was amazing. Looking forward to reading this one.

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Sakura24

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Originally posted by: simsen23
Sakura...dear.🤗

I am very happy and excited for your new ss Vajra.The title is outstanding and it has deep meaning, cause it's a heavy word.

Well as we know Vajra is a mythical weapon, one wielded by the god Indra. But by Tibetan work Vajra implies Commitment ,Knowledge, used for exorcising inimical forces and the last one wrathfulness.I guess all these characteristics are there in this story.I have personal interest in fantasy stories..

The Prologue is really nice.so there are four characters, Two brothers are fighting for one woman, but the lady loves only one ,the one who loves her with equal passion and the other man was fighting in revenge (I guess) and there is another lady who loves the unlucky brother without any love in return...

I can guess the characters ,but its better to read the first chapter, after all, the writer is very intelligent.. She will unfold the characters perfectly ...😊

Update the first chapter soon...
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Simi😊

Simi dear🤗

I'm glad you have a soft spot for fantasy and found this one interesting. Oh, how happy I feel now😃

As for the title, yes in Hinduism it would be lord Indra's weapon, in Tibetan lore, it would be knowladge, enlightment, in Pali it means the diamond😊 Or as hard and invincible as the diamond. You're right in guessing, its all in here, compacted in to one story.

Ah yes, when you put it that way, that characters walk with name tags on right?😛 Thank you for calling me intelligent dearest😳 I will try to keep your interest up with the chapters.

Next update will be the prologue, that was just the opening I've posted.

Will update soon.

Love,

Sakura

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Sakura24

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Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik
Wow!! Such a gripping piece!! Sakura, you are amazing yaar👏 Can't wait to see how this story unfolds.. Intezaar karing of the next update😛
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Akshata😊

Thanks a lot Akshata dear,

It's nice to see you all excited😃 I hope the Intezaar will be a sweet one with equally worthy reward. Will update soon.

Love,

Sakura

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Anusha62
great start da tittle is so amazing do continue!!!!

Thanks Anusha (Is it alright if I call you that?)

I'm so happy you're interested. Will continue soon😊

Love,

Sakura

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Sakura24

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Originally posted by: Zephyr8
Another interesting story begins...The prologue was amazing. Looking forward to reading this one.

Thank you so much dear. I'm glad you liked it. Will update soon😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: princess_tara
Interesting

Thanks a lot Tara😊

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Dearest Saku

Yayyy- another masterpiece coming our way! As you probably know, I have a HUGE LoTR/ Hobbit obsession. The elves have always been my favourite as soon as I read Elven I was lost in raptures! The Prologue is awesome- I think I have spotted the 4- SwaSan and RagYa respectively and cannot wait to see how this unfolds. The battle between the two brothers as the start with the relevant Queens (in their own ways whilst only one is called that openly) arrayed- all hint at the sort of fantasy fiction that is unashamedly my favourite genre. Cannot wait to read 🤗

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Aroha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Hi Sakura..
New story from you..
I love all your stories.. I read them again and again..
And this, prologue is interesting..
Update soon.. & thank you for this story..

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foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Res... Brilliant intro. Will comment more when in front of my comp

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only you know how to weave so much suspence in an intro with prologue yet to come. well you have my interest piqued. i am going to hazard a wild wild guess which knowing you is going to be off the mark. these are swara, laksh, sanskar and ragini in each of the paras...in that order. ragini clearly in love with laksh but he love swara. sanskar misses his past but has now found love in swara. swara herself probably doesnt love either but her curse of love had made them love her and now she has to bear the burden of one of them dying because of that love while one survives. she is the foreteller so she knows what the destiny had planned. yet why do i feel that sanskar could change the destiny. laksh the one supposed to the be the winner already feels he has lost everything. and sanskar who is bearing the burden of what the destiny had foretold has still been able to find something in the shadows of gloom.

amazing intro. waiting for your prologue and your story. write soon.

vajra obviously being sanskar who doesnt give up even in the face of destiny?

Edited by foresight - 9 years ago