SwaSan FF: Forced into Marrying your soulmate(Thread 2 Link on page 1) - Page 95

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hey Nita 🤗

Thanks for bearing with my later responses dear. I am feeling better now but still not back to full health, and had a lot of piled up work to catch up with.And i am sorry for the late Reply😭. Happy to know you are back to full health 😃.

I really love the cozy, familial atmosphere you are weaving around Sanskaar, Swara and their interaction with Pari, Adarsh and their new baby. It feels so warm and cozy. 😊 Swara is getting to see the tender and nurturing side of Sanskaar, apart from his capable, mature side. Surely she will realize sooner rather than later what a wonderful hubby she's got. 😉..She got the perfect Hubby ,even i am jealous of her 😆.Happy to know you liked there scenes with Pari and Adarsh😊

I loved that bit about a sleep deprived Adarsh handing over his baby son to Sanskaar! And the baby promptly stopped wailing and was so comfortable in his Mausa Ji's arms! 😆...How can a baby cry when Sanskar was holding it. 😆

Liked the way Swara stood up for herself, and told Sharmishta how she felt sad and disappointed that her own mom did not fully understand her. Almost unconsciously, Swara has started registering how well Sanskaar understands her. She even retorted to Shomi that Sanskaar understood her better in just a few days, than her own Mom! 😉 Understanding and trust are the bedrocks of a lovely relationship, after all---you have shown that development well. I also liked how Pari stood up for Swara and defended her to their Mom.Swara loves her family but wont take every accusation and bear it in silence, she will stand up for herself. It might sound rude to talk back to your parents. But unless you words are rude , i dont think letting your opinion known is wrong.

The Swara---Ragini scene was a good one yaar. It had a very "real" feel, one could imagine cousins having such a frank conversation, in sorting out muddled emotions of jealousy. I liked Swara's idea of having a musical competition with Sujata, Sanskaar and Lakshya as judges! But I think Lakshya would vote for his bhabhi only---he might be playing cupid by praising Swara to Sanskaar! 😆 Lakshya seriously thinks he is such a love guru. 😉 ..Happy to know you liked there scenes dear. That why blind audition😉 or else Lucky will mess up his marriage in playing Cupid😆

Sanskaar's gesture of getting a party dress for Swara was so nice, he really keeps her interests and comfort in mind, every single time. I think it really wouldn't be too long before their fondness deepens into more intense feelings for each other...Too be honest even i am excited has an writer to get to that part quick where both SwaSan fondness deepens into more intense feelings, but establishing the basic seems important since this one was an forced marriage.😊

Once again, I like how you've paced this story. For an unexpected, almost forced marriage from both sides, you have traced the evolution of a comfort level, and the growing friendship between them, very well...I was and i am still worried about the pace, but i am happy to know you liked the pace dear.

As to who the mystery caller is 😛, I am waiting for you to reveal in the next chapter. I am so sure there are no skeletons in Sanskaar's closet. This is bound to be Uttara, at least, I guess so. 😉...Yep all are right in the guessing .It is Uttara .

Lots of Love,

---Viji

Love

Nita

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

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Nita thank God finally you updated 😆 I am sorry , i took lot of time to update , been a busy week. 😊

Seriously a mind blowing update again 😉 Thanks Sujoy. 😊

I just loved swara jealousy and that girl tara she seriously a bold and fearless lady because she was saying infront of swara so easily seriously she rocks 😎 ..Swara is still not sure of her emotions .Wait till Tara meets the love stuck Swara then it will be not end well for her😆

Lakshya and ajay part was awesome 😆 swasan talking about how to handle him was superb 🤣 ..Poor Ajay, His boss loves to play Cupid😉 . Happy to know you liked SwaSan convo😊

Swasan dance ☺️
Swara liking sanskar touch that was lovely 😳 ..Happy to know you liked the it Sujoy 😊

That stupid girls i hate them...There are jealous of Swara😡

Annpurna 😡 i hate her ...I too hate her, i dont know if i hate her being bad in the SS more or being an Saint in the show more😆

But i loved the way sanskar consoles swara like a true sole mate ...SwaSan will be there for each other like Soulmates

Sanlak bonding is great 👏 ..I too like there bond, happy to know you liked it as well

Morning scene was lovely 😳 ..Thanks 😃

The way sanskar is trying to protect from anpurna taunts is awesome..He will protect her always😊

I hope in future updates i would like to see uttara and swara bond also.Next update will cover that part😉

Beautifully written 👏
Loved it Thanks Sujoy. I am really happy to always find you Res as soon as i post. And your comments make my day. Once again Thanks for the lovely Comment

Update super soon..Will try too update soon.😊

Originally posted by: Olivia12

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Nita dear🤗... Hi Olivia dear🤗

Aha! Finally the much awaited party sequence👏
Cupid did plan everything brilliantly, right from the decorations to displaying wedding pictures and arranging dance for newly weds, barring his long cheesy speech😆 but hey we are not complaining😆...Well Cupid love his Cheesy Speech 😆. Cupid is an expert in Romance after all😉

Loved Swara's dress after all it was Sanskaar's choice😉 ..Sanskar Choice is always the best😉
A perfect entrance made by them, holding each other's arm and then they danced together...I always love to see my favorite OTP walking holding each others arm and of course i love to see them dance too. . So those scene are bound to happen in my FF 😉

despite their attempt to keep it casual, they ended up feeling the passion between them which you so correctly put was a sweet torture for them😉...Let them keep trying to keep it casual it will never work 😈

Everything was going well and then Swara chanced upon listening the cheap remarks about her😡, she managed it well but the incident did left a bad taste in her mouth...Too bad there are lot of people like that in the real world too😡 .

Sanskaar, ever the gentleman set the record straight regarding Tara😡 to put Swara's mind at ease
Atlast Swara was able to have a good look at mystery caller's name😆...See i cleared the MU soon . All mystery is out for now , well till i create more 😈

I have already told you Annapurna gives me strong negative vibes, hope with Sanskaar's support Swara succesfully douse the new flames of jealousy ignited by AP😕...I will cover it next chapter 😉. Annapurna is negative indeed like you said 😊

Oh I so love the fact that Swara shared her worries with Sanskaar as now she recognizes him as someone she can depend upon and he did soothe her worries.Even in the show, i love how Swara seems to share everything with Sanskar even during the fake marriage, In my FF there are already married so why not 😆.

I think they will share bed on permanent basis from now on and Swara's hand will eventually find it's way towards Sanskaar's chest 😉😳...It will but to witness it Swara need to wake up first 😉

And in the end we had another surprise guest, Uttara. Hey, why she doesn't know about the change of events after all she was talking regularly with Sanskaar on phone..I explain about that it in the next Chapter 😊

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this installment😃...Thanks Olivia dear😃

Thanks for the PM and do try to work on next chapter soon😃..Will try to start the working on the next one soon 😊

Lots of love,
Olivia❤️

Love

Nita🤗

Originally posted by: Sree8410

My dear Nita 🤗 this one is for making up for the previous chapter. Loved this one.

I love jealous Swara. I'm simply loving this chapter not that I didn't before but this one is so sweet I can't stop myself from smiling at Swara's jealousy. I'll unres after reading it again😉

And the replying part can wait. So take your time. Relax.

Love

Sree.

Originally posted by: jess_27

Loved the update... The entire party scene was lovely.. With swara liking sanskaar's touch.. And the dance.. Every but of it was nice.. How swara felt jealous but sanskaar cutting out her doubt at once... Saying that he is happily married to HER...Thanks Jessica for the lovely comment. Happy to know you liked the entire party scene. There marriage might be forced but still they are happily married😉

Abt AP... Im eager to know now as to what she said to ragini... Since ragini cleared all MU wid swara just the previous day.. I hope it doesn't destroy their bond any further...As Sanskar said it might prove to be a setback but it wont destroy the bond completely. Next part i let you know what AP said to Ragini😉

Swara was now totally open abt telling sanskaar, whatever AP told her.. And thankfully he was by her side to support her... And then swara offering the new sleeping arrangement... With the pillow wall.. And sanskaar happily agreeing as he couldn't see swara sleeping on the couch the next day...Swara find Sanskar has the perfect companion to share her feeling and thoughts . Maybe it is due to his constant support that she is beginning to look for him to share what on her mind. Happy to know you liked the new sleeping arrangement😃

Swara then realised, how she had her hand across his chest.. And not aware that this was her exact sleeping position the previous night as well at adarsh and pari's place...Poor Girl, one night is tormenting her, i didnt have it in me to let her know about the previous night as well😆

Thankfully the person whose name was saved wid hearts was sanskaar's sis.. So no MU.. Pheww... But then uttara not knowing abt swara being her new bhabhi.. I hope she reacts positively... Nevertheless, sanskaar will always be by her side... I dont like MU ,so it will mostly likely not last long .. Everyone rightly guessed it was Uttara 😆. Uttara reaction will be up next 😉

Waiting eagerly for the next part.. Update soon..Will try to update soon dear.

Love

Jessica

Love

Nita

Originally posted by: zeenucharm

Wow nice

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

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Nita...🤗... Awesome one yaar... I thoroughly enjoyed it...Happy to know you liked It kamillaa dear🤗

Like how swasan got ready for party... In party Laksh PA.. Torturous speech.. Their secret talk.. About the speech .. Everything..then the dance man it was soo fantastic.. Their enormous feelings for each other... The way they choose to hide it wow... Just loved it... Poor Guests have to listen to the torturous speech, i always hate when i go anywhere and some one get the mike and speaks for an hour😡. But I am really glad you liked the Party scene dear😃

Tara.. Nice touch.. Jealous Swara.. Even in my ff the same track is coming.. But different...😆.. It's nice how swara played her detective giri.. In collecting his girlfriend list thank God there no one... It's a relief... Then it's Sanskaar turn to get jealous... Ha . ha.. It's nice.. How Swara escaped from his question about she is feeling jealous... I literally laughed here...When are you going to update 😉. Jealous Swara will be gone once she truly understand Sanskar, so enjoy it while it lasts😆.

Ap.. Y can't she stay away from poking her nose in swaras life... She can monitor her daughter life but not swaras... It's nice how sanlak helped Swara.. Their growing bond is superb swasan...Well it was Lucky who brought her 😆. But you are right she should just stick with Ragini 😡.

Soo again everything started from 'a' in between swaragini... .. It's super touch how Sanskaar helped Swara in praising raginis yesterday dish.. Totally power packed update...Not everything back as the beginning dear, it was a minor setback, i have no intention of destroying all the progress Ragini made and make her go back to Square one .

Love you...

Love You too

Nita

Originally posted by: showrav24

nice update👏

loved whole party scene😳

swara jealous😉 she become possessive about sanky😆

annapurna😡

hehehe sleep wala scene she think this is first time😆

update soon cant wait to know further