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Posted: 9 years ago

#901

Originally posted by: NitaReid
Finally caught up with all the lovely comments except my dear friends Vini, Olivia and Sree,if i missed anyone else please let me know ... And i am very much aware of that .. Will try to reply to them asap . Right now i think i have to start the next chapter or else i will cross the self imposed deadline and i dont want that ..

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Nita

Take your time dear.

Nita, don't we have to find a name for Jr. Adarsh? Would love to name him Varun but since you already chose to name Sanskar's father Varun we need to come up with something new.

Also update your character's list on page 1. Sanskar's parents name is not included.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#902

Hey Nita 🤗

Thanks for bearing with my later responses dear. I am feeling better now but still not back to full health, and had a lot of piled up work to catch up with.

I really love the cozy, familial atmosphere you are weaving around Sanskaar, Swara and their interaction with Pari, Adarsh and their new baby. It feels so warm and cozy. 😊 Swara is getting to see the tender and nurturing side of Sanskaar, apart from his capable, mature side. Surely she will realize sooner rather than later what a wonderful hubby she's got. 😉

I loved that bit about a sleep deprived Adarsh handing over his baby son to Sanskaar! And the baby promptly stopped wailing and was so comfortable in his Mausa Ji's arms! 😆

Liked the way Swara stood up for herself, and told Sharmishta how she felt sad and disappointed that her own mom did not fully understand her. Almost unconsciously, Swara has started registering how well Sanskaar understands her. She even retorted to Shomi that Sanskaar understood her better in just a few days, than her own Mom! 😉 Understanding and trust are the bedrocks of a lovely relationship, after all---you have shown that development well. I also liked how Pari stood up for Swara and defended her to their Mom.

The Swara---Ragini scene was a good one yaar. It had a very "real" feel, one could imagine cousins having such a frank conversation, in sorting out muddled emotions of jealousy. I liked Swara's idea of having a musical competition with Sujata, Sanskaar and Lakshya as judges! But I think Lakshya would vote for his bhabhi only---he might be playing cupid by praising Swara to Sanskaar! 😆 Lakshya seriously thinks he is such a love guru. 😉

Sanskaar's gesture of getting a party dress for Swara was so nice, he really keeps her interests and comfort in mind, every single time. I think it really wouldn't be too long before their fondness deepens into more intense feelings for each other.

Once again, I like how you've paced this story. For an unexpected, almost forced marriage from both sides, you have traced the evolution of a comfort level, and the growing friendship between them, very well.

As to who the mystery caller is 😛, I am waiting for you to reveal in the next chapter. I am so sure there are no skeletons in Sanskaar's closet. This is bound to be Uttara, at least, I guess so. 😉

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#903

Nita my dear...BTW I wanted to add: I LOVE your siggy! 🤗🤗

Fedal rivalry is the best indeed: I can never forget the 2007 & 2008 wimbledon finals, or the 2009 AO final. What spectacular matches those were.

BTW I liked the 2014 and 2015 Wimbledon finals too 😉 as well as the 2010 and 2011 US Open semis. 😆 What to do, I like watching Novak--Fed matches too, especially when Novak wins. 😉

But the 2012 AO final and the 2013 French Open semis, I really couldn't enjoy much. No joy in seeing one of my favorites beating another. 😕 I always have my heart in my mouth for Djokodal matches, never quite know whom to cheer for!

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Olivia12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#904

Originally posted by: NitaReid
Finally caught up with all the lovely comments except my dear friends Vini, Olivia and Sree,if i missed anyone else please let me know ... And i am very much aware of that .. Will try to reply to them asap . Right now i think i have to start the next chapter or else i will cross the self imposed deadline and i dont want that ..

Love

Nita

Oh! don't fall short of your deadline on my account, reply only when you can 😊

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#905

Originally posted by: Sree8410

Take your time dear.

Nita, don't we have to find a name for Jr. Adarsh? Would love to name him Varun but since you already chose to name Sanskar's father Varun we need to come up with something new.

Also update your character's list on page 1. Sanskar's parents name is not included.

How about you Name him Sree? You choose the name . Will update the character sketch asap.

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#906

Originally posted by: Olivia12

Oh! don't fall short of your deadline on my account, reply only when you can 😊

I never meant it like that olivia dear, i said i have to make a start or else i will fall behind the deadline. 😆. And i will reply to your comments asap 😊

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#907

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Nita my dear...BTW I wanted to add: I LOVE your siggy! 🤗🤗...Thanks 😆. It was more inspired due to the fact it has been Ten years since Fedal rivalry started . It been ten years . And that means i have been watching tennis for more than 13 years 😉

Fedal rivalry is the best indeed: I can never forget the 2007 & 2008 wimbledon finals, or the 2009 AO final. What spectacular matches those were.All those finals except RG. I supported Roger .Now i will support Rafa. Oh how i wish they both meet in an GS final this year the outcome doesnt matter as long as one of them win😊

BTW I liked the 2014 and 2015 Wimbledon finals too 😉 as well as the 2010 and 2011 US Open semis. 😆 What to do, I like watching Novak--Fed matches too, especially when Novak wins. 😉...I dont ,especially when Novak wins😡. Well to be honest,i had no problem with Novak till he started beating Rafa in GS finals in 2011 ... 😉.But i would love to match Federer-Novak match and hope against hope federer wins 😆

But the 2012 AO final and the 2013 French Open semis, I really couldn't enjoy much. No joy in seeing one of my favorites beating another. 😕 I always have my heart in my mouth for Djokodal matches, never quite know whom to cheer for!---------I know whom to cheer on , too bad he wont win in the current scenario 😭. Why is Novak too perfect, Currently rooting for Kei in the finals of Miami open .Thankfully Kyrgios is out or else i would have supported Novak in the finals 😉. Nick is one of the few players who can make me choose the opponent even if it is Novak😆

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#908

Originally posted by: Vini224
Nita🤗
Lovely update.Sanskar having a fan in the form of junior Adarsh and Adarsh senior not jealous of their bond as long as he is able to sleep a little longer was really cute.The bonding and friendship Sanskar has with Adarsh,Pari and the baby is lovely...I hope you know how sorry i am for the late reply . Thanks for the Lovely comment Vini dear. Yeah i like the family too . They seem like a perfect fit especially with Junior Adarsh .

Sharmistha and Sujatha's nature here are completely reversed from the serial.Sharmistha seems to quickly jump to wrong conclusions and is not as stong whereas Sujatha here is more calm,relaxed and cool accepting her Dils as they are and allowing them freedom .Sharmistha is more prone to worry about every little things.. Sujatha gained more perspective as she suffered from her Mother in law and now she wants to be a cool mom in law. Plus RP taking her away from the MM mansion helped her gain freedom which she wants her bahu to be able to enjoy as well.

Finally Ragini confessed feeling jealous of Swara her whole life.Happy that she also revealed her mothers role in fixing the competitions.Hate Annapurna.. What a pathetic mother.Knowing Swara's nature, it was a given that she would forgive Ragini and will try to make her feel better.Yep Swara nature is given, hope it doesnt turn annoying to readers like the show 😆.

Hmm.. What's happening to Swara madam?. Feeling jealous of the girl in the photo ,not liking that Sanskar is secretive on the phone and blushing and turning red at Sanskar's adoring look and feeling happy that he is constantly staring at her .Loving all these feelings that Swara is showing.Swara has sub consciously accepted this marriage, hence acting like a wife ..Too bad she doesnt seem to realize it 😉.

I thought that Sanskar wanted to safeguard himself from heartbreak but here he is already behaving like a loving and caring husband buying her a dress for the party ,missing her presence in the room when she was with Ragini and constantly admiring.Swasan are just..😳..Hearts are meant to come in to play even when they want to safe guard it 😉

Missed seeing Cupid in actionwant more of the Cupid business...Dont you feel bad for Ragini, her husband is too busy in Cupid action already and you want more😆

Absolutely adore the SwaSan moments here but I'm greedy for more of such scenes.
Please update soon Nita, with more SwaSan moments.Thanks. Will try to add more SwaSan moments for you 😊. Trying to update in this weekend . Started it yesterday ,still a long way to go 😊.

Love
A Greedy fan😆

Love

A Happy writer 😆

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#909

Originally posted by: Olivia12
Hello Nita dear,
A short, sweet and very well written update😊.. Hi Olivia dear😊. Sorry for the late reply and Thanks for the lovely comment.

It started with Swara and Sanskaar sharing one bed😉 Finally Sanskaar manages to get up from bed without disturbing Swara😳 He bumped into a sleep deprived Adarsh, only to land up the role of a babysitter😆 and him being the caring and thoughtful person that he is, decided to stay in the hall to let Swara sleep comfortably😳...Yep Sanskar the babysitter . Well i am letting him learn early for future advantages😆

As now we have seen them sharing bed, without getting into much trouble, can we have them doing this from now onward??😳😆...Let see ...😉

Then it was Swara showing concern and getting worried over hubby dear, Swara how come you woke up so early, already missing Sanskaar's presence😉..Yep ..Missing husband. But Swara the night owl slept early last night remember to avoid any conversation 😆

I liked the next part, where both were behaving like a normal married couple with Swara's interrogation, them sharing coffee and planning rest of their day😊 ..Happy to know you liked it, i also love that lovely bond they had in the show. Now we barely get a glimpse of them in the show

Sharmishta scolding Swara over leaving her husband and in-laws emphasizes the fact that how little she knows her own daughter😕 she was in for a surprise when Pari pointed out that Sanskaar was there as well. And it dawn on Swara that Sanskaar seems to understand her better than her mom. ..Sharmistha worry a lot about everything. Hence speak up before actually hearing the other side. Swara need to know how perfect her husband is 😉

I think Sanskaar's secret phone conversation was with Uttara, Swara's putting faith on her husband was sensible since by now she knows perfectly well that Sanskaar is a thorough gentleman...Swara is sensible ..She wont mistrust easily unless proven wrong . She is innocent that way but mistrust is not her forte...Keep guessing

Nice to see Ragini sorting out things with Swara finally. I guess this competition is for Sanskaar's benefit, so that he could get to see the various qualities his lovely wife possess😉...The competition is for Ragini benefit, but i dont see why cant Sanskar benefit from it too😉

Sanskaar's getting dress for Swara and the way he gave it to her was so romantic and to top it up they are now talking through their eyes Cool saasuma got their picture clicked😆 and as for now cupid has to trust his assistants😆...Yep Cupid is on leave due to his wife being jealous😆. Let hope the assistants doesnt mess it up . Happy to know you liked the SwaSan scene. Cool Saasuma rocks😎

In the end we have them en route to the party, with Sanskaar unable to take his eyes off from wifey dear and wifey dear enjoying all the attention she is getting ...
Loved the story so far, do update soon. Thanks for the PM dear😊...Thanks Olivia dear. Will try to update by the weekend .

Lots of love,
Olivia

Love

Nita