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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi nita
sorry dear for being late at your thread.
Well awesome update.
๐Ÿค— to you fr this cute addition of the bond of child and sansku first.
Sanky sleeps wd swara wrapping her hand in his chest.
Swasan thinking about each other ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Annapurna ๐Ÿ˜ก
She herself responsible for Ragini.
sanskar brings dress fr swara ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Swara is blushing wd sansku gaze at her.
Sansku is ghooring Swara while car driving.
awsm update.
Love it.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sumeetadeb

swasan understanding swaragini's wholeheartedly bak bak both are nice
l like both


Thanks . Happy to know you liked both ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ANSHEL

well so ...the seeds of adoration for his beautiful wyf seems to nurturing itself deep inside some corner of sanskars heart and he may nt be ware dat dey re soon gonna grow up into a beautiful plant of love Exactly . It will seen turn in an beautiful plant of love. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

and the early feel of parenthood the tiresome chore of trying to make the baby sleep and all and its effect or shall we say the lovable adorable torturing aftereffects is described beautifully .clearly sanskar adores junior adarsh.. Yep Parenting is hard indeed ,especially a new born baby . But as you said that it still adorable toturing after effects which everyone the parents will think back as precious memory ๐Ÿ˜Š.And i am pretty sure Junior Adarsh adores him as well . It kind of mutual connection ๐Ÿ˜‰



the obvious worry of a parent whose child they know is sort of forced into an unwanted relationship is depicted beutifully.how parent tend to find faults in their own wards rather than nayone else concerned...sumi worry is quite normal and d way pari stopped the argumet from ecslating further dat is commendable on her part...Yep Parents love to worry about everything ๐Ÿ˜† . Sometime we can understand, Sometime we think they are over thinking it but we can never stop them from worrying or finding faults .


.well the care and concern shown by swara is nting new considering her to an extent defaulive nature bt ragini confession of jealousy need to be lauded since its nt easy to outgrow jealousy borne into each fibres of urs being 4 years and explaining it even wen swara was ready to forgive at the first go.she must now be at relief..Yep Ragini attempt to resolve it is indeed an big step in the right direction . ๐Ÿ˜Š


.nd the showstopper of d day sanskar thought bringing his words into acton and givin her a western attire nd her relief nd surprise at receiving it...den the way she felt complimented at the mere sight of his appreciative and admiring glance at her ๐Ÿ˜Šher blush โ˜บ๏ธ nd her lvin his stolen glance at her ...I love the Showstopper scene too ๐Ÿ˜† . I am happy you liked that scene .


well n i m felin sory 4 our over enthusiastic cupid lakh fopr nt being able to see his plan being in action bt better dan his plan nt bein in action perhaps๐Ÿ˜‰ ... Yeah poor Cupid ๐Ÿ˜ญ




My replies are in blue and i think this your first comment here and i am really happy about that you decided to share your thoughts .Thanks for taking the effort to motivate me ๐Ÿ˜Š


Love

Nita
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: arsh4heaven

awesome update dear

superb
sanskar n baby's bond was nice
swara getting jealous wow
swaragini talks superbly written
each n every word written beautifully
wow sanskar gifted the dress to swara
loved it
do continue soon
n thanks 4 pm dear



Thanks .I am really Happy to know you liked this update๐Ÿ˜ƒ . Will try to update soon .Yet to start though will try to post by friday or max by the weekend
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Anusha62

Nita amazing update ya.. Thanks dear๐Ÿ˜Š
Sharmishta misunderstanding swara dat she may running away from her sasural nd hubby how come she thnk like dat can't she understand swara for a sec?? ...Sharmistha tends to worry for everything and anything, so it more like her projecting the fear on Swara than MU. ๐Ÿ˜Š


Wow but da best thing here,swara realised *sanskar is far better nd understanding than her own mother*.. Well Sanskar is far better than everyone else ๐Ÿ˜‰


Finally ragini told about her jealousy towards swara,convo bw them was written perfectly wating for da competition.. Thanks .. Competiton will come on the next chapter .Still lot to cover in the remaing parts of chapter 9

Sanskar y dis guy is so perfect man nd caring husband good friend what not,he brought dress for swara so sweet of him.(every girl shuld get hubby like sanskar):-P..I know right Sanskar is best husband .๐Ÿ˜‰

Loved swasan bonding..
Abut phn call it might b uttara..
Over al awsme..
Update nxt part soon..!! ...Keep guessing till i update .and will try to update by tomorrow if not it will be done by the weekend

Love
Nita

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Liana-

beautifully written!! from the start till the end loved it the swasan bond is so good.. & swara getting possessive frm now on ward but glad she didnt express it!! it was really nice tht she kept faith on sanskar & brush off the other thoughts ๐Ÿ˜†Thanks dear . Happy to know you liked SwaSan bond .. Well she doesnt know much to be suspicious ,so choose to trust him , but still her jealousy will make it interesting ๐Ÿ˜‰


sanskar is so caring really like the way he bought gift for her so sweet & swara feeling shy whn she stares ...Yeah Sanskar is so caring.. Well who can resist his stare .๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: leku

Hehehe sorry for late ..I am sorry too for the late reply.

Coming to story...your ideas are awesome... Thanks Lekah dear๐Ÿ˜Š

The way story moving I loved it...its perfect sissy ๐Ÿ‘
Sanskar got good job..Adharsh very,clever play..finally came to give company..wahh how many questions she will shoot out...no other way..husband should answer it all ๐Ÿ˜† New job of the CEO is an baby sitter ๐Ÿ˜†. There is no other way he needs to answer it all ๐Ÿ˜‰

Shomi and swara argument amazing..reality..shomi worries for her daughter condition if she always stays out..what will her sasuma think.. ๐Ÿ˜ญ ...Shomi worries a lot .. It happens in reality too . ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Swara back answer..what to do ..even in laws will not scold us..but parents are first to rise the questions.. ๐Ÿ˜• ..correct time Pari gave an entry...nice scene.. Well Swara was bit hurt by the accusations .When she is trying to accept the new reality . Thanks we got Sensible Pari to the rescue

Back to MM..

Wow finally jealousy sorted out...superb Ragini did great job..the way she trying to figure out actual problem what she had gone through...its good swara understand and planning to drag their sasuma into their completion..poor sanlak..waiting to see that scene sissy..Well it will be up in chapter 10 .Still got party and other things to cover in chapte 9 remaining parts๐Ÿ˜‰

Swara made her understand ...her showed her love to Ragini.. ๐Ÿ‘
oh wait wait...who is calling sanskar..pls kya twist or suspense.. ๐Ÿ˜ญ but swara cut off her suspicious thoughts..i loved it..I think you are the first one to fall for it .Thanks .But you dont need to worry . ๐Ÿ˜Š

Wow sanskar ..ideal husband...brought perfect dress...superb scene sissy..swasan ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Sasuma compliment...hahahha...oh sanskar cant steal its glance ... ๐Ÿ˜ณ swara beautiful lady in her own style.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ ...Happy to know you liked that scene dear

Superb update...
Waiting for laksh trust over employees..we trust them..lets see how party goes,..Thanks . Yep lets see how efficient Laksh plan works out ๐Ÿ˜‰

Love

Lekah

Love

Nita

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

awesome..

Thank god thing are fine between rags and swara..
lets see what the competition leds upto!!...


so the employees will now be playing cupid between swasan!!
Loved it..
waiting for the next part..
continue soon..
thank u for the pm..



Thanks dear. Happy to know you liked this update. Yeah Swara and Ragini will work it out .Dont worry . Competiton will bring nice twists๐Ÿ˜‰. Employees will play cupid in both positive and opposite way ๐Ÿ˜†. Will try to update soon by Friday or weekend max

Love

Nita
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hey Nita ๐Ÿค—

I will apologise for this not being the usual sort of length of my replies but am having a bad day and struggling with various things today but the parts of chapter 9 so far made me happy so had to post my 2 cents worth anyway:)..Hi Shruti dear. We both should stop saying sorry. But still i say one more time for the late reply. And you need not apologise for the length of the comment. I love to know you POV and the length doesnt matter to me . Also Thanks for taking the time to comment even when you had a bad day .

Really nice and romantic is how the thing as a whole felt. The waking up with Sanskaar admiring his beautiful wife set the tone- ๐Ÿ˜ณ. You know what a fan I am of the subtle romance of such scenes ๐Ÿ˜ƒ, and this for them was such a nice way to start their day.Really happy to know you liked that scene..๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Sanksaar is a total natural when it comes to babies huh? Perfect signal that Swara will have so much support when her time comes ๐Ÿ˜‰. I really liked the fact that Swara felt her new and "forced" husband understood her better than her mum! Ohhh Madam is of course sub consciously jealous despite the decision to trust him and not bother him with accusations ๐Ÿ˜†. A name with hearts saved on the phone?! I bet this will be funny- is there a nani or Dadi from the Maheshwari side we don't know about or is it Uttara perhaps? Whoever it is, it will be nothing that Swara fears ๐Ÿ˜†...No one is falling for my suspence creating twist. ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ. Just kidding i know no one will fall for it, it was meant only for Swara dear not the readers ๐Ÿ˜‰. Forced Husband understand better .. Swara is jealous ofcourse ๐Ÿ˜†

I also liked the further dealing with Ragini's feelings and how they both talked it out and despite there being a childish SR edge to how they want to solve it- that is so them, it didn't grate like it does in the show ๐Ÿ˜ƒ. I sense an interesting "competition" coming up ๐Ÿ˜‰. Well Swara just addressed the issue in her childish way with what she heard about it so far. She heard Ragini was jealous becuase she thought Swara was better than her in few "competition".So she want to address it immediately. She didnt know the effects of jealousy can have over someone when they have been jealous for years . She will realize it in the upcoming parts in this chapter . ๐Ÿ˜‰

Then the getting ready for the party! Sanskaar is so thoughtful- the real perfect man He actually went and bought her a western dress but one that won't be too much. What I loved was the underlying need there to see her in something he has chosen- those little things that mean so much and then the best bit was his open admiration which even Swara notices and is all shy but pleased by! I cannot wait for this party- bring it on!!! ..Happy to know you liked the scene dear. Sanskar is perfect man . The party is next up .Hope it lives up to the hype i am creating about it ๐Ÿ˜†

Really nice update Nita.Thanks Shruti dear๐Ÿ˜Š.

Love,
Shru xoxo



Love,

Nita



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