Sorry Nita for commenting so late but here goes. Excellent update , there are many interesting points to pick up in dis chapter , so let me just start on the six ladies involved in this chapter. I love that u highlight each of these ladies strengths and weakness and how dey deal with it especially when it comes to interracting with their families.sujatha knows her weakness and her strengths she uses both wisely, she knew she couldnt handle the responsibilitues that came with living in da limelight as a maheshwari bahu so she allowed herself to step away without greed , envy or jealousy to lead a simple but happy life , acknowledging that her jethani was better equipped to handle the duties of a mahesehwari bahu in society.akanskha upholding the maheshwari family in society and being a pillar to her inlaws and husband and obviously a very good mother to her kids going by the ideals of Sanskaar it indicates his mothers upbringing was good. Ap a woman full of false pride and blinded by society's opinion of the family name sacrificing everything even her child's happiness and upbringing to keep the family reputation untarnished. A selfish woman who hides behind a facade of innocence and humbleness. Shomi here's a character that just tires me out , selfish to a certain extent but her maternal instincts does peek thru showing love for swara but this is even short lived as her emotional blackmail and tears overtake.I love DAT swara can be truthful and vent out when hurt even though she has to pay for it but ending up shelving her feelings.ragini cannot air her grievances therefore she breakout into episodes taking revenge on the innocent. Poor swara knows her families short comings only wanted to pick one relationship that would give her equality , support and unconditional love not emotionally crippling her and physically sapping away her energy but brave swara decides to accept her life and be happy not mope around playing the victim card.Nita every facet of swaras being is very real , flesh and blood human being, frustration , anger, pain , jealousy all vividly portrayed yet u have given swara the choice to channel it into good so that she can be Happy. I love DAT abt ur writing cos da reader can relate to thus character.it's great that swara is not totally a lamb led to the slaughter type u gave her but of spunk .I enjoyed her snapping at Ragini who is all so pompeous and bit sanctimous. The best part for me was swasan interaction they just sizzle together in any situation, the tiny bit off jealousy from swara was well noted when she rejected da saree and sanskaar although taken aback by her explanation could have let her stew in her own imaginations , cleared her misunderstanding without His ego coming in the way.priceless was her acceptance of the gift and she was a bit fiesty not a doormat type of girl. Sanskaar telling Lucky to back off he would not allow lucky to do anything that will make swara unhappy shows he will allow swara the freedom to choose and be her support system, but poor laksh can't seem to stop himself .nice response when sanky saw swara disappointment on His denial of complimenting her , shows that sanskaar us nothing but a perfect match for her. Brilliant turn around on raginis vindictive ness and she got her just desserts. Sanskaar ever so patient and careful of swaras feeling put aside his own just for her happiness thus overcoming His pyn as well.Ragini turned out to be a better cupid than laksh in that part. Another much loved part was swara for the first tym being consoled and having a shoulder to cry on, u wrote that beautifully it was subtle yet very Strong and honest, the best part is that he was just her silent support , no false or half hearted murmurs of consoling just his presence was more than enough.the talk at the end ? I have great faith it's gonna be one conversation NVR to forget. I think I have rambled on enough by now, I hardly used much on ragini but then in my few thoughts u could clearly see my opinion of her.can't wait for next chapter I hope its updated over the weekend so I can comment at the sane tym. Nita well written and very insightful chapter.
Edited by taniks - 9 years ago
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