SwaSan FF: Forced into Marrying your soulmate(Thread 2 Link on page 1) - Page 53

Awesome update

Nita my dear...🤗 🤗

Res for my comment on Chap 5. read it and really loved it dear. Just got back yesterday, shall un res tomorrow for sure.

Loads of Love,

---Viji

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Hi Nita my dear...🤗 🤗

I really loved the way you've developed the story in chapter 5. The way you described Sujata's affection for both her son, as well as her nephew and niece, who are now her adopted children. That whole back story of Ram--Sujata and Varun--Akanksha was very well developed too.

I liked the Sanskaar--Swara interaction when he was gifting her that lovely designer sari. She assumed it was a gift for Kavita which he was now giving her and got angry. 😆 But then when he clarified he had actually got it for Uttara earlier, she calmed down. Sanskaar certainly was bowled over by her appearance in that sari. 😉

Lucky is as always--clueless and a bit juvenile. But then in your fic, I like him since he played cupid for SwaSan and is not after Swara. 😉

Ragini has some serious jealousy issues. It was so sly, the way she hinted to Swara to make kheer, knowing that Sanskaar does not eat it since his Mom passed away. She really can't bear to see Swara getting compliments and warmth from others, seems to want the attention herself. ...😕

Also, her excuse that she was angry at Swara only because she had made Lakshya apologize, was not very convincing. What Lakshya did was wrong, and in fact, Swara entered into this wedding only to save Ragini's marriage with Lakshya. Instead of being grateful to her cousin, Ragini is now trying to spoil her happiness...😕

And Annapurna is such an complicated character. Instead of correcting her daughter, showing her her the right path; she is angry at Ragini because she and Durga Prasad would now have to apologize to Swara's parents. She is bothered more about their prestige and pride than about correct behavior.

I was so happy that Sanskaar had the kheer Swara prepared, and thoroughly enjoyed it. Ragini's plan went up in smoke! 😉

I also really loved the way Swara spoke to Shomi. She was concerned when her Mom started crying and feeling guilty, and she did comfort her then. But she was very clear that she was disappointed in the way her mother had not supported her at all. Swara is perfectly right in that: Shomi might have thought that Sanskaar was a very good guy, and that Swara would be happy in the marriage; but ultimately, she did not give Swara the freedom of choice. She joined the other family members in pressurizing her to save Ragini's marriage.

Of course, in the long run, this is all to SwaSan's benefit, since they are truly soulmates. 😳 Destiny works in mysterious ways after all.

I will comment on Chap 6 in just a bit, Nita dear! 🤗

Loads of Love,

---Viji

Hey Nita
I know I res'd the previous chapters somewhere or the other, but I totally forgot where I did that😆 so I'm commenting here. Sorry!!
Ok so, the chapters are amazing man, the story is going really great. Ragini as usual somewhere insecure and jealous of Swara, Huh! SwaSan are going great<3 I'm loving them here. Lucky is a gadha and will be one. But dude he was the cupid here so no blames!😆 Amazing updates till here and do post soon!
Sakshi

Awesome update 👏
Ragini 😡
anyway her plan backfired and Sanskaar ate that kheer ❤️
loving Sanskaar here ❤️
Swara is lucky to have a understanding hubby like Sanskaar ❤️
Hmm sorry for short comment... running out of time
Thanks for PM 😳

Originally posted by: rayab_rajpoot

nice work

update more soon

thanks for the pm😊

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Awesome update

The gift sequence was really nice.

Waiting for your next update

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Nita my dear...🤗 🤗

Res for my comment on Chap 5. read it and really loved it dear. Just got back yesterday, shall un res tomorrow for sure.

Loads of Love,

---Viji

Originally posted by: MusicAddict

Hey Nita
I know I res'd the previous chapters somewhere or the other, but I totally forgot where I did that😆 so I'm commenting here. Sorry!!
Ok so, the chapters are amazing man, the story is going really great. Ragini as usual somewhere insecure and jealous of Swara, Huh! SwaSan are going great<3 I'm loving them here. Lucky is a gadha and will be one. But dude he was the cupid here so no blames!😆 Amazing updates till here and do post soon!
Sakshi

Originally posted by: Vishi-

Awesome update 👏
Ragini 😡
anyway her plan backfired and Sanskaar ate that kheer ❤️
loving Sanskaar here ❤️
Swara is lucky to have a understanding hubby like Sanskaar ❤️
Hmm sorry for short comment... running out of time
Thanks for PM 😳

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

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