SwaSan FF: Forced into Marrying your soulmate(Thread 2 Link on page 1) - Page 36

I love you so soo much too Sree 🤗

Vini thanks for the quick Res. Hope you are not disappointed with the chapter😊

Thank you simi for the super fast and lovely comment 🤗. Happy to know you loved SwaSan conversation and well Swara is indeed funny😆 .. Well i explain about Ragini in the next chapter i still have to cover swara backstory so maybe next to the next chapter😉

Love,

Nita🤗

Thanks😊. Happy to know you loved Swasan conversation and SanLak bond. I will try to continue soon 😃

Omw wat a chapter this was , u have done so many things right in this chapter that irks me in da serial . u removed swaras rose tinted glasses on her view off so many ppl in this story and yet u kept the interest level still very high. Loved that u touched on that most irritating habit of ppl at Indian weddings , making a girl feel inferior cos she is not married.nice explanation for park and adarshs ignorance of swasans marriage. Swara seeing shekhar for what he truly is is most appreciated by me , I loved that she has no expectations from him and she has accept him what he really is. Shomi character is also well known to swara there's no illusions on her part , really well done that u show this flaw shomi has when it comes to the love for her daughter vs her loyality to the man in her life, in the serial its her husband , here u changed it to her brother but u still got to the crux of her character. Liked that u gave laksh I bit of decency when he thought of sanskaar and postpone da wedding but then u still showed off his selfishness in the very next scenario , NYC display of his contrary nature. Ragini is creator of emotional blackmail and with her greatest weapon of tears , does swara even stand a chance of rejecting the propsal.DP runs true to his character always willing to sacrifice swara in the name of family prestige, love that in this story swara is not a blind bat where she acts like an ostrich just keep her head buried , she is a very smart cookie here when it comes to her families reality.great that u lifted the blame from swaras eyes which she heaped onto poor sanskasar, dey needed that to move forward in their relationship without any mu's creating problems for them. U moulded and very vividly highlighted swaras beautiful nature here but once again I must compliment u in showing another facet of sanskaar , him being a gentle man accepting the proposal on hearing off swaras acceptance without even meeting her, he NVR wanted to feel the pyn of rejection , wonderfully written that part. Brilliant, little humor to break the tension and heal any ill feelings between swasan and now a proper allocation of blame by swara onto the real culprit was a good end to any mu's between as dey take another step towards closing the gap between them.very interesting , this story has captured me.loving how u bringing them closer and knitting a strong bond between them. Thanks for da pm and thus lovely story

I just read it dear. So happy to know you liked it. dont worry i start writing next chapter tomorrow just for you but currently sleepy. So will reply to your awesome comment once i wake up 😊

How much have u written?? How much how much...u have had all day 😆😆

Laksh is as he was...no change 😆😆 so does that mean everyones wish will b fulfilled??

Sujjata has already caled her ladoo once hasnt she in the show??

Ah i am looking forward to laksh bashing session 😆

Aw loved the bonding between sanskar and baby and jealous adarsh was cute...but sanskaar is sanskaar in anything he has a natural gift...and alreasy shiwing he will b perfect father he has already part farthered the idiot...

Swara imagination 😆😆 soon as her imagination started running riot i knew no slapping, punching, hitting, biting, hair pulling, eye gauging was going to happen...even in this she is worried about being blamed for thingss...maks one wonder how often she has been made a scapegoat by her uselss family? That she is worried she will b made to b at fault when clearly not her doing...

Pari, adarsh, fate, us we all know swasan r destined to b...

Sanskaar angry on swara behalf at being duped..its nice to c the little friendship starting between swasn...ill have to settle for sanskaar getting over his anger at his own duping...

so ragani green eyed monster isnt spared...she didnt like to c swara sanskaar happy...y shud she care she got wat she wanted laksh...it was her who refused to give HAQ to him...and may do so again tonight 🤣🤣...her madness starts b4 lucky was asked to apologise to swara..there is just something wrong in her make up...and laksh will b as clueless as b4...

I cant wait to c protective angry sanskaar when swara is at risk...and determine wat sujju is like with swarz compared to ragani...

Swara doesnt hold being forced to marry against her family...ur right saint swara...

Ah u r trying to divert my attention so i stop asking laksh to b hit and instead ask for ragani to b tortured 🤣🤣 its not going to work i will just ask for multiple people to get hit...and list is long enough already...