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Posted: 9 years ago
Res chapter 4
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Dear Nita,

So baby Adarsh junior (for lack of name in the instant case😆) bonds so well with Sanskaar that he does not want to go back to papa 😆😆 Well Sanskaar is irresistible - even new-borns now know it.

Swara has an over active imagination - so she was afraid that the confrontation between Lakshya and Sanskaar would end in blows and punches😉. But then she is actually afraid of Ragini's reaction and that AP would somehow find Swara to be responsible for the whole fiasco - some flashbacks would reveal why, I guess.😲

Thankfully Sanskaar was not as belligerent as Swara imagined. Cute how they bond over every interaction, especially Sanskaar saying that he would ensure Swara gets a chance to punch Lakshya.😉

Sanskaar has always been a big brother and a sort of father figure, too, but now he also has to behave like Swara's husband. As usual his stance was impeccable - he accepts Lakshya's lame, in-the-name-only apology for himself but firmly insists that he apologise properly to Swara 👏👏

Ragini has mixed emotions - is not as happy as one imagines she should be, after all, she is married to the one she loves. Further, during the journey to the hospital, she is apprehensive as to what Swara's reactions, regarding the way Lakshya lied to get them married, would be, and then she is actually jealous that Swara and Sanskaar are already sharing a warm bond - ice gathering in her soul😡😡 What does she want???

Do update soon.

Love,
Nyna
Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 3:
Such an impactful chapter , their understanding and caring for each other had increases in leaps and bounds here.I liked the fact swara felt that she had the right to feel betrayed by him during his telecon with laksh that was such a wifely reaction which he interpreted so well and gave
An explanation that soothed her.their comfort level with each other has beautifully depicted by Sanskaar confiding in her His deepest feelings and the major guilt that he carried even though hewas puzzled and surprised that he was able to open up to her after just knowing her for a few hours.amazing part was her ablity to see his vulnerability, pain , insecurity of losing his parents and the impact it had on the shaping and moulding of the relationships with his cousin , aunt and sister , her recognition of His strength and His capability as the head off the family.
Her sister reaction to their union was unpredicable and sanskaar was a bit stunned that she was once play a role of cupid in their lives.I loved pari teasing them and both their reaction . The bonding between sanskaar and the baby is also so cutely increasing and this little tyke along with its aunt are working their way into sanskaars well guarded heart at a rapid speed. Again u highlighted so many different aspects of sanskaar and the depth of his character which makes him so uniquely special. I love swasan but sanskaar is an amazing character which I adore the most , he is just a total package. An awesome chapter and a fabulous narration , thank you for the pm.
Edited by taniks - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing swasan convo was cool.loved sanlak bond hahah ragini she wont change.swara's imaginatn punchng laksh was funny.nd plz if u don't mind concentrate more on swasan frm nxt update!!! 🥳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Nita dear. ..🤗 🤗
Owing my travel, am not able to give a detailed comment my dear. But I really liked this chapter. Swara's imagination of Sanskaar throwing punches at Lakshya was hilarious. 😊 Liked the SanLak conversation, and the way Lakshya apologized to both Sanskaar (though it was, as you put it, a lame apology 😉), and his more sincere and heartfelt apology to Swara, which he made after Sanskaar clearly told him how he had erred. Lakshya's intentions were not bad, though the method he chose was rather deceitful. But I think all of us would forgive him since he brought together SwaSan. 😆

Wonder why Ragini is feeling jealous? Does she not want her cousin to be happy? 😕

Looking forward to the next chapter

Lots of Love

Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago
@Sree - Sorry i will reply to your comment soon. Just woke up.
@Viji and Sara- Thank you for your lovely comments. Made my day when i woke up. Willl reply to them asap.

@Sabarshni - So sorry dear. I still have to reply to your comment on Chapter 2 and just read your lovely comment for chapter 3. Will try to reply to them both soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Anusha62

amazing swasan convo was cool.loved sanlak bond hahah ragini she wont change.swara's imaginatn punchng laksh was funny.nd plz if u don't mind concentrate more on swasan frm nxt update!!! 🥳


Thanks dear. Happy to know you liked it. Well i try to keep more concentration on SwaSan from next chapter, dont know how much it is possible still i have swara background to cover too in the next chapter . And everyone was interested on swasan vs lakshya confrontation. So i had to spend more time on it in this chapter. Hope you can wait because this is Swasan journey even if i spent some time on the other i will circle back to them soon. 😃




Edited by NitaReid - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Super awesome update dr...
The way sanskar and swara getting to close each other was nice...
I felt their scene and convo was cute...
Loved it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 4 : well written and this story gets better with each update. Swaras imaginations is just too good but what's interesting is her elevation of sanskar to her hero, nicely done Nita. This chapter fabulously displays their stance for each other and the strength of their beautifully blossoming relationship . swaras thirst for justice is very quickly overshadowed by her concern for the damage a confrontation will do to her husbands relationship with His brother and its effects it will have on her families opinion on sanskaar , she is protective of him.Again here u have given swara such wisedom in knowing her close ones and she reads Ap really well only concern is that somehow She is blind to Ragini. Ragini is confusing to me but then I suppose that should be expected since she us a confused soul , I found her awful reaction which she masks so quickly looking at her sister who is happy and comfortable with a man she married just so ragini could get her love, a bit of selfishness mixed with a lot of jealousy. Sankaars drawing the lines and cementing his support and protection of swara to Laksh was endearing which won a piece of swara since its the first tym she received unconditionally support from anybody but it also didn't go down well ragini .I like that Laksh recognised his brothers relationship with swara has reached such importance that he won't allow any injustice by anybody on her. Laksh love and respect for Sanskaar outweighs his ego and selfishness in that scene ,I just hope thus is not destroyed by Ragini who is not happy with the turn swasan relationship is taking. Here again u showing the depleting off the gap between them by creating such a comfort zone around each other that they can tease and joke and laugh which really adds to their ever increasing bond. Really loving the husband in sanskaar , superb chapter.
Edited by taniks - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: NitaReid


Vini thanks for the quick Res. Hope you are not disappointed with the chapter😊

Nita, I love your story a lot.
I was stalking the forum just to see if you had updated the story.
So, me being disappointed is never going to happen.
But I do have one problem... Your update is too short .
I want a loonngg chapter😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nita 🤗
What a mindblowing update
Loved it
Swasan bonding was superb really
But i like lakshya for him his brother is more important
But i don't what is ragini problem seriously
But now swasan friendship is growing so whatever will happen it will be good. 😳
Swasan punching lakshya 🤣
Update soon

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