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Posted: 9 years ago
Res. Will unres once I am back in the city
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: foresight

Res. Will unres once I am back in the city


Take your time Sapna. 🤗 .
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
@sujoy and Kamilla - Will reply back to your lovely comments soon 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hey Nita...🤗 🤗

Really enjoyed chapter 2. You revealed how Swara and Sanskaar got married to each other. 😊 Swara wasn't a relative of Kavita at all ( thankfully 😊), but cousin of Ragini, Lakshya's fiance.

You gave a very logical flow to this. Lakshya and Sanskaar were supposed to get married at the same mandap, and Lakshya, being very close to Sanskaar, did not want to get married right then when Sanskaar's fiance had so cruelly deserted him.

So this plan came up, that Ragini's cousin (Swara) should marry his cousin. 😉 Smart thought by Lakshya, and music to the ears of all SwaSan fans. Of course, Ragini, Annapurna and Shekar were only too interested in the alliance, and though Sharmishta and Durga Prasad gave the discretion to Swara, they also were in favor since they had heard very good reports about Sanskaar.

I liked how you have given a different spin to the family tree here. Durga Prasad and Annapurna are Ragini's parents. 😊 Shekar and Sharmishta are parents of just Swara, no half sister complications, thank God.

Lakshya was so cunning in a sense, he convinced Sanskaar for the marriage saying Swara had agreed, and then when he told Swara's family that Sanskaar had agreed, then Ragini, Annapurna and Sharmishta ( as well as Shekar) said that Swara now would have to agree, to ensure Ragini's marriage did not get derailed.

Shekar appears to be quite a bad father here too. 😉 Durga Prasad seems a more fatherly figure to Swara rather than her own father.

So now both Swara and Sanskaar are aware of the truth of their wedding, which is a very good thing. Sanskaar would no longer doubt Swara's intentions, whether she agreed to marry him for his wealth. And Swara would not feel angry at Sanskaar anymore, thinking that he played a role in coercing her into this marriage. She now knows he was equally coerced. 😆

So with all MU out of the way, they can start working on building their relationship based on trust and understanding. ❤️

Looking forward to chapter 3, Nita dear. 🤗


Viji Dearest🤗,


So you are happy she was not kavitha relative.Great 😆. Thank you Viji for saying the flow was logical i was lot worried about it, that it might look so confusing 😊. And you are the first one who understood lakshya on why he refused to marry Ragini after Kavitha eloped. Inspite of being impulsive Lakshya does love Sanskar a lot even if they were cousins. I love SanLak bond.😃


I even have planned a back story about Durga prasad first impression of Sanskar 😉 .You will get to it later though 😆. Yes Ragini , AP and Shekhar has to be selfish and only DP has good opinion about Sanskar , Shomi just believes her brother blindly hence believe Sanskar is a good match for her daughter. You will get to see the side of Shomi in the next Chapter if i could fit it in.


Too much Spin on the Family tree 🤣, i created the character and then had to cast the appropriate person to that role. So the whole Family tree was messed up 😉,Wait i still have to write Maheshwari family 😈.



You know i just love Shekhar so i will make him an statue like all the Male leads of RS 😆and DP will be more Father figure to Swara . 😉



So yes i want the MU to be cleared so we can get some normal Swasan moments that slowly builds there relationship 😃. Will try to update soon dear . Have a safe journey 🤗



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Res... Ahh missed it..

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Nita... 🤗 .. Darling loved it yaar... Awesome...

Soo Lakshaya ji.. Is the reason behind their marriage... I loved this line on dp.. Whole world on his shoulder... 😆

Beautifully portrayed about force marriage...

Love you..

On hurry soo small comment..


Thanks kamilla dear🤗, You comments made me so happy. 😃

Whole world is on his shoulder well that how he looks all the time😉. i always love hearing from you whether it is an small comment or huge comment. It makes me happy inspite of it length😊.


Love You,

Nita
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

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Mindblowing update it was really 👏
Lakshya rocks 😎 swasan shocked 😆
Really that was a awesome plan
Ragini the blackmailing Queen 😃
Only dp cares for swara
Swasan friendship growing on 😳
Nita you nailed it
Update super soon
I am waiting when they confront lakshya 😉


Thanks Sujoy for the lovely comment, it looks Lakshya made lot of new fans😉. SwaSan shocked indeed. Ragini will never change😆. I try to update soon dear. You are the second person looking forward for the confrontation between Swasan and Lakshya 😛


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sree8410

Nita, 🤗I had been refreshing this page since the end of today's episode. 😳 here ends my torture, thanks love. Now let me read.

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Nita 🤗

Firstly thanks once again for clearing the suspense.

You, my love, have given an entirely new family tree. Ragini and Swara are cousins not half sisters there by no sibling rivalry. DP and AP are Ragini's parents and Sharmishta's brother. Adarsh and Pari are Swara's sister and Jiju. Wow!!!

So Swara agreed to marry Sanskar as she was informed that he agreed to marry her and her request to speak with him before marriage was refused. Sanskar on the other hand was mislead by Laksh ji that she agreed to marry him. Poor Swasan. 😉

Ragini was also emotionally blackmailing Swara along with the rest of the family to say "Yes". Shekar well no comments on him. Durga Prasad seems to be the only one who realised that they were forcing Swara for their daughter's happiness.

Since the MU is cleared. I hope now they can start working on their relationship. They could become friends and try to get to know each other, one step at a time.

I can't wait to see when Swasan will finally confront Laksh.

Loved the flow of events. Now I'm eagerly waiting for your update on chapter 3.

Love

Sree.


Hi Sree 🤗,


Since i cleared the Suspence i can update the next chapter on Mar 30 right 😉. Thanks for your lovely comment dear😃.



Well yep new family tree indeed but i just cleared Swara family side , i still got Sanskar family to deal with and i have planned few surprises there as well😈.


Yep Shomi also realizes that they were forcing Shona but she simply doesnt know anything to say expect that she is sorry and it was a good decision as Sanskar is an great guy as a way to comfort Swara. DP realises that he literally pushed Swara on the line and he loves her too just the same as Ragini. So he must be feeling bad about it and hence for the first time in his life. He apologize to someone.


I was worried about the Flow, was worried it might looks shabby , so thank for saying it was okay 😊. Well yep now that the marriage is over let make Swasan friends First and love can wait .😆



What do you want Sanskar do when he sees Lakshya, punch, slap or Hug for marrying him to an most beautiful girl 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Nita,

I should really apologise - am simply bogged down with work and had such a backlog of 'res' (still have a couple more😭) that I wanted to comment without 'res' which unfortunately is only today. But then better late than never.

You had me at the title - how did someone force Swara and Sanskaar to get married and wow, you did resolve that marvellously. So it was Lakshya's gameplan (surprising that he has the brains to carry it out though his intentions were a little selfish, but hey, no complaints, we get SwaSan😉) The MU resolution between Swara and Sanskaar is done neatly, and nothing can kickstart a friendship as having a common ''enemy' does. No comments on Sekhar (From now I am going to ignore his existance😡)

The twist on the relations was nice - no complicated half sisters, relations who hardly seem to get a word in (Adarsh and Pari) and the best of all - no Kavitha angle (smooth end to that one👏).

It is a great one, eagerly awaiting your updates, and yes please do pm me (I would be busy with work - March madness is a known phenomenon in the finance world - but I will read and comment as soon as I can steal time from work 😆)

love
Nyna


Hi Nyna 😊,


Please No need to Apologize i totally understand life can be hectic at times, I have backlog of Res too. I have to unres them i keep saying that to myself😆. Better late than never indeed, i am happy to know you like it so Thanks for taking the time to let me know you liked it inspite of your busy schedule😃



I am happy the title got your interest , i just didnt want people to think it will be typical ML forcing FL for the marriage because Sanskar is not the typical ML like other shows. And Swara is not someone who would just nod her head too it ,she is a fighter and i wanted to make there marriage forced but at the same time didnt want it to make them look weak😉.


Thank you for liking the new family tree, i dont want to write about Swaragini Sisterly bond ..So just made them into cousins😆.. Shekhar let all decide to ignore him😡. And i will keep sending you the PM. You can read it whenever you have time, No pressure on the comments, you can give me your feedback when you are free and i can wait 😃


Love,

Nita
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice work
update more soon
and plz pm me for the next part

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