SwaSan FF: Forced into Marrying your soulmate(Thread 2 Link on page 1)

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Vini224

@Vini224

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Posted: 9 years ago

#251

Nita🤗

Never expected another chapter this quickly.

Thanks for this super quick update.

So you made RP and Sujju, Sanskar's uncle and aunt .😆

Except for Uttara being Sanskar's sister and Laksh his cousin,you have made all other relationships different from the show.Are there any other surprises waiting ?

Laksh doesn't seem as bad as I first thought.He thought Sanskar might be heartbroken and wanted to fix the problem in his usual brilliant way.

Again a super twist but this time Sanskar is the one left in suspense about what Pari was talking about that happened two years back.

Thankfully you did not end the chapter with that otherwise I would have kept hounding you with the question as to when your going to update😆

And how prophetic was Swara regarding her soulmate and that his wedding would stop at the last moment if he was her destiny without knowing she was talking about Sanskar and now she is married to him.Wonder what would be Sanskar's reaction once he comes to know that Pari tried to set him up with Swara.

Love your story Nita.

Can I expect another quick update.Becoming very greedy😆

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#252

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Dear Nita,

This update was great. Seems that no one can escape destiny - Swara's declaration "If he is actually my soulmate then he should wait for me till I am ready. And if destiny is in my favour i will marry him even if it means stopping his marriage the last second just like all the hindi shows. But listen di there is no such things a destiny and soulmate so just stop asking me to go on an date. Ilike being single and if it was my choice I want to remain single till I turn 100." - did turn out to exactly what happened with her - well one truly should not challenge the fates😆

Sanskaar's angst and the way he shared it with Swara - he comes across as one who does not really open up but he felt comfortable sharing it with her and she realised it too. She also does let go a little to end up sleeping on his shoulder.

Awaiting the next update!

love

Nyna

Sanskaar holding the baby - cute scene

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lekahravi

@lekahravi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#253

Wow..superb update...
Sanskar feelings portrayed very well ...
Waiting for next update

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Anusha

@Anusha62

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#254

nita:-)..lovely part swara she is nt in love at wid sanskar bt she is so undrstndng swt gal..nd u portrayed sanskar's feeling whn rp died was very well written felt bad for him..hahahah swara cutie she eagerly wanna knw abt kavita frm sanskar's mouth..hmm pari nd swara's before 2yrs back convo was cool nd sanskar wanna knw wht has happnd:-P..wow so swara slept on sanky shoulder as her heart says aftral he is her hubby nd da way sanskar share his pain wid swara was awsme loved it..now swara v'l became support for sanskar:-):-)can't wait for nxt part!!!!!!

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BarkhaSingh123

@BarkhaSingh123

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#255

thanks for the pm and this very interesting story i just love going through it

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kavita_b_2004

@kavita_b_2004

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#256

wow... Destiny had brought them together... Soul mates wow. Mm

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Sneha Ray

@sneharay

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#257

Awesome update..u r brilliant 👏

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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#258

Superb update nita 👏
Loved it
Sanskar relation with rp and his family was nice
Sanskar feeling was beautifully described
Swara slept on sanskar's shoulder 😳
Pari teasing swasan was awesome 🤣
Destiny wins in swasan case 😉
Nita you are really a brilliant writer
Update soon