SwaSan FF: Forced into Marrying your soulmate(Thread 2 Link on page 1) - Page 14

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Nita! I had no idea you were writing a SS! I will read and comment soon! Please bear with me 🤗

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Nita 🤗

I found the start interesting! Yayyy for SwaSan married and the intriguing question of why the other said yes to each other. Thank God Kro went with another crow and flew away at the start only- good riddance. Loved how Swara was wide awake and Sanskaar's attempts to avoid her came to nothing 😉.

Then we get Chapter 1- wow! Liked the way that convo played out! Sanskaar's immediate reaction to thinking she may have a boyfriend somehow came across as something that instinctively he didn't like the thought of, despite of course being totally oblivious to any conscious mind process in that direction. Also his internal monologue of wondering if she married him as he is rich and successful was not quite convincing him. Such have to be very subtly done and I think you managed that very well! And then the twist- wow! So Sanskaar's friend is married to Swara's sister- 👏. Liked how you connected Adarsh and Pari that way and the whole hospital sequence was actually a great ice breaker in the circumstances. The story of what happened to lead to the marriage will presumably unfold now and I look forward to it:)

Lots of love,

Shru x

Originally posted by: sarra0

I was around i am sure, but doesnt matter this works out better because i got a great prologue to read which otherwise may not have come to the fore for a while...👏👏👏 im clapping for myself here by the way 😆😆

😆😆 i am very good at threatening...c worked first time...if u want to rant now im here u can rant away

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Well let me clap for you too 👏 👏 👏 👏. You deserve it .

i am coming to rant, you better be there😉

Originally posted by: sarra0

If i am not do i get another chapter 2night? 😆

Originally posted by: sarra0

U kept ur promise ill keep mine 😆😆 thanks for pm and fast update 🤗i know u classed this as long but i tell u even double the size wudnt b enough...just so u know...

Another intriguing update adding more questions...nothing revealed as yet...so her famiy doesnt know? Or just her sister doesnt know cause she wud b living elsewhere...but y was sanskaar best friend not attending his wedding as a chief guest??

Sanskaar has heard a lot about swara throu pari and so shud have an idea now that swara isnt focused on his wealth...but has swara heard about sanskaar from them??

I liked how sanskaar drove her there, no hesitation, as it wasnt safe for her to go at that time of night...

Originally posted by: NitaReid

you were here and i was searching for you in the AT. Well you might have but i found you 😛

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Thank you for the lovely comment 🤗. Well yeah i dont want it to look like a long boring essay that never ends. The next one will be huge though as i am thinking of wrapping up the wedding mystery in it. I will answer your questions in the next chapter.

Well Sanskar will always rise to the occasion after all you know my love for his characterization. Well yep wait i will reveal whether Swara heard about him or not too. 😉 . On my mind the story is in almost half way ahead , it just writing them down that is taking my time😆

Originally posted by: sarra0

Ur wriing has a flow, a ease to it that means no matter how long it is it wont feel like a essay...just a treat..

I like the idea of that for the next chapter...looking forward to it..

I know thats y i know i can love him here without fear, cause he is always going to b true to his chaacteisterics...story already half done in ur mind?? Me likey...