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Posted: 9 years ago
Shru darling, this is another hasty comment that I'm dropping. Both 23 n 24 chapters were amazing. I am sort of in awe of RP! I have always been, but you just seem to magnify my love for him. And I don't see any point in talking about Lakshya. He was and will always be just as idiotic. Waiting for Ragini to taste the wrath of our hero. When Sanskar Mahshwari strikes, its the end of the enemy. With the slightest of efforts. Seems like she has forgotten this.
Oh how you kill me with your words, Shruti! A night without each other? That was such a perfectly put sentence, just the right one to convey all sentiments.
And please make SwaSan meet! They NEED to talk.
I hope you have made progress with your flu
Love
Anu
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey shruti
awesome chapter yaar
so many revelations accusations too
I love the cnvo of RP and Sanskar
Ragini being ragini the ultimate one to shed her crocodile tears to keep the mask.
Annapurna finally spoke up loved it totally
Swasan wants to spend time together bt to their uppermost discouragemnt ita nt gonna happen.
do cntinue shruti...
I pmed you the link of my ss if time permits do read.
would love to hear from you.
Love
Soumi
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aamias

when sree told me abt this i was little hesitant but u really r a brilliant i really liked it . awesome update



Hey! Thank you so much for this! You are a new reader right? I don't think we have interacted before? Am so pleased you tried this out (and thank you so much Sree for the recommendation!) and that you really liked it! I hope you will keep reading and do drop me your views if time permits:)

Best wishes
Shruti
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: DivineDarkness

Shru😡I hate you😡😡😭and you know exactly for what🤬😭



Phir se hate?! 😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aap pehle aapni sehat ache se bana le.and aapnne kaha obsseadd sirf aap hi nahin main bhi hoon.nd who sanky ka lucky ko kehna ki jab yeh mera aur swra ka plan tha aur us waqt mein traitor tha iss waqt nahin tho puri kahani sach kaise.mast tha
Phir swara ko sanky ko bachana apne pita se.acha tha aur bahut pyaar bhara.mujhe sabse jyada who pasand aaya jab rp aur sanky ke convo ke waqt swara ne sanky ke taraf kadam bhadhaya.phir rp ka truth superb tha.den rp aur dp ka sanky se maafi mangna bahut hi acha likha gaya tha.ragini ki tarah magarmach k aansu koi nahin baha sakta.shekhar se umeed hi nahin rakhi thi tho mujhe bura nahin laga.aur who last scene jab who ek dusre ko dekhkar juda hote hai .lajawab tha .aapse weekendd pe milte hai
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Shru dearest 🤗

I am back with my comments for the last two chapters 23 and 24..😊😊

Poor Swara, my heart went out to her when I read the particular passage, where she was sitting away from everyone else, staring out at the dunes..😭
But I loved it when Sanskaar told Adarsh that the princess would travel with him on his horse..😳
But Swara and Sanskaar missed each other all night and didn't sleep at all..😲 Poor Swasan..😭
Later when they were leaving to Maheshpur, she was touched by his gesture of making her wear that cloak to protect her from sun and wind..He had always been her protector, from everything-- even death.😊

Ragini's dilemma was really fun to read😆 when those messengers arrived at the palace..😃 and thank God that everyone including Shekhar were ready to believe Swasan..😳😳 and they were even willing to arrange a grand welcome to the homecoming Prince.

Lakshya was clearly disturbed when he saw Swara snuggling close to Sanskaar upon Veer😉😃😃 But I loved that scene..ha ha😆 Serves him right, for not believing her.. And I really loved the way Sanskaar secretly assured her not to worry, when he felt her worries..

Annapurna, the loving mother..wow I really loved your description of her transformation from a reigning Queen to an affectionate mother. And so she welcomed Sanskaar by applying tilak and Sanskaar, our righteous hero, took the chance and silently communicated with her to welcome Swara in a similar way..
And she could see the transformation in Swara from a childish girl to a regal lady-like princess..You always point out such minute details in a really warm way, Shru..And I love you for that🤗

And here comes my Pawan❤️ While Annapurna welcomed him, I felt realy joy, but you are already creating a sautan for us Pawan-deewanis in the form of an all grown up and beautiful Uttara..huh😃😃 But I know, this angle is going to be interesting..😆😉 and I am eagerly lookin forward to it..Please make their love story extra special, ok..😳😳

And here comes my most expected moment of the day..Sanskaar---Ragini confrontation..
What a show she tried to put up..😲😲 with her fake tears and shrill voice..🤢 and Shekhar and Lakshya fell into her trap so easily..😆 Two spineless men..🥱

And Swara, too sided Sanskaar against her wicked conniving sister..

But what followed was completely unexpected, OMG..Ramprasad was that person , who had witnessed that scene..Great master stroke by you Shru👏 I really really loved that scene..

And I really loved that "one tight slap" which Janaki delivered on her beloved daughter's masked face.👏👏waah wahh waah taaliyaaan moment of the day..😃😃

Ok so we have to wait for the next update to know the verdict of this Sanskaar Vs Ragini case..

Take care of your health Shru..🤗

lots of love

Naina😳😳


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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice updates
thanks for the pms buddy
keep writing more
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: chandanagimsy

loced the update di...take care of your health...will be waiting eagerly for next part...wow communication between swasan is amazing and janaki slaps her own daughter...wow hatsoff to janaki...


Thank you Chandana- so glad you liked the wordless connect between our golden couple and Janaki's slap to Princess Snake 😃

Lots of love xoxo
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Awesome update

Ram statements were surprising. I am glad that someone is there to shut ragini mouth. Truth comes out, sooner or later and the fear of truth will ruin ragini life.
can't wait to read more


Thank you Javeria 😃 I am so happy you liked it. Ram was my surprise for a lot of people and yes the truth will out some day (or by the end of the story!) Ragini- let's see what happens to her ultimately 😉

Love
Shruti x
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dilwali

Hi Shruti
very nice update and finally truth of Ragini is out and I expected Laksh will behave like this that he'll believe Ragini but could not Swara and about Ram knowing so much n doing for his son came as a big shock cum surprise n I m happy Sanskar told abt Ragini.
I am looking forward to next updates n thanks for giving us updates so soon n thanks for p.m
lots of love n take care of urself


Hey Kawal! Thanks so much - so pleased you liked it! Yes Ragini exposed but how much it will immediately affect her remains to be seen. As you say, Lakshya reacted like most would expect. I wanted Ram to be a surprise 😃 Thanks for looking forward to more:) I'll do some more at the weekend, still struggling health wise

Love,
Shruti x

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