Hey Shru dearest 🤗
I am back with my comments for the last two chapters 23 and 24..😊😊
Poor Swara, my heart went out to her when I read the particular passage, where she was sitting away from everyone else, staring out at the dunes..😭
But I loved it when Sanskaar told Adarsh that the princess would travel with him on his horse..😳
But Swara and Sanskaar missed each other all night and didn't sleep at all..😲 Poor Swasan..😭
Later when they were leaving to Maheshpur, she was touched by his gesture of making her wear that cloak to protect her from sun and wind..He had always been her protector, from everything-- even death.😊
Ragini's dilemma was really fun to read😆 when those messengers arrived at the palace..😃 and thank God that everyone including Shekhar were ready to believe Swasan..😳😳 and they were even willing to arrange a grand welcome to the homecoming Prince.
Lakshya was clearly disturbed when he saw Swara snuggling close to Sanskaar upon Veer😉😃😃 But I loved that scene..ha ha😆 Serves him right, for not believing her.. And I really loved the way Sanskaar secretly assured her not to worry, when he felt her worries..
Annapurna, the loving mother..wow I really loved your description of her transformation from a reigning Queen to an affectionate mother. And so she welcomed Sanskaar by applying tilak and Sanskaar, our righteous hero, took the chance and silently communicated with her to welcome Swara in a similar way..
And she could see the transformation in Swara from a childish girl to a regal lady-like princess..You always point out such minute details in a really warm way, Shru..And I love you for that🤗
And here comes my Pawan❤️ While Annapurna welcomed him, I felt realy joy, but you are already creating a sautan for us Pawan-deewanis in the form of an all grown up and beautiful Uttara..huh😃😃 But I know, this angle is going to be interesting..😆😉 and I am eagerly lookin forward to it..Please make their love story extra special, ok..😳😳
And here comes my most expected moment of the day..Sanskaar---Ragini confrontation..
What a show she tried to put up..😲😲 with her fake tears and shrill voice..🤢 and Shekhar and Lakshya fell into her trap so easily..😆 Two spineless men..🥱
And Swara, too sided Sanskaar against her wicked conniving sister..
But what followed was completely unexpected, OMG..Ramprasad was that person , who had witnessed that scene..Great master stroke by you Shru👏 I really really loved that scene..
And I really loved that "one tight slap" which Janaki delivered on her beloved daughter's masked face.👏👏waah wahh waah taaliyaaan moment of the day..😃😃
Ok so we have to wait for the next update to know the verdict of this Sanskaar Vs Ragini case..
Take care of your health Shru..🤗
lots of love
Naina😳😳