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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11


Awww- it touched me so much that you called me your fave writer! I am truly humbled! 😳😳. I was a fan of your Firestones too- I believe I had commented there? If not, I had meant to! What's your name by the way? Apologies if I have asked you before! I really thought your OS was very well written 😃. Do write more!

Love, Shru x



My name's Anu. And I will write more. Dark Knight is so much of an inspiration to me to try something new. It really takes courage to take the readers into a world so new and so engrossing! I so eagerly wait for ur updates, I cant even tell! 😛
As for Firestones, thankyou. I will try and take the story forward if I can think of a slightly lighter plot. The one I had in mind is too hard to take in.
I love you Shruti ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Hi,

Wow! That was some sweet, happy bubble you created in my imagination. With the obvious bitter back ground awaiting to engulf, possibly extinguish their light, bright happiness, I can't blame Swara for wanting to stay in Sanskar's arms for longer.
And Sanskar, well, he is as I think he would be. After all his long, long, desired dream is finally resting within the circle of his arms. Phew! What utter bliss he might be feeling, it surely is hard to make up his mind to let her go.
Wonderful portrayal, nice flow. I would surely be looking forward to the rest in this series.
Love,
Sakura


Thank you so very much! I will write more, try to live up to the expectations. I loved it that you read and commented Sakura. Myself a huge fan of ur writing. 😊
Waiting for ur next SS (whenever it might be)
Anu
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Awesome os
You beautifully portrayed the thoughts of swara.
After so many hurdles swara got her love, sanskar.
But she is sad for her sister.
The happiness and sadness are the two parts of life.
Really loved your os
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Swasanian


Thank you so very much! I will write more, try to live up to the expectations. I loved it that you read and commented Sakura. Myself a huge fan of ur writing. 😊
Waiting for ur next SS (whenever it might be)
Anu

That's so sweet of you Anu😊 I'm delighted to know you find my writing interesting. Waiting for you to continue this one dear, whenever that might be😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Awesome os dear thanks for showing a selfish swara to bo wid husband instead of her behna.Loved d way sanskar protectively engulfed swara in his arms and d small peck on d lips was cherry on cake
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Such a dreamy little sequence!
Loved the adorable exchange between SwaSan the morning after. 😳

It was nice to see Swara think of the shiz she's been through, decide she had enough and just wanted to be in the little bubble created by herself and her hubby.

I read Firestone again recently... that was such an interesting and exciting series.. hope you find your inspiration for it again. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dear Anu,
I had read your OS yesterday but was unable to comment. (could not steal that much time from work)

It was a lovely one, I have read it again and even on a second reading, it evokes a warm mellow feeling, which is what Swara and Sanskaar should be feeling. Finally, they are together, after so many trial and tribulations, they do deserve some time (actually a lot of time) together😊

I do wish Swara really does give in to her 'selfishness' and spend even more time with Sanskaar. Poor guy! went back to sleep hugging her pillow

Please do keep writing more!

Nyna
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Awesome OS dear!!!😊
So sweet and cute.😳
Loved it.😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Wow dear...
It's awesome and beautiful os...

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