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nida

@mystery75

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

just one word BLISSFUL😃 actually two MESMERIZING

swara and sanskar are some thing

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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Nice update...Please pm me when next part is uploaded...

Edited by raaz19 - 9 years ago

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ZAINAB

@Miss-swasan

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Wow YAAR you write the scene elegantly
Please tell the writer of swaragini to retire and instead make you the new writer

God I wish I could write like you I am eagerly waiting for the next update.

❤️
Zainab

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Awesome dear...awww i loved it...

Waiting for next os...pm me if possible...

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gayu6

@gayu6

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Nice one and here swara wants to b lil selfish to have n save her relation with her lovely hubby. Pls continue soon

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Hello you! What a lovely and serene (despite the background SwaSan have to deal with) OS of the first morning together as Mr and Mrs Sanskaar Maheshwari! I loved the way you crafted Sanskaar's utter delight and contentment at having his precious Swara finally waking up in his arms like he must have yearned for and I also liked that you showed Swara too desirous to want to stay in this enchanted spot in their room, despite ofcourse her responsibilities intruding, which felt natural and not irritating. Very nicely done! Thanks for this!

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Swasanian

@Swasanian

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Hello you! What a lovely and serene (despite the background SwaSan have to deal with) OS of the first morning together as Mr and Mrs Sanskaar Maheshwari! I loved the way you crafted Sanskaar's utter delight and contentment at having his precious Swara finally waking up in his arms like he must have yearned for and I also liked that you showed Swara too desirous to want to stay in this enchanted spot in their room, despite ofcourse her responsibilities intruding, which felt natural and not irritating. Very nicely done! Thanks for this!

A comment from my fav writer means A LOT
Thanks a ton, Shruti! 😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Hi,

Wow! That was some sweet, happy bubble you created in my imagination. With the obvious bitter back ground awaiting to engulf, possibly extinguish their light, bright happiness, I can't blame Swara for wanting to stay in Sanskar's arms for longer.

And Sanskar, well, he is as I think he would be. After all his long, long, desired dream is finally resting within the circle of his arms. Phew! What utter bliss he might be feeling, it surely is hard to make up his mind to let her go.

Wonderful portrayal, nice flow. I would surely be looking forward to the rest in this series.

Love,

Sakura

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Krishnabhisarik

@Krishnabhisarik

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Oh! Such bliss!! SwaSan so content n happy.. Loved the OS! Waiting for the next😊

Love,

Akshata😊

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Swasanian

A comment from my fav writer means A LOT
Thanks a ton, Shruti! 😊

Awww- it touched me so much that you called me your fave writer! I am truly humbled! 😳😳. I was a fan of your Firestones too- I believe I had commented there? If not, I had meant to! What's your name by the way? Apologies if I have asked you before! I really thought your OS was very well written 😃. Do write more!

Love, Shru x

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