Spells of Spring SwaSan (Winter tales OSs) #6 pg 27

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Saku - Un Res page 1
Nyna

Thanks a lot Nyna😊

Quote

Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: soapbubble
Oh, so nice!

I don't have the context of "Ice King" but I took the liberty of reading anyway because with your stories I was missing current treats in my slowness to "catch up"... and it works very well as a stand alone as well!!
A lot of fertility in there... with the rain, wet earth and the promise of a floral paradise...

thanks 😳😊
Bubble

Oh Bubble, what a wonderful surprise😊

Yes, I did have second thoughts when I wrote that line about reading Ice King first, I guess this one works as a stand alone OS too.

Glad you decided to read it and enjoyed yourself there.

Thank you very much.

Love,

Sakura

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Res
UnRes

Dear Sakura,

You indeed are a prolific writer! 🤗🤗🤗

Gentle Spring! in sunshine clad,
Well dost thou thy power display!
For Winter maketh the light heart sad,
And thou, thou makest the sad heart gay,

[Spring (from the French of Charles D'Orleans XV. Century)]

That is the imagery your story evokes - as Sanskaar and Swara finally step from the cold Winterland into Spring - of hopes and dreams. And the drive is indeed reminiscent of the same - recollections of their childhood days with a tantalising glimpse of what the future holds for them.

So Sanskaar who called rain as 'mud & water with infections' now feels liberated by that very rain.

Swara sounded so wistful when she wishes she did not grow up, when it was just Sanskaar and herself - even though they are together now, the dark memories of winter has left its touch. Then later, Sanskaar rolls down the window glass and watches her get drizzled, while saying that some pleasures are not time bound, that was his way of allowing her to relive some of her best moments.

When Sanskaar shows Swara what he plans to make her dream a reality- he says it is his dream and then she remembers that it was actually her dream, she asks him, " tell me honestly, Sanskaar, since when did we love each other?"

I know the answer to that one😉 - "over space, across time and down the ages - eternally"

A beautiful OS - binding memories and dreams, "What takes us back to the past are the memories, what brings us forward are our dreams" (- Jeremy Irons)

Love,
Nyna

PS: Your story also reminds me of Vivaldi's Spring (from the Four Seasons)

Dear Nyna,

Thank you so much😊

That my dear is one of my favorite poems, thank you for choosing that to represent the story.

Yes, after the eons of Ice, Snow and Frost this seems like heaven right? They have changed, but as Swara acknowledges herself, they are not without scares. It might have been wonderful if they had stayed the innocent children they were, once upon a spring, but Sanskar does have a way of letting her relive those moments she treasure!

Oh, that question, when I wrote it, did remind me of a certain wonderful piece of writing I read recently. Those days my computer was dead and I couldn't comment to my heart's contend on that thread...I am hoping to do so soon.

I guess yeah, they have been in love for eons, so we do know the answer there and in reality there is no dream of Swara's that Sanskar hadn't dreamed himself.

It is really nice to know you loved the opening. I hope to keep the interest up, all through the next five shots.

Love,

Sakura

Quote

TRPS

@TRPS

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

whoa!
I had decided not to read any new story till my exams ended, only reading previous ones which aren't ended yet.
but Saku! you again lured me in!
I so wanted to read Swasan being content and happy in their spring! finally spring has arrived with pleasant memories and making more pleasant ones! :)
A beautifully woven dream of past combining with present making it real for a blissful future!
I just love how they remember each and everything said by other!
and that question! despite knowing the answer I guess they keep asking this to each other again and again, well, so enchanting and soothing the answer is, of course want to listen it again and again!
really beautiful , joyous , content and spellbinding this spring is Saku!
eagerly waiting for the next parts! :)

Quote

Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: TRPS
whoa!
I had decided not to read any new story till my exams ended, only reading previous ones which aren't ended yet.
but Saku! you again lured me in!
I so wanted to read Swasan being content and happy in their spring! finally spring has arrived with pleasant memories and making more pleasant ones! :)
A beautifully woven dream of past combining with present making it real for a blissful future!
I just love how they remember each and everything said by other!
and that question! despite knowing the answer I guess they keep asking this to each other again and again, well, so enchanting and soothing the answer is, of course want to listen it again and again!
really beautiful , joyous , content and spellbinding this spring is Saku!
eagerly waiting for the next parts! :)

Toshika dearest,

I feel like an enchantress now, when you talk about how you were lured in. Then again this is the spell of spring my dear, you were caught in it, not my fault😛. I wish you luck with the exams BTW😊

I know you would love to read SwaSan in their spring finally, glad you found this one interesting. Yes, they do remember each and everything about each other, and are in love with each other from ages I guess😳

I will post another part soon.

Thank you so much dear.

Love,

Sakura

Quote

sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Wow it was amazing 👏
Loved swasan chemistry

Quote

Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: sujoyricky
Wow it was amazing 👏
Loved swasan chemistry

Thank you Sujoy. Nice to know you like it😊

Quote

krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Saku baby...👏

Terrific...loved it completely...how easily u make us smile, awe, blush at a same time...👏

Im not good at detail analysis .😡😭..but just want to say thank u ...for making us smile..laugh ..cry..blush etc...

Thank u for giving us ice king...snow queen...icarus..calypso...etcc

Love u muahhh🤗

Talia❤️

Edited by krishuuuuuuuuuu - 9 years ago

Quote

Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Saku baby...👏
Terrific...loved it completely...how easily u make us smile, awe, blush at a same time...👏

Im not good at detail analysis .😡😭..but just want to say thank u ...for making us smile..laugh ..cry..blush etc...
Thank u for giving us ice king...snow queen...icarus..calypso...etcc

Love u muahhh🤗
Talia❤️

Hey Talia,

Thanks a lot dear. No matter how short or detailed it is, a reply matters a lot to me. I'm glad I could make you smile with this one. I do hope to keep that smile throughout the series.

love,

Sakura