Spells of Spring SwaSan (Winter tales OSs) #6 pg 27

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hey Saku 🤗 🤗

Lovely shot--a short shot 😉 but a very well written one.

Your portrayal of Swara was very poignant--her deep love and concern for Sanskaar making her undergo repeated nightmares at the memory of that awful time she spent as hostage of Vasundara and Ragini, who compelled her to watch the trap they had set for Sanskaar.

Though Sanskaar evaded this in his masterful style, and he and Swara are safe together now, she is unable to let go of the nightmares of that cold fear, the dread that Sanskaar might not survive. As she says--it felt as if she was dying at the time.

I loved how Sanskaar feels so much remorse and pain at seeing her like this---the person who dragged him out of his own nightmares of the past, was now suffering intense ones of her own.

How wonderfully thoughtful of him to alleviate her fears, provide her warmth and comfort by going through their childhood photos...a happy time filled with togetherness and merriment, which would soothe Swara's mind, enable her to overlay those frightening memories with older, beautiful ones.

And yes, he certainly had certain other very tantalizing ideas too, as to what is to be done at 2 am when Swara couldn't sleep. 😳 After they see the photos, perhaps! 😉

And I loved that little exchange between them: Sanskaar filled with guilt about making Swara feel like this, saying that he doean't deserve her love when he always causes her pain...and Swara retorting that he is who she loves! That's it for her; she just wants him to promise he would never leave her...Lovely touch there.

Loads of Love,

---Viji

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

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I hope you're pleased my dear duchess of dawn, your smirk suggests so😳

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SIMI

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Sakura..🤗

#Reality is really blissful unlike the awful nightmare.😊

Swara has gone through a lot in this winter journey and the worst was that she was in a state to loose the most precious person of her life again.

But that was a nightmare, not reality. Sanskar's love,care and concern will heal her completely. That cute conversations about the love confession between swasan was so touchy..😳

Waiting for that magical part..😊

Love,

Simi

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Such an Sweet OS. I loved it. ❤️. Thanks saku for making my day a little more happier with this OS.It was such a beautiful scene. Her waking up in fear of losing him, His heartfelt sorry for making her go through such nightmare. Her asking him not leave her ever again and lastly them back to the there normal banter. It was really good .😃 .

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Krishnabhisarik

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Short and sweet!! SwaSan have been through such a long winter, they are having a tough time believing in the spring.. But together they can create a pleasant weather in any harsh season right?? Cute one!!😃