SwaSan Valentine Week OS-- 'Toska' - Page 11

Originally posted by: simsen23

viji ❤️
i love You... 😊
thank you so much for considering my request..
I just love this Toska
well sounds confusing considering its meaning,
but the way you have potrayed all the characters is just superb.
First time i liked Sharmistha's character a lot(my mom's name is also sharmistha)
Wow that lady has so much understanding about life (she had faced a lot of hurdles in her life)
Those words regarding meaning of love are excellent.
Swara's pain and insecurities were so genuin.
oh my poor boy sanskar became weak physically and mentaly after separating from swara 😕
They love eachother so much..
and that kiss(i became emotional for the first time after reading about a kiss)
It was like all their pain or as you said Toska went away with that blissfull kiss... 😊
lovely.
I think you made me more demanding...next time i will request for mose os on swasan
love,
simi 😊

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Oh dear Toshi...really? So sorry. But which stories yaar? I replied your lovely comment on my drabble Sepia Toned Memories then itself na...its on the same page as your comment in fact. Which one did I miss? (Holding my ears...).😭

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Simi...BTW not connected with this OS, but I was watching Frozen DVD yesterday with my daughter. And when that song came, with Anna singing "Do you want to build a snowman..." I kept thinking of you because of your DP. 😆


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Originally posted by: bwvianna

Res... Viji ❤️

Unres:


Viji,
A pre-Valentine's Day treat! <3
#Toska - The name of this OS and its description at the start was brilliant.! A five letter word with such depth in its meaning and you justified its usage as the title throughout the OS.

I think I have said this before - you have a way with words where you can describe the smallest of things in a beautiful and elegant manner. I was in awe with way you have spun emotions of separation between SwaSan in this OS.

#Sanskaar's feeling on separation: So aptly put that Sanskaar takes pride in the sort of person he is and therefore due to his vow to never 'jatao any haq on Swara' he continued to stay as a friend when he was burning within. Truthfully put any other human would have preferred to keep a distance from the love of their life in such a situation (for purpose of self preservation). He still continued to be a friend. Viji that whole para where Sanskaar dreams about Swara and wakes up to harsh reality and then rubs his chest right above his heart pulled my heart strings. Truly the emotions you displayed here hit the reader in me right at the heart. Fabulous work!

#Swara's emotions on separation: She really does prefer to run from her emotions doesn't she? Can't really blame her after all the crap she went through. Loved the way you have shown her inner turmoil regarding what is love, how scared that word makes her, how she doesn't want to lose Sanskaar to a fleeting feeling and destroy him and herself in the process. *sigh* It was so well written.

#Sharmishta: I love her as Swara's mom. She is perceptive when it comes to her daughter. I guess all mothers are and you have portrayed this mother daughter bond brilliantly and sensibly. Love her for making Swara understand the past and the need to let it be a beautiful memory instead of letting it crumble the present and the coming future. <3

#The Milaap! <3
I wanna give you a big bear hug for this part. Oh god! I wanted to blush and laugh out loud at the same time during the whole reunioun. My fangirl heart went all happy dancing while reading this part. Among everything I loved most - Sanskaar's territorial fingers, the whole 'Tum mere neecho ho' dialogue, the amazing kisses (most important fact was that SHE initiated the first kiss *dancing*)!!!
Viji you made this Valentine happy for me with respect to SwaSan. I don't care what shit they show in the episodes now. I got something better. ;)

Thanks a ton for this awesomeness!

Keep writing!

-V

P.S.: I love the fact you have decided to completely ignore this resurrected Kavita. I really do prefer her as a beautiful memory rather than the shit they are showing.

P.P.S.: Exams still pending. Studying underway. :)

Originally posted by: TRPS

woohoo! I like Olaf so much! :) and of course sisters , kristoff and swan the reindeer too!

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Toshi, you like that song---"Love is an Open door"? 😊 Its so lovely na---so peppy and cute.
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Originally posted by: hp_2006

Awww..😳😳 This was such a sweet valentine special OS dearest Viji 🤗
And love you ❤️ for saying that I have become a good friend to you,
thanks a lot for the dedication also😃
And now coming to the story..☺️
Poor Swasan..😭 they were pining for each other for six weeks😲😲 poor things..can't even imagine such a long separation Thankfully in the show, Swara always came back to MM for her so called missions😆😛 Otherwise, we all would have pined for seeing them together..😳

I really loved the way Sharmishta confronted her Shona, trying to make her understand that she is really missing Sanskaar..Poor Swara, I can imagine her worry that she might not reach Sanskaar's expectations compared to Kavita.. But Sharmishta being Sharmishta, knew how to boost her child's confidence level😃😃 And the result was that Swara just went off to Kolkata , to profess her endless love to her husband..
Uttara is such a sweet nanad..she knew what Swara was after..😉 and pointedly told that Sanskaar bhai is in Swasan's room..The way she told your room was so sweet😳😳
You have beautifully described Swara's fast paced heartbeats her anticipation while going to their room..❤️ Even my condition was same as Swara..😛😉
When Sanskaar came from the balcony, I had the same feelings of Swara..you write beautifully Viji..🤗 Mmmuaaah..😳
And that "tum mere neeche ho Swara" moment😆😳 was so cute..and Swara's dialogue, last time main tumhare upar thi na🤣
Loved it when you said that his fingers and hands had a brain of their own..With Swara being so close, how can he help it😛😛 she is so attractive na😳
I really loved the words Swara chose while proposing him..They were sweet and subtle, deep enough to show her heart's feelings to him beautifully..Loved those lines❤️ And Sanskaar hugged her so tightly, saying that he was afraid that she would never ever tell those words to him😭 poor Sanskaar..I just love him for his character..😊
And the kiss was..Ohh my Godd..Top of the world..☺️ Swara initiated it..That is the main thing I loved about it..And the way Sanskaar's lips took it forward into a deeper one was..❤️ blissful..
Really loved this OS yaaar..Love youuu 🤗

Originally posted by: TRPS

Hahaha. 😆 Now that you mention it, those lines are appropriate for SwaSan. Hmmm...Kristoff and Anna as Sanskaar & Swara huh? Lakshya as Hans. 😆 But who is Ragini? She can't be Elsa? 😉

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Sanskaar certainly would look cute with a beard, na? But I must say I prefer seeing him on screen either clean shaven or with just a slight stubble. 😆

"Swara raced towards her goal...let's just amend that to destiny". I was going 🤣 at this sentence from your comment. Was that because of the Hindi word equivalent of "goal"?? 😉 😆

So glad you liked the---ermmm----romance scene at the end. 😳 ☺️ I agonize quite a bit over those at times---don't want to slip too much in either direction you know. 😉 Too bland or too spicy are both a problem! So I was very happy to know you found it fierily appealing 😆 ☺️

Oh, I am sure Swara had some tantalizing dreams of her Prince Charming, I think the Toska afflicted them both too intensely, for her not to have had intense lovesickness and yearning! 😉

Your sentence about hoping Swara takes her own sweet time with her academic experiments for her thesis on "Kissing the Prince Charming of her dreams" had me in splits! "She has a complex lineup of experiments planned ahead"!! 🤣 🤣 Oh God, that had me blushing and going ROFL at the same time. 😳

Am truly touched you loved this journey from Toska to Ekstaz so very much.

Love you Loads,

---Viji