Raglak DARK FF ::'YOU ARE MINE' last chap up!december 142016 - Page 11

Originally posted by: jyothirgamaya

Omg..lucky has completely turned into an obsessive lover..i loved the stints bw swara n Laksh..i loved how he shouted on her..swara was just being protective yet Some times I feel swara deserves it ..
Can't wait to read what happens in the Baadi..
Update soonish

Originally posted by: Senoritaamor

Oh jiya this is so good. You gave laksh and Ragini a totally different attire. I love both of them. And you too🤗

Originally posted by: Bista-anzana

Omg wot an updte..Bang on !wot hv gotten into Laksh head he even didnt care for his mom ?He is soo over obessed for RaginiOr wait a sec is his ego mking hard for him to believe dat Ragini hv left him ?wow Swara nd Laksh stinct jz lubd it...Dis lines --> touching her touching her shadow..I think I should kiss her in front of the whole world and prove to you and to all that she is mine and no one can do anything abt it "" i lubd it core..The determination in dis sentences by him was sumthg soo amazing..Sooo desparate for nxt updte to see him on baddi..Nd Thnkwww soo soo much for pm...

Originally posted by: Porkalai2892

awww!! actually it s different from all other ff's.nd most importantly I luved de dark side of laksh...can't wait fr nxt part...so plzzz update soon...

Originally posted by: sandiab

Very interesting I loved it. I like this mad laksh.

Originally posted by: Shinning_AD

This was simply superb👏you did a great job jiya

I'm in love with this story

Please update soon n PM me😉

Originally posted by: Pheunli

Wow! Jiya!! This is amazing! Laksh is totally insane..& i m liking every bit about it.

Update soon dear. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

Originally posted by: ammu92

Omg.. This was amazing 😛 I mean a totally different character of laksh from show..
Haha 😆 laksh.. What happened to him?
You know I was getting a feeling like I was reading a gangster story 🤣
Plz Plz do continue.. I loved it a lot.. 👏

Originally posted by: 6jeslin

Hi new to this forum...love d way laksh spoke ...seems to be intresting do continue sooon...