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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rbb1

Omg this is I had a feeling the clients would be Laksh and Sanskar but didn't think Ragini would say she is married to Raj.

Please post the next part soon I can't wait to see Raj's reaction and how the meeting goes


Surprise 😛😛 Lool I'm glad that you don't see this turn of event 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Berlin


Surprise 😛😛 Lool I'm glad that you don't see this turn of event 😆

i know lol it was surprising
but cant wait to see their reaction, i wonder what Raj will say he will probably be angry at her lol
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Can't wait for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 12

Ragini- Hello everyone, I'm sorry for the late. Let me introduce myself, Ragini Raichand, wife of Raj Raichand.

Everyone was shocked, Laksh was angry at Ragini, and it was clearly visible on his face. Raj was agape and stand up. Before he could tell something, Ragini spoke up

Ragini- Meet my husband Raj Raichand
Laksh who was fuming to see Ragini touching another man also spoke up

Laksh- May I know when you married?

Ragini- I think it's none of your business Mr Laksh MAHESWARI

Laksh- It is because I like to know the person with whom I will deal it. If you don't want to answer me, I will cancel the deal

Ragini being a bit arrogant- As you wish Mr MAHESWARI. You are not the only one who want to deal with us. If you cancel the deal you have to pay half of the amount, this our clause. So are you ready to lost a lot of money?
If you have a relevant question you can ask it and I will answer with pleasure, but my private life is not your business.

Laksh was fuming, Sanskar was proud of Ragini, now she is more confident. Sanskar was smiling at her. Amrith understand Ragini's situation, but Raj is confused. He don't understand why Ragini lied to the client.

Ragini- We can proceed with the presentation?
Everyone nod and she start with her presentation. Once she finished, Amrith spoke up and explain the conditions, and every detail. While Raj give a brillant presentation too on the product. Ragini was amazed to see Raj working.
Once they finished with the detail, Ragini had a phone call and take Raj with her. Before going she tell

Ragini- I'm sorry but we have to go because our children are sick.

Amrith- Kya? Veer and Kajal?
Ragini has tears in her eyes and nod. Raj take Ragini and Amrith finish the meeting. Laksh ask Amrith some question about Ragini

Laksh- I'm sorry Mr Raichand, but since when you know Ragini?

Amrith- Ragini? my daughter? Do you know her?

Laksh- Yes I know her

Amrith- Oh maybe you are her past.

Laksh- her past?

Amrith- Yes her past, because she told me that she have some relative in India but don't speak with them.

Laksh- Oh I see, but I 'm not her past, I'm still her present

Amrith- I'm sorry, I will be glad to speak to you about Ragini, but for now I have to go, my grand children were sick. Nice meeting you Mr MAHESWARI.

Amrith go to his mansion, Sanskar and Laksh remain at the meeting room

Sanskar- I think you are late

Laksh- No I'm not late, I don't believe what she said. Nahi yeh namumkin hai. She can't be to someone else.

Sanskar- I think you are deef, she married now and plus a mother. You lost her Laksh.

Laksh- No this can't happened. I won't let this happened too. She is mine and only mine.

Just then Laksh phone ring and he answer quickly.

Voice- Hi Mr Laksh Maheswari, you don't call me theses day, how mean! How are you?

Laksh- Listen Pari, I'm not in mood to talk with you so stop being stubborn when I want to call you I will.

Pari smile and said- If I have to wait for you and your love, I will have to wait all my life. Be ready to be my husband she laugh and then cut the call.

At RM ( Ragini mansion)

Ragini scream at Maria

Ragini- Maria how could you let my children falling sick? You just begin today and they are not well?

Maria- Ma'am I'm sorry

Ragini- What sorry?

Raj- Ragini calm down, we will call the doctor

Ragini- What? because you don't call the doctor yet? Oh God!!!

Voice behind- You don't have to scream at her, it's not her fault I tell her to tell you that

Ragini turn around and was happy- Dadi maa
She hug dadi and then tell- Dadi you know I don't like when you lied to me like this. (Turning to Maria) Maria I'm sorry, I screamed at you, I'm very sorry.

Maria- No it's ok Ma'am I know I shouldn't lie to you but your dadi is very persuasive.

Ragini smile- I know.
Then the all family came and Ragini was happy.

Radha- Ragini I want to see my old friend can you please come with me?

Ragini- Of course ma

Radha- Then we will go now, I have informed her that I will be coming. Pari and Yamini will come with us too

Ragini- Ok

I hope you like this chapter
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Posted: 9 years ago
Really nice update thank you for posting it I wish it was longer can't wait for the next part
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Chapter 13

Ragini goes to her room, and change. Raj enter the room after without knocking. Ragini know why he came.

Ragini- How dare you to enter in my room without knocking.

Raj- Oh I'm sorry but I'm your husband na? So I can enter in the room where my wife is.

Ragini- I'm not your wife

Raj- Why you lied with client?

Ragini- I have my personal reason

Raj- Oh that's means he is your ex-husband?

Ragini don't speak but Raj tell- Ragini I consider you like my friend

Ragini smile sarcastically- Friends? Are you believing this lie?

Raj- I know I'm bit rude, but circumstance make me like this. I cannot let anyone be near because I'm afraid to lose them.

Ragini- You should forget your ex-wife now? She was not mean for you.

Raj- I know, but like you know you cannot forget your first love. I'm here to tell you to not do what I have done. Don't be away from your family, I know how it feel. Don't mix professional and personal life.

Ragini- Thank you. You are not akroo at all

Raj- Akroo?

Ragini- Haan, you seems nice, but I won't get used because maybe tomorrow you will burst on me.

Raj- I will try not to. So I guess right? the client was your first husband?

Ragini- Ya you guess right, but I want you to keep this for you. I don't want him to know that I'm not married to you.

Raj- Alright, I will be by your side

Ragini- Thank you, so Friends?

Raj- Yes friend. You know from the first day I saw you, you make me remember my choti maa. You are like her, your smile, anger, sadness.

Ragini- Really? Where is your choti ma?

Raj- In fact she is my maasi, dad sister. When I was young I was used to be with her, but then she married. You know Ragini we lived in India before, but Choti meet with an accident, and fall in coma then we goes to England, to treat her. Till today she is always in coma, whenever I come to England, I come to see her. She is like my mom and I love her so much. She give me so much love, without any return. She is like you with my children.

Ragini- Oh So she is still in Coma?

Raj- Yes

Radha call her and she tell- Yes maa coming ( turning to Raj) I will go with mom, you go and play with kids. They missed you so much, it's time for you to be forgiven by them, and It will a tough things.

Raj nod and they go out.

Radha- Ragini can we go?

Ragini- Yes ma, I will call driver

Radha- That's not need

Ragini- Why ma?

Radha- Because she is our neighbor

Ragini think- Oh no, please bagwan I hope it's not Maheswari.

Radha- Beta where are you lost? Shall we go?

Ragini just nod. Pari was smiling like an idiot so Ragini ask her

Ragini- May I know why my bestie is smiling like this?

Pari- Because you will meet someone

Ragini- Oh that's means, the person whose name was write on the card? What his name? I didn't read it, and forgot to read after.

Pari- I know Rags you don't read it.

Ragini- Oh I will see who is a bit mad to marry a girl like you

Pari- Rags! You will be surprise to see him. He is very handsome, a bit rude.

Ragini- Ohoh someone is blushing
They goes in Maheswari mansion, and Radha was very happy. Ragini was shocked, and Pari is smile.They entered in the mansion, and AP smile seeing her best friend here, but then she is also surprised to see Ragini and Pari together.

AP- Pari? Ragini?

Pari- Haan ma

Ragini/Radha- Ma?

Pari- RAgini this is where my love live. But how do you know her?

Ragini is tensed but then tell the truth: Haan I know her because she was my MIL.

Pari- Don't tell me that Laksh is the one who ditched you? Yes?

Ragini- He don't ditched me, I divorced him. But why are you reaction like this, like Laksh and you is engaged

Voice- Not now, but soon to be
Ragini turn around and then saw Sanskar and Laksh coming down. Ragini try to be normal, but when she saw him, she recall her past, her moment with her, and then his confession.

Pari- Not soon Mr Maheswari, never I will marry you. I cannot do that to my best friend, I cannot marry a man who cant respect a woman, and play with her feeling not one but many times.
Pari goes out being angry. Ragini follow her, Radha and AP was tensed.

So What do you think of the chapter?
Edited by Berlin - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Really nice update OMG you cannot stop there please post the next part soon

Aww Raj and Ragini became friends that's nice I like how she said he will her angry at her next day and he says I will try not to

Ragini telling him to play with the kids is sweet I'm sure she will help the kids get close to their dad

Pari is such a good friends she went because she doesn't want to marry someone who betrayed her friend that's really nice

Thank you for the brilliant update please let the next part ASAP and make it long
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thank you :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rbb1


Really nice update OMG you cannot stop there please post the next part soon

Aww Raj and Ragini became friends that's nice I like how she said he will her angry at her next day and he says I will try not to

Ragini telling him to play with the kids is sweet I'm sure she will help the kids get close to their dad

Pari is such a good friends she went because she doesn't want to marry someone who betrayed her friend that's really nice

Thank you for the brilliant update please let the next part ASAP and make it long


Thank you :) You have to wait because you will see some twist
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Posted: 9 years ago
Can't wait I'm sure it will be great

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