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soumi gupta

@soumi93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: manisha.8148
soumi i like it

teri haq wali bahn ki maa ki bahn b jaag rhi hogi😆😆😆

my fav one...too

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soumi gupta

@soumi93

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: princess_tara
Awesome

😊

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Tapathi

@Tapathi

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#123

soumi...😊kya batao iss os ka...wow...! iam completely speechless... oh my god...! what a wonderfull scene you create dbtw them yaar...it is really very romantic...😛 i cant say more...simply suberb dear...👏

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Komal

@teribts7

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#124

awesome update loved the whole story

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BB_CallmeC

@BB_CallmeC

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#125

This is awesome Soumi.

I read it in one go!! Its so so cute and romantic..

Loved the angry Swara and naughty Sanskaar.. trying to be Veeru of Sholay..

Cute one

Keep writing more

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Fariza

@Fariiiii

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#126

Superb final part of this awesome OS Soumi, really well written 🤗

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soumi gupta

@soumi93

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: .IamShonali.
This is awesome Soumi.
I read it in one go!! Its so so cute and romantic..
Loved the angry Swara and naughty Sanskaar.. trying to be Veeru of Sholay..
Cute one
Keep writing more

hi shonali...thnx fr cmmnting...actually maasi ko dekhke i was thinking of sholay sequence only...

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Sree

@Sree8410

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#128

Soumi loved the climax dear. No other perfect way to end this beautiful story.

God bless your talent..

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soumi gupta

@soumi93

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: Sree8410
Soumi loved the climax dear. No other perfect way to end this beautiful story.
God bless your talent..

Thanx sree bt right now i'm so upset for alu... wanna talk to her asap.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#130

Very nice Soumi. It was such a nice mix on intense romance and humor too. Loved the wry jokes Sanskaar cracked about maasi and her "Jiji khush nahi hai" jaap! And the way he explained that Maasi must be awake now, using the late night call and skype rates to talk to her Jiji!! 😆

The way he explained to Swara why he drank was also so very cute. Intense and romantic, and so very Sanskaar!! Acha tho in the end, our Sanskaar Babu became somewhat a-sanskaari! Thank God!! Even Swara was happy with that!! 😛 😳

Do write more. I really liked this 4S, and thanks for the PM.

Love,

---Viji

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